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Awesome! Love this new story, I'm super excited about it! Another human/pony fanfics from you? BRING IT ON! But...
"I look at Dom just as she is moving to join Dad."
Dom?
Other than that, awesome job. And first comment, woohoo!
:3
THIS IS THE. BEST. POSSIBLE. THING!
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Dom from Gears 3 decided to stop in for a sentence.
A voice calls from the other side of the bathroom door. “Soren, don't forget we're going into town today. We need to pick up groceries for this afternoon.”
SOREN!??! What the hell!? I want that for a name !!!
can you imagine going to TROT CON or another pony convention with that body you would be like
i better get some bodyguards and watch my own back, i cant even fathem what would happen but i would do it anyway just to see the looks on there faces
Um... Well, it's a good idea, and this thing definitely looks promising, but a quick note - Soren's parents seem a little... Less surprised than I think is realistic. Still, carry on!
I like this story so far. I might take becoming Lyra better if it happened to me, but then again maybe not. I wouldn't really know how I'd react until it happened and it will probably never happen.
Could have elaborated a bit on the parents, they seemed a bit too quick to accept. But otherwise, this is a great start. Reading further... i.imgur.com/C9kC7.png
1329312 Agreed. I feel the sense of realism seems to be rather underrated here. But nonetheless, I'm enraptured by the new idea.
This story is really... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
compared to displaced.
1. the reactions were awkward and completely false
2. Fuk dat bitch noone keeps me from meat pony body or not...
plus I would probably be like "Ya like chicken?" dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png
3. Ermagherd hes a pony and hes not enjoying it dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png
4. Once again teh reactions were FUCKING ILLOGICAL dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
And dat is my two bits
All I can think of now.
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Finally got around to reading! I shall comment as I find amusing things in each chapter.
Chapter 1: How the exchange between pony and human REALLY went down!
Lyra: Twilight is going to use this totally experimental and dangerous spell on us to let us trade places! What could possibly go wrong?
Soren: Yeah, I guess... wait a tic, don't most fanfics start with Twilight messing up a... (BANG!!!) Aw god... what the... yep, the spell misfired and now I've become a pony mare. Guess that means this is a troll fic. God damn authors... oh well, might as well make the best of it. (clop clop clop clop)
Lyra suddenly feels a great disturbance in the farce... "WHAT THE BUCK ARE YOU DOING WITH MY BODY OVER THERE!?!?"
God dammit! You could kill us all! Duck it, I'm calling the CDC.
Wow. Everybody took this really well.
nice
"We're sorry, Soren can't come to the reunion. Turns out he's... *Sunglasses* a little hoarse."
YEEEEAAAAAAAAAA-
I wouldn't think it would be too far-fetched to think that, in a stressful situation, some people will lock themselves down into automatic mode, focusing on the here and now and getting the job done, shoving all those numb feelings of disbelief away. Of course, those types of people also have the most interesting mental breakdowns when the shock wears off.
1028378 THAT WOULD CAUSE THE BIGGEST FANDOM IN THE WORLD TO COME AFTER YOU. THERE ISN'T ENOUGH BODYGUARDS FOR THAT!
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My son doesn't usually turn into a pony with a vagina... but when he does, it's not really a big deal.
Well, this story has my attention. I don't think Lyra intended to have the computers explode though. She probably wanted to keep contact so she knew what to do in Soren's body.
Man, his parents sure took things well.
In defence to his parents, how else would they have been able to react? Doing nonsense like screaming incomprehensibly wouldn't improve anything.
I sigh and blindly grope about the headboard for my cell phone. the first paragraph an 34 more chapters its going to be a long night
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You clever bastard. Upvoting that comment for cleverness.
Glad I finally got around to reading this, I needed a little HiE this week. Great so far, as soon as Lyra said "I just have to try out this transdimensional spell" I knew he was in trouble.
The first chapter alone is favorite worthy.
I normally avoid stories above 35k words, but i will try my best to give this a good read. It just seems so interesting...
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2401400i know you from somwhere…
Also, FOR ONCE ITS NOT TWILIGHTS FAULT
Dammit Lyra! Don't fuck with transdimentional magicks
I like it so far you sound always read before you do it even if you think it's a joke now look at what happens when you don't read between the lines or look before you leep it was awesome so far and can't wait to see what happens next
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No, Twilight accepted a bribe from Lyra in exchange for access to the Starswirl the Bearded wing. With, y'know, all the reality-warping spells in it.
Totally Twilight's fault.
Aaaand, acceptance. The wonderful world of Fan-Fiction folks!
Just cause I know some parents are really acceptable and what not XP but eeeyy stories stories stories.
I think they might have taken that a little too well.
Well..... that happened....
You have my attention!
Not a bad start, but everyone's way too accepting. I've seen fics that get past the panic stage quickly, but this just skips it completely. It definitely breaks suspension of disbelief, but I'll keep reading for now.
You know, had I not begun with the second sequel to this, and backtracked to find the source material clearly being referenced, I probably would have discarded this as just another terrible HIE self insert, like the countless others I saw back in my early days as a fanfiction reviewer.
I am pleased to say that this did not immediately bore me, and the relatability of Soren's routine kept me reading right up to the interesting part, which of course stood on its own legs. Nicely done. You clearly put a lot of time into this, and I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Huh a transdimentional body swap spell interesting
And thus began his slow descent into madness.
“Fuck it. I'll do it tomorrow.” Said God at the first day.
And that's why it took seven days to create the world.
Shit man, RIP computer