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Dun.
Dun.
DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN.
Shit gets real. er. Realer. This is kinda turning into a downward spiraling shitstorm.
oh gdi, I knew that Twilight had something to do with Soren getting transported back to Ponyville even though it was Lyra who wanted it put on him, and because Twilight didn't trust Soren, Pound Cake was turned to stone.
Good job Twilight, good fucking job
Another? Squee!
whoa
Ouch, the emotions in this chapter.
1753949 Too much feels?
Is it just me, or was Twilight more sympathetic in the earlier chapters? Did she simply stop trusting him after the drinking game? changelings?!? Or am i just reading too much into something that's not there?
Woah man! Very dramatic chapter! And Twilight really sounds like a huge bitch right now.
The first thing I thought of when I saw the title was this song:
That aside, Soren just can't catch a break, can he?
That was sad so sad. I-i can't find right words for how i feel.
I like where this going.
1754006 The song I had in mind when I named the chapter was actually Dokken's 'Breaking the Chains'.
Through the window, the classic bail-out maneuver
woah.
random adventure time clip gooooo?
The feelings of fury fuel my firey furnace of freedoms feast.
1754089 It's classic because you not only get out, but you also can cause some property damage while you're at it . Just be sure you're close enough to the ground when you leave.
Wow. I didn't expect this chapter to go in that direction at all.
I'm feeling worse and worse for Soren as this story goes along...
Great job Twilight. Because of the spell Pound Cake is now stone.
Well, shit.
wat...? ummmm i cant wait for this next update to see where this leads... pound cake dead? twilight turning emotionless? and soren running? not that he can go far apparently while being hexed...
i kinda actually hope something will happen to Soren that will snap twilight back from whatever is wrong with her mind..... twilight shouldnt be so afraid of Soren... right? gah hopefully this next update will come quick, im hoping that your recent fast update streak doesnt stop now of all times
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It's on my bucket list as a way of escaping from that "does this dress make me look fat" question from a girlfriend. I have a parachute in case any concerns related to excessive height
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Maybe, I mean it is really rough knowing the person who is supposed to save you doesn't trust you at all. At this point Soren is just going to explode and I fear the aftermath.
Twi, you bucked up.
I like how nopony has considered the fact that Twilight might be acting so cold and emotionless right there because she is in shock.
Wait, wait, wait. I just thought of something. Why didn't they just send Sorens human body back to earth? Then it would have stopped changing and they could have just come get it back once they figured out a cure....
Also, Twilight acted like a bitch.
So did Soren.
Well, Sorien in crisis of existance and he is in shithole where her friends messes so badly that caused the "death" of Pound Cake.
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WHAT THE FUCK?!!
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Congratulations, you've got people emotionally identifying with the protagonist. Soren thinks she's being a heartless bitch, so she's a heartless bitch.
1754425 Sounds like I'm doing something right then.
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I can see that point however at the same time, she immediately dismissed Soren saying that he saw a foal run into the Everfree Forest, because she pretty much doesn't trust him when she brought him to Equestria to help him and now she's treating him like he's a worse threat than Nightmare Moon or Discord.
Her treating him as a threat and basically dismissing anything he says is doing the exact opposite and I think will slowly turn him into a real threat, maybe not to Equestria, but to Lyra's body, he can do what he wants with it remember, even with magic, unless someone is around him 24/7 he can do something really drastic and cause problems.
If Twilight would've listened to Soren instead of dismissing him right away Pound Cake wouldn't be petrified permanently, and her attitude when she said
that immediately tells me that she thinks that she's better than anypony else and automatically isn't at fault for Pound Cake's petrification.
Her saying that
also shows how much she really cares, that attitude caused the now situation with Pound Cake, which in my opinion puts her up in the evil bracket with Nightmare Moon, Discord and Sombra
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Implying he didn't just leap out a second story window.
I can see what you mean about Twilight saying 'I'm Twilight Sparkle blah blah protege,' but don't forget that she was just backhandedly accused of not being Twilight beforehand.
Obviously, Soren actually is having psychotic hallucinations.
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also she wasn't in shock when Soren was telling her that he saw a foal go into the Everfree, she just turns around and tells him that he isn't thinking right due to his situation
pony meet cockitrace call the stare master flutters dos her thing all better now
So many feels. And I love it...
Absolutely great chapter. Really makes you wonder about twilight etc right now. Soren could go to see Celestia *IF* he were not TRAPPED in ponyville.
1754492 You don't go into shock when someone you're convinced is losing their mind starts ranting about something.
You go into shock when you've been grievously injured, been in an accident, witnessed something horrible, or been given terrible news, at least in my experience.
When one of my best friends was hit by a car in front of my eyes a few years back, I was in shock. I felt empty inside, I was blaming myself for my friend even being there. You're not the same person you normally are when you're in shock. You're unhinged. One of my equally shocky friends had to pull me aside and sit me down on the sidewalk when I started chewing out the driver of the car for passing a pulled-over city bus and hitting my friend. I didn't realize it at the time, but there was a pen in my white-knuckle grip, and I think they though I was gonna flat-out stab the driver of the car. I very well might have. You don't think as you normally do at times like that.
now for one more point, there are 3 ponies at fault for Pound Cake, Pinkie for not keeping an eye out for him, Lyra for automatically assuming that Soren was going to run and had Twilight put that spell on him to teleport him back to Ponyville after he goes a certain distance (shows lack of trust considering all that Lyra has done to him), and Twilight for automatically dismissing Soren and not caring about how doing so would hurt him (which as stated before doesn't help him in anyway with his mental state).
1754492 I concur with this line of thought. Twilight sent Soren to the very park, gets yanked back and claims it was from chasing a foal into the forest. When Pinkie come in freaked out, Twilight clearly ignores the fact that Pinkie's statement backs up Soren's statement.
1754487 Twilight may be running out of patience and ideas regarding how to undo the damage that continues to pile up, and it is starting to get to her. Feels more believable then she is being holier than thou. Soren's personality death, and bodily transformation is already underway and Twilight knows it.
The question I am left with is... What would actively hunt and kill such a dangerous creature?
This seems to be loaded with Foreshadowing, Chechov's guns and Red Herrings.
Keep it up.
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Trust me I know of events that can cause shock, I'm an Army veteran who was deployed in Iraq when I was 19 there was a RPG rocket shot into the area where the living quarters were and if I was about 5 feet different from where I was sitting I would've been paralyzed or even killed because shrapnel would've went through the middle of my spine.
but treating someone like how Twilight treated Soren it's not a way to help someone, in fact it does the exact opposite
This fic has gone to all levels of cluster fucking. But now innocent ponies are dying too! Wwwwwwhhhhhyyyyyy
1754624 And that's exactly what Soren was thinking.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png
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But I love the story so many feels
Masterfully played there. Perspective is a wonderful thing to have.
Very awesome job.
1754422 This picture is irrelevant to the story and debilitating to the soul.
1754603 That would certainly coincide with some of what spike was saying, too. What would hunt a dangerous creature? Probably something equally dangerous... like a manticore or basilisk.
Soren, I feel bad for you son. I got 99 problems, but being completely fucked ain't one.
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here have an eagle
Luna knows you need one
And shit has officially hit the fan.
Well, this certainly is a case of the fecal matter impacting with the rotational air circulation device. If they thought Soren was going off the deep end before, wait until the aftermath of everything and the reveals clear the air. The human psyche is a fragile and terrible thing when pushed too far, and I have a feeling Soren's about to show them why the phrase "Humanity can show the purest heights of grace enough to shame angels, and the lowest forms of evils enough to make the Devil's blood run cold" exists.
R.I.P. Pound Cake. You will be missed.
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Actually, I feel that it very accurately portrays how far off the scale Soren's situation has gone on the Oh-Shit-o-Meter. It has gotten so bad that abominations of nature that debilitate the soul can be summoned with the sheer amount of shit that has gone down. The amount of latent Disharmony in the air is strong enough that, given the right incantation and rituals, even Discord himself may be summoned.
Truly, the time of trials is upon us.