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WELL.
The ending could have been a bit smoother, but everything else was rather terrifying. Application of magic was surprisingly well done, but I guess panic brings the best out in Soren.
Damn, it's going to be odd when he gets sent back....
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I have an idea for a twist ending: Soren keeps his (Lyra's) magic when he turns human, while Lyra becomes unable to use said magic.
If this happens, I reserve the right to say "CALLED IT"
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Really BAD plan.
Fluttershy, making him eat soap does not help his cause. Didn't you listen to the song at all?
Anyway I saw that meta logic being used there. Sneaky.
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I'm with ShadowBro on this one. Taking bets on an ending like that is going to result in a very empty pocket.
I've got this all roughly plotted out in my mind, and what you've suggested is nowhere near where I'm going with this. There are some not so subtle clues being thrown out a lot lately. They tell half the tale.
1596551 Which meta logic?
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Is my bet on this fic being Soren's writings-down in that notebook of his anywhere near accurate?
1596559 I bet that I can tell you exactly where this story is going and what it is about.....![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
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Its about ponies
1596574 Nope. Well... Kinda. One of the things that he wrote down IS an approximation of everything that happened to that point. It isn't the fic that he wrote though.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Not bad...not bad. Very well done. Now...Good way to avoid the whole Scootaloo thing also...Also, How did Applebloom build a Trebuchet?
1596621 The better question is how long it took them to construct it unnoticed. Apple Bloom has always seemed the capable sort in the show, seeming to have some technical knowledge [or that might just be the fandom skewing my interpretation of certain things she's done], and she is a strong earth pony filly. As long as she understood the principals of the design, there's no reason she couldn't construct one, even if it wasn't full-sized.
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You know...I'm half thinking now that Big Mac gives them money and supplies to let them do these things. Just so he kind get some kind of entertainment. Just for the hell of it.
Shit, is Soren's body turning into a pony now?![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
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I was curious some chapters ago if you were actually going for foreshadowing or were just doing character development that seemed like foreshadowing, and now it seems to be the case of the former. For that, you have my esteem, as very few fanfiction authors know how to properly use foreshadowing to set up plot twists before they occur.
Well done~![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
I thought Soren's body was a male.![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
>> spritefan10 his body got r63'd because Lyra couldn't handle male hormones
1597107 well good sire IT was male till Lyra(in his body) couldn't handle the testosterone and and kinda wanted Octavia A little to much... to prevent gelding twilight turned Sorens body to female to prevent such complications
1596683 everyone in Ponyville seems a little ignorant if you ask me, also i was go for a while(not really just reading a 634k story i downloaded) but i have to say its good to be back(gone about a week)
Sweetie Belle, We are going to sit here and you are going to sing this ballad until you get your cutie mark and then we can forget this CMC nonsense for once and for all.
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I don't know what the reason is, but I am 101% shure that that's not it.
1597239 Ignorant as to just what the Crusaders can get up to? Or am I missing something?
1597107![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
To be more accurate, it was BON BON that had a little fun with Lyra in Soren's body. And then she was threatened with that;gelding, so she had to magically alter her gender in order to not completely ruin Soren's day when he gets his body back.
1598441 Not quite. Re-read that chapter.
Drunken Lyra got too frisky with an old flame who didn't much appreciate the advances. Due to the rather biased nature of my Equestria's justice system when it comes to sexual offenses, Lyra would have faced having Soren's body gelded once word got to the guards. It was only because Lyra went to Twilight about the situation that the guards were called off as long as Soren's body was made female for the remainder of the duration of the switch.
1598486![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
...I hope that doesn't mean Soren WILL have that happen once he switches.
1598504 Nah.
I'm not that cruel.I'm crueler than that.1598514![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Ah, very well then.
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More cruel?! So you're gonna' have Soren-in-Lyra gradually morph in to a stallion (like Lyra-in-Soren's morphing in to a pony) and then geld Lyra's body after they make the switch back (which will make it Lyra-in-stallion-Lyra and Soren-in-female-Soren)?! You are one cruel m-f-r, my good sir.
1598632 What? No. I have something far different in mind.
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This is a good example of conflict, but what I hate about most writers is that they forget some moments in their story that were supposed to lead up to something good, reason being is that one sentence can throw off a whole story and if somebody didn't read that sentence (let's hope it wasn't the author
) then they wouldn't be able to keep track of the story. Let's see how this plays, I hope he goes along with the rising action for this piece of conflict, it may lead on to even more conflict when Soren returns to his body (>'even more' is implying it being the body being female at the moment and possibly not going to be able to change back to a male body or Soren possibly being gelded IF he returns to a male body).
TL;DR
I hope this conflict is true.
1596559![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
You referenced the Elder Scrolls, this pleases me.
1599279 You mean the Julianos reference in Chapter 2?
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Well that and the bit about the houses.
1599790 Oh, right. Derp.
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I'm still half convinced we're gonna get to the switch back mark, and the switch won't happen, probably due to shenanigans as a result of the botched original spell.
>>>Honestly, they remind me of something out of an Elder Scrolls game what with their thatched roofs and timber frames.>>>
Or, Trogdor the Burninator. "Burninate the villagers in their thatched-roof huts!"
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So is the road to Heaven
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I think, when they turn him back, he shouldnt have a penis.
What? dont look at me like that!
1602300 As an author with a plan and a shit-eating grin, I have absolutely no comment. Only that your comment is far off the mark.
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HE'LL HAVE TWO???
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Darn! It would make for a good chapter, though
1602984 No. He have have ALL the penises!
Physics.![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
You know, I wonder if Lyra read Background Pony when she discovered pony fanfiction. I hope not.
Also, giving Soren all the penises is probably a quick trip to a bathroom resulting in death by dehydration.
INCEPTION![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
Oh, and pennies and dimes.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
This just keeps getting better and better I loved it all so much thank goodness Soren was able to save I can't wait to see what happens next![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
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