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Twilight is actualy chrysalis, isn't she?![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
1883072 In his eyes? Probably.![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
Write all the angst!!
Can't wait for the next chapter and where this will go.
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No she must be! Soren can't be wrong. Right?
Shit's about to get real...
Soren you poor fool.![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
Well, this can either end badly, or very badly. Kind of surprised the Cakes weren't more... well, shocked, that Soren could'a saved Pound.
It would also seem that things are starting to wrap up.
You're making me hate all the ponies I've come to love... hate them really badly...
1883196 I can't tell if that means I'm doing something right, or wrong.![:duck:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/duck.png)
Unicorn be crazy.
With the way that this story has progressed, I hope that the pony race becomes extinct by the end. Maybe Soren could somehow nuke the moon and the shrapnel combusts as it enters the Equestrian atmosphere, coating the world in a massive ash cloud that Celestia's sun can never hope to pierce.
Or maybe Soren will break Lyra's horn off of his head to stop the mind overwrite, and stab Twilight through the heart with it.
Really, though. This story has taken me to a very dark place.
Soren's just going to have a total collapsing breakdown soon, isn't he.
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Not just wrap up... WINTER WRAP UP
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but wait... what if he's right?
DUN DUN DUNNNNNN
I'm rooting for an emotional breakdown in the next chapter. Don't let me down!
This is incredibly concerning. Like, seriously. And this was such a fun, vaguely cheery story at the beginning! Now it's just like:
DOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM.
so how long are we going to have to wait for the next chapter, cause I know that we want to read what happens next
1883609 I'll probably get a start on it tomorrow, and if all goes as planned, it should be out Thursday at the latest.
wait...did Soren gouge out his eyes??
1883854 Nah. He's only bloodied himself in order to give the appearance of having had a terrible eye-rending accident.
I guess I understand the need for the permanent petrification, even if it seems odd that Celestia can't undo it. If not the cockatrice then some other method of doing away with the filly (timberwolves would have been far too horrible to read about). The Cake's reaction to his admitting the truth of how he could have saved their son if not for Twilight only proves how different the cultures are. He's loosing his mind...
And this duel seems an increasingly Bad Idea(tm). Soren is going to get himself hurt or worse. Even using that flash-bang trick with the light amplification gem, Twilight is still going to wipe the walls with him.
p.s. Happy New Year! (Just minutes to go)
Just the smallest of quirks here...
I'm not 100% certain, but I believe it might be worthwhile to change it to "thought on my mind, barring one".![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Each time I read it the first thing coming to my mind was "why has Soren nicknamed his brain 'bar one'?"
Other than that, happy to see another great chapter!
1884201 Rather than muss about with the semantics of bar/barring, I simply switched it up with save. Meets the purpose, nothing is lost.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Oho,
I hadn't thought of that, good fix there. ![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
On an off note, are you a military brony? If so, then that makes far too many of us on this site watching each other without ever getting together in full-force...
1884329 Nah. Military-brat, but not a member of the armed forces.
1883560 It's becoming one of those 'death-spiral' stories.
I should mention that I really dislike those. They start piling on tragedies and misunderstandings to the point of ridiculousness.
Gaddangit.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
all the hate on cliffhangers, yo
Yay update!!!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Dis is gonna be good!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
1884552 I agree, I do hope this doesnt get drawn out too much more.
1883196 Soren has lost most of his grip on reality. Add in the fact that most of the story is from Soren's prospective and you have a seriously skewed opinion. In the end Twilight is feeling overwhelmed and guilty as hell, yet is the only one who has any hope of fixing things. Soren is going insane and knows it, but cant actually SEE it. As for the town itself? Ponyville is probably aware of Soren's general problem, and Soren currently looks like an unwashed bum with bloody bandages slapped on. Questioning Soren's credibility and intentions is understandable when you look and act like a raving lunatic
Twilight is some sort of changeling, magical evil clone, Mirror pool gone crazy, robot, SOMETHING, GODAMMIT!![:twilightangry2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightangry2.png)
These cliffhangers will be the end of me... or my computer screen.![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
I'm gonna be honest with you, I think Soren's going a little mad.
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I believe we are past "a little mad". Soren feels guilty about Pound's death, but he's letting that guilt manipulate him into a irrational matter; combine that with the whole "overwrite issue" and he's two steps from a complete mental breakdown.
TLDR: He's going "bug-nuts".
poor sorren going batfuck insane is not fun
This chapter was so hard to read and it made me so sad I just wanted to sake him and yell clam the fuck down and see damm reason you need help plese just stop this![:fluttershyouch:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershyouch.png)
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Undoubtedly the worst paragraph of the story.
5082175 I agree. Yeah, I think I get what the author is going for here. But it's not done very well at all.
Also Soren's whole "cover up my eyes" shit is cringe-worthy.
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Agreed. Mourning is one thing, but common logic states that if your son died a preventable death, you will want justice. It's as if Mrs. Cake doesn't love Pound, top level-headed in borderline sociopathic, or fanatically believing in Twilight.
"comedy"