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Um, excuse me. I'm trying to go to bed here.
Edit:
I suppose there's no use in creating another comment—especially considering this comment's particular... placement. I'm slightly disappointed it's shorter than normal, but that's to be expected. I'm especially happy to see that Soren is finally 'fully' lucid—as lucid someone would get coming out of narcotics. All of the instability in the last few chapters was getting a little bit overbearing.
Bedtime, now.
1912607 No sleep for you.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 2/5
So Lyra is now a grey pegasus huh? I thought she would turn back into herself which would leave two Lyra's.
Well, lets see what happens then.
You say that there won't be another psychotic episode, but the dude is still stuck in another pony's body.
Nuff said.
Wait a sec... I thought her colors were a yellow body and grey wings, not the other way around? Irregardless, she's turned into a filly?!
To channel Ricky Ricardo, "You gots some 'splainin to do, Lucy!"
At least he's not going through a full mental breakdown anymore, that was just getting worse and worse.
(And now that I think back to a comment I made earlier, I see it's starting to happen. Ack, I hope I didn't spoil the plotline by blurting out what's going to happen to him)
1912774 Where'd you get a yellow bod from any of that?
Yay, now she's gonna be a mare forever no matter what happens!
As sadistic as it is, if Lyra's body is in fact pregnant now, it'd be very amusing if Soren was the one who had to put up with it.
I still say they gave up too easily on trying to return Pound to normal.
Magic is magic. If it can be undone at all, a way can be found to do so.
It's just a matter of finding the right tone and flavor.
soren the ability to swear in one's native language is very important heres how to spell the five biggest
1. eff-U-cE-kA (pronounced fu [as in fun] k [as in duck]
2. ess-Ach-I-tE (pronounced shh-it)
3. dE-A-em-bE (pronounced da [as in dad] m)
4. A-ess-ess (pronounced ah-sss)
5. Ach-E-el-el (pronounced hel [as in hello]
yikes seeing this chapter and reading back i see just how much Soren was like though i doubt anyone else wouldve been able to take things much better.......
and umm a few quick question to seven fates the author if you dont mind. is pound cake really dead? im like hoping or thinking that pound cake might be able to be saved and that the dead cockatrice was a different one that was coincidentantly nearby.
oh and how did Soren correctly guess what ummm "Lyra" or he would end up looking like a pony?
i have other questions but i have a feeling they will be answered in future chapters love your workand hope you keep going!
1913036 you misspelled #3...
1913359 damb damn dam? ive known english all my life and its still confusing
1913087 once agen cross story cockatrice biology http://www.fimfiction.net/story/43513/6/my-little-glados/wait-glados-did-what if the auther wants POWND CAKE CAN BE SAVED
WEELLLLLL THEN....
Oh dear.
Awaiting further releases.
I still want somepony to die.
Holy crap! didnt think i would be first.
either way, this chapter was good, if a little mellow. Keep up the good work
1913803You first? Hah. You're about 5 hours too late.
And Seven. Did you just say that Lyra is now in a filly's body? If so, then Sorren is now going to be a filly. Lyra is going to be happy.
1913890Guess i forgot to refresh
1912627 same here and i gotta work tonight... which now means sleep, shower, eat, work...then sleep shower scho(eat)ol (small entertainment) sleep shower work repeat till thursday YAY
thanks for the new chapter seven
"WHAT" 32 chapter for just 7 days?! nice that really takes something to draw out that amount of time and not have it be boring
Soren is cray
1913890 I suppose the use of the word filly requires some explanation. When he sees the pony his body has become, it's not quite a fully grown mare, hence the diminutive, but not quite a foal, hence "When did I meet this adolescent filly?"
So let me see if I got all of this. Soren had a brief psychotic disorder brought on by ridiculous amounts of stress and triggered by twilights actions. The trigger caused soren to be convinced that twilight was not the real twilight and his brain hallucinated evidence that she was a changeling to help him prove it to himself.
Honestly I'm surprised he lasted this long. Between thinking he got raped, slowly becoming someone else, being in another body, repeated brain trauma, traveling to a different dimension, and the actuall trigger event; I'd say he was doing pretty good.
I'll let you fix that one yourself.
1914984
Or not. I just thought it was a typo.
1914990 Actually, you DID find a typo there. Just didn't bold the right word. If you hadn't pointed that out, I might not have noticed I simply wrote she instead of she's. Even when I pre-read I still miss things it seems.
1915077
I guess that's life.
So. Soren is now a girl. I for one, can only to the wonderful mental horror about to commence.
Twilight must die. Don't you dare forget, Soren. Twilight. Must. Die.
1914393So he's not going to be stuck as a filly? But that would make Lyra so happy, having a child without having to get pregnant or adopt.
So by filly, you mean "girl", basically. That makes more sense.
What doesn't, though, is Soren's mind. Seriously. He's pretty fucked up right now. I can actually imagine that this is probably what it's like suddenly retaining your (worst) memories all at once after amnesia. 'Course, there's no real world equivalent to this, really, because he's literally dealing with someone else's actual memories and a lapse in his own, equally real memories. I can't even begin to imagine how horrifying that would be.
1915581 Think teenage size, not Scootaloo. Probably the midpoint between Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash might be a good indicator of size.
1915897 I suck at reading the tones of some comments. I have no idea whether you're praising the way I'm writing his state of mind or admonishing how I'm dealing with it.
1916066
Nah, you're doing good.
I was saying that I totally understand the fact that he's totally and utterly mind-fucked right now; both Soren's situation as well as the plot of the story itself have been really turbulent the last few chapters, culminating in that massive kick at the end of the last one. Not to mention the underlying problem of his being turned into someone else while someone else turns into him, who turns into someone similar, and then someone completely different that is technically him, and yet is not because he is not him.
*deep breath*
*exhale*
Understandably, it's hard to take in at once.
1916066You saying that's what the body looks like now or what it'll look like when he gets it back?
1916575 Both.
Sweet, I think. Is Lyra gonna adopt him? Know what, don't answer. I'll find out eventually.
Bravo.
I'm still rooting for Psycho-demon-in-head-monster, to be entirely honest. I think Soren didn't give it a good shake, just fearing it for being a psycho-demon in his head. They make good head-mates, if you can get along with them.
Good on Soren, though. With the aid of powerful drugs, I'd say he's taking the whole "trying to kill Twilight" thing pretty well. Twilight is too, in all fairness to her.
Well, this next chapter will be... rather awkward. (But needed) Can't have any healing without confrontation of the problems.
Moar.
Yay update!!!
Yeah amnesia's really annoying he'll get through it though!
Here I thought when I first read this it was going to be some crappy self insert that would be funny but written kind of... retarded. Now I'm thinking "how is this not in the feature box?" Have this pic for writing so well (good?)4chandata.org/images/threads/90858_Bucket%20equipped%20defense%20plus%202.jpg
1918853 Well, back when this story was first posted, there were only three slots in the feature box for new fics. Had this been posted now instead of back then, it very well would have made an appearance near the bottom of the new fics. Now I can only content myself with the Feature Box's three slots for updated fics.
Why should he heal?
I loved it all and I'm happy that he can finally come to grips to the truth