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1886613 Oh the timing. You comment just in time for a new chapter.
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I thought an intentional understatement was implied, but apparently that doesn't really work in text. Never mind.
Argh, why must you post a new chapter just as I was about to do something else ?!?!?!
1886647 You mad?
Maybe....
...oh dear.
Awaiting further releases.
Guard 1: It seems he has gone crazy!
Guard 2: Well it seems that his head is...Soren in the clouds!
His mind is definately full of fuck!
Well, where the fuck did the changeling go?
1886692 There never was a changeling. All the cruel things Twilight 'said' and the sighting of 'proof' that Twilight was a changeling were all in Soren's head. He was already being driven mad by the stresses of his mind being 'overwritten' and effectively being raped. The death of Pound Cake proved too much for him to cope with and simply drove him over the deep end. The thing about losing your mind is that you're convinced that you're still very sane, and don't question abnormal things or sudden paranoia. It becomes easy for a person or pony that has lost their grounding in reality to become delusional, and even begin to hallucinate.
1886724 Wow, he's just bat-shit insane, then?
1886733 Pretty darn close. Grief does crazy things to people, if you'll pardon the not-so-pun.
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Maybe I'm just not getting it, but weird things happen when someone comments on one chapter when a new one is published. I was certain my original reply to SightlessOne was on the last chapter...
1886747 When just commenting from the story front page, it defaults to the newest chapter.
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Meh. Apparently so, but I don't remember it doing that before. Perhaps it's a new feature (or, rather, more of a... change) that came with the big update or something. Doesn't really matter anyway.
Maybe giving the mentally unstable alien unicorn to OCD occasional neurotic unicorn for safe keeping was not the best idea. The princesses dropped the ball on this one.
What, no final scream of agonized defeat as he falls?
Damn Soren, you crazy. And slightly scary.
... I wonder who was screaming.
Did you not say last chapter that Soren already walked into the middle of the market?
Hallucinating stuff is not fun. Though I never hallucinated evil people, just a flying chihuahua barking at me.
Perhaps Soren can get some real help this time, and perhaps get his masculinity back in the process. No reason to condemn him to a life as a gender he wasn't prepared to suddenly be just because of Lyra and Twilight's screw-ups.
This may just be my cynicism, but I really hope those two get what's coming to them. They've effectively screw-ed up an entire life, and in doing so, lead to the end of another. That's just not something you can "Dear Princess Celestia" away.
1887196 Thing is that while he did step out of his bush-cover, it was never specified how far away he actually moved. Presumably he stepped out of the bushes and just stood there.
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Center of the market. *Step out of bush* Close enough.
I suppose "happy" ending is relative, least compared with getting stomped to death by Royal Guards.
1887650 And why can't there be a bush in the center of the market.
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You sir have made a valid point, though maybe it was a hallucinated bush and everyone saw Soren acting like he was hiding in something.
1887789 Nopony will ever know.
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Oh you are dastardly clever, how do we know what is real anymore? Is Lyra even a pony... again or still human? Why am I hearing the theme song to Bewitched?
I sure hope this doesn't turn out to be a tragedy. The fact that Soren was imitating Oedipus these last chapters (whether or not intentionally) isn't really helping.
1887867 Oedipus? I'm confused. I don't see Soren murdering his father and marrying his mother...
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Whoa, not that part! The fact that he pretended to have gouged out his eyes as penance for his deeds or something.
1887894 Oedipus gouged out his own eyes with a pin from his mother's gown. Soren faked an eye gouging to off-put ponies.
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I know, it's just disconcerting that he ended up emulating a character who also ended up in a tragic death spiral. But I'm not going to make any assumptions yet; we haven't even seen what happens next!
Yay update and he's lost his mind a long time ago!
I expected this to come out until Thursday, but I'm glad it didn't, and let me tell you, that is some good music! If the other games have music that good I might give them a try!
I also commend you for writing a VERY convincing scene with Twilight losing, I admit, it was a bit dark, but damn, was it amazing, again, the music made it that much more exciting, woo!
Damn, now I am excited.
1888274 I wanted to emphasize that he still fought like a human, and that felt like the easiest way. I also wouldn't quite call it Twilight's loss, either. She's still alive after all.
1888302 That's only because of Celestia's interruption, it she hadn't been there, from the way things were going, there would be quite a ghastly sight to behold.
And Soren would be dead in less than a minute, murdered by Rainbow Dash and Applejack for sure.
1888327 Yup. Hard to run away when your leg is completely out of commission.
Oh just6 kill him and be done with it.
He's annoying me. I kill things that annoy me.
ummmm i actually kinda believed some of the things soren said or saw concerning the tone of twilights voice and etc Soren really is going through so much but at least there is some love for him, Lyra completely putting Soren before the shape of her body even though Soren pretended to have blinded her. but why did princess celestia wait for so long to ask luna to knock him out? i mean soren was in horrible shape but the moment twilight was threatened she stopped it... or was it to allow Soren to let it all out? i hope Soren finally catches a break, seems like he hasnt caught one yet.
At the end of all things, I really hope they can put Humpy Dumpy's shattered mind back together again. If they can't, at least Celestia can make his/her death quick and painless.
I would be sorely tempted to use Twilight's Time Jumping spell, go back a week, and slap Lyra around before she uses that Human Summoning spell.
And if Celestia refuses to simply end his torment of a slow mental disintegration, maybe she can take what's left and place it in a new infant filly. Give Soren a second chance, or at least peace? In a twisted sort of fate for wanting a foal, and as a kind of punishment Celestia would come up with for summoning the human in the first place, Lyra and BonBon could then have to raise the yellow and grey pegasi as their own.
Whoa.
Holy shit. At first I was like "oh dammit, Seven Fates is just going to turn this into Soren going ever further insane" and it was just going to be from his perspective. And that would have been cool! But THIS. THIS was so much better. Those last paragraphs just slam you with the feels as you see what's REALLY going on and just how much Soren's gone insane. Yeesh. Part of me hates your guts, Seven, but the other parts of me are applauding you for being a magnificent bastard.
I agree with shadowfalcon76. They should get some sort of punishment due to the things they've caused. Yes they are feeling guilty and feel very responsible but besides the immediate guilt and emotions that are felt, there will always be a physical or at least mental punishment equal to the "crime" or "mistake". And yeah it may sound wrong but isn't that how real life works out sadly?
Awesome story anyway.
And if you ask me, Soren has suffered enough already since he is the one getting the blunt of the blow from all the shit that has been happening, just from them being punished somehow, Soren gets closure for his pain, whether he likes it or not.
Motherfucker, leaving us with a cliffhanger. You're going to drive me crazy soon
One thing they teach you in street combat: Never fight a meth-head if you can avoid it. Run away, even. There's no glory, no pride, and they're often out of their minds and can't even feel pain anymore. A crazy will rush with all they have, give 100%, even though giving it can hurt the attacker just as much as the defender, dislocating arms in thrown swings and breaking finger-bones in punches. If you've got no will to survive, you're a fearsome foe indeed. Rats in corners and all that.
Plus, Twilight had the issues of 1: Being a friendly-friendly pony, and 2: Felt the need to avoid injuring Lyra's body.
Together, not a good combo for winning a fight, facing a crazy you're not allowed to permanently injure.
I can see the princesses allowing Twilight to duel to the point of high danger, though. They make her do highly dangerous things frequently.
1896649 Yeah, that's pretty much my buddy's opinion on fighting metheads.
Nooo do not give in, Keep fucking fighting.
The insane never think they're insane. Too bad for all involved.
Oh, neat. The song ended right as the fight scene did. That made it all the better of a chapter
That was insane and awesome at the same time but it's finally done fighting and his mind is clear I can't wait to see what happens next
Soren's GOTTA GO FAST
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I just remembered this. Since we're following Soren's train of thoughts, it makes so much sense. Holy crap.
moarrr tragedy!
don't stop in the middle! no!