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Wooo new chapter!!! Now to read...
Yay an update!! And right on my birthday too!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
yay an update, now when is the next one?![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
This is great! Everything's becoming okay-ish again!!
Methinks Luna?
spesilest here alredy?![:pinkiesick:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesick.png)
soren wont be in labor
1944936 What do you say to the Immortal Goddess you insulted and forcibly tossed out of a dream?
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ummmm, "I'm Sorry, i was having a psychotic episode."?
well now i know that soren has way more self control than me. i don't know what i'd say, but i do know that in the end i would demand that they put me back in what's left of my body and to send me home
Lyra pregnant? I knew it!
At least he getting the care deserves. Right, Princesses.
Woona?!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Okay, I'm more confused by this than I should be; if I'm right in assuming "canicide" has to do with the killing of something, probably dogs, then what does this statement mean?
1945303 There are often times at home when I simply can't cope with the amount of barking that goes on in this house. During those times, I practically want to peel off my face.
I'm supposed to be writing my own story, not immersing myself in others' worlds, damn you! Oh well, it was still totally worth it.
1945313 Imagine a similar situation, but with 50 ducks instead of a dog, featuring Twilight and Philomena. That was my daily "idea for a fanfic that should never see the light of day" today.
1945313 And that is why I dislike dogs so much, well that and the fact they like to try and rip off my face from time to time. Give me a nice quiet fish any day of the week.
Luna is probably a pretty good choice for empathy, what with her little "psychotic episode" that we prefer to call the "pilot episode". Nopony has more regret than her, in all likelihood, except perhaps Celestia. All in all, though, not a bad outcome for him. I'm probably just as crazy, but I'd've had WAY higher of a death count by this point than one foal. He's actually kind of impressive for a first ambassador to the nation, I'm surprised he didn't give them smallpox or something.![:pinkiesick:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesick.png)
Luna and Soren can have a pity party together.
A Party?!
No, Pinkie, not that kind of party.
1945816 The 'ambassador' part was only Luna's offering in the dream of what might be. Having made the choices he's made thus far, he probably wouldn't accept any form of ambassadorial role any time in the near future... or at all for that matter.
There's actually a different reason I picked Luna as the specialist, and not just because of her own 'episode'. Luna's domain encompasses the night, and dreams. What are dreams but a product of the mind? It strikes me that it only stands to reason that Luna would have the greatest understanding of the workings of the mind, and spells that apply to them, if the Dreamscape (I like how this is practically a universal term in the fandom for those who care) is any indication. Then again, given how resilient Soren's proven thus far, the Princess might be in for a surprise of her own.![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
Yay update!!!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Also I so saw Lyra being pregnant!
Also good thing that Soren's coming to terms with the issues!
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Oh I know xe's not an ambassador, I suppose "Representative" would be a better term, because like it or not, Soren IS the first in-universe human-pony liaison. The role may not be formal, but strictly speaking neither was Columbus', which didn't stop him from being an example of "the white man" to natives. He represents humanity but in the societal sense, not the legal sense. Poor Soren's psychotic episode could be viewed as a negative light upon humanity as a whole, and what I meant was, with that in mind, I'd make a far worse example of humanity than Soren.
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There's a few things that would mitigate the outright labeling of humans, as a species, to be "Bad". Swapping bodies, then that whole "unicorn backup trying to overwrite your mind" deal, it'll just ruin the family Thanksgiving Dinner every time. I would challenge any pony to not end up in a straightjacket if they had to go through the same ordeal (well, anypony but Screwball, she's crazier than box of rabid flesh-eating space weasels).
Losing your gender forever? Ouch, that's really gotta hurt.
I honestly feel bad for poor Soren, I wonder if you are planning to send him home or not.
I'm getting ahead of myself but I've been reading this story from the beginning and I can get a little antsy while waiting for updates...![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Excellent.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Things are going well...but for how long?
Awaiting further releases.
1945347 i know your pain i have yet to start my first story because i'm immersing in others worlds![:applejackunsure:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackunsure.png)
What is canicide? Every dictionary I know has failed me on this one.
1948930 Look to the word Homicide for details. Homicide comes from the Latin word homicidium, whose root words are homo [person] and caedos [kill/murder]. If homicide is the killing of a person, and canis is the Latin word for dog...![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
1948599 Update rates are relative, really. One of my other projects I've had on permanent hiatus because I've procrastinated it for so long. People have probably forgotten about it by this point.
I'm really disappointed with all of this reconciliation going on. Soren's just going to forgive everyone?
Soren's been cut off from being able to return to earth, been turned into a female for a crime he didn't commit, and turned into a pony, all while having his mind overwritten.
He's lost his home, his humanity, his gender, and his mind, and he's going to forgive everyone that caused all of this? He's content to just sit back and let everyone involved live on with nothing more than the knowledge that they've helped bring him to this point in his life?
That's not good enough!
Is Lyra ever going to see any punishment for sexually assaulting Octavia? Will Twilight ever be reprimanded for betraying every lesson in her study of friendship and allowing a foal to die from her arrogance? What closure will Soren's family get, never seeing him again?
Unless Soren can be completely cured of his mental condition, turned back into a human male, and sent home by the end of this story, the ponies need to see some tangible punishments for their actions! Hurt feelings don't cut it.
If they found a way to turn everything about Soren back to the way it was, and he chose to stay like he was, that would be okay. But as it stands now, the fact that he was forced into these conditions through no fault of his own, whether he could grow to like his situation or not, is inexcusable.
1949620 The thing between Lyra and Octavia was the whole reason the sex change occurred. Her options at the time were gelding, or being deprived of the overwhelming male hormones that lead to the sexual assault. A plea bargain, if you will.
You'll find out more in the next chapter regarding the whole situation regarding Twilight and Lyra. You might even find out just why Twilight seemed so broken in the last chapter. Needless to say, tangible punishments ARE going to be doled out.
He's also not 'forgiving' anything, really. He condemned Lyra for ruining his life. He even said to Twilight that he can't forgive her for what she's done, and she probably can't forgive him for attempting to kill her. There's putting aside your indiscretions for the sake of no further conflict, and then there's forgiving. In the case of Soren, it was the former. That is why I almost named the chapter 'Armistice'.
Soren has a lot to sort through with Princess Luna, but he'll also have a chance with a tête-à-tête with both regents to determine what will become of him.
1949722 That wasn't Lyra's body and from what I remember, the Princess knew that it was not her body. I thought that turning Soren's body female was just a temporary measure while Lyra was in it so she didn't do what she did again. Was the princess really planning on saddling Soren with Lyra's punishment after the week was over?
But I am glad to hear that the ponies will be facing some consequences, though. In first person stories, I can't help but put myself in the main character's shoes to some degree, and what's been happening with Soren really gets me angry.
If gender can switch one way, it can switch the other way too. Unless the Princesses' magic is remarkably specific in an XY-XX switch and not vice-versa, there's really no issue there. That's the smallest of the problems, and easily solved.
1949908 More to the point, because of the way Soren's body was absorbing magic, the sex change spell was also absorbed. There's a degree of permanence in that. Even if she could get exposure to another sex change spell, her body completely pony at this point, so the spell would act in a temporary nature in the same way it would on a regular pony. Even alchemy/zebrican alchemy would only be temporary.
There are some things I won't get into now because I actually need to think them over for the next chapter, but you should get a better idea of why this is the case.
Oh yes, the 'dead' foal.
*snaps his fingers and Pound Cake is fine again!*
Magic, bitches. I don't gots ta explain anything!
Good chapter. Seems like things might be wrapping up soon. And if they do, I'm kind of sad to see it end. Hey, do you have any plans for a possible sequel? Like maybe what his (her now I guess) life will be like after they fix things. Maybe show how Lyra and Bon Bon are doing with a foal. I don't know, I just hate to see good stories end.
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Well, technically it's not Lyra. Soren is the one who is pregnant. Lyra and Bon Bon are only excited because they're the ones who impregnated him when they were stallions. Thus, making it their foal too.
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Well, Bon Bon did the impregnating (Lyra being a human female at the time would make it rather difficult for her to have any direct influence on the process). And Soren will be out of the pregnant body before the foal even completes a single trimester.
*narrows eyes*
Luna...
...probably.
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'Nuff said.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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That doesn't seem to be the case. The greeting started with I, only Celestia of the two sisters is used to saying that. Plus, when she said 'our', she could of been referring to not only herself but both of the princesses' presence.
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Touché.
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Well, hay, you have us there. Could it be a duo, similar to the spa ponies, Aloe and Lotus? Who do we know that's known as a set?
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Well, OBVIOUSLY the answered is implied. Also, I do not think anypony would be as formal with their introduction anyways.
1950957
I wonder how his parents will take Sorean becoming a female grey pegasus permanetly?
agreed, I was glad things finally seemed to tone down a bit for Soren even if he is stuck as a pony, a pregnant one too at that, but hopefully not for long? Though i wonder if he will visit his parents and friend again to say farewell... a scene im looking forward to and not at the same time?
With a hitching sigh, I peek out slightly from beneath the pillow. “No Twilight; it’s alright,” I murmur in a manner rivals Fluttershy in softness.
I had the cutest image of Soren/Lyra doing that in my head, it wouldve been great if it werent for the context![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
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One problem with your little theory. Word of God:
So, yeah. It's Luna. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
everythings going back to normal... too normal. it would be too perfect if Soren WASNT stuck in lyras body because of the pregnancy.
You wanna know why the is so good
Becouse its real the way you portray the follies of soran and his or hers mental state makes it seem that this is no fairy tail. Things will go wrong here's why
You don't go for the way to make everyone look perfect and people could learn from that
Great job
I loved it all so much and I KNOW IT I KNOW SHE WAS PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!
anyway I'm so happy all of this craziness has been resolved and they all can heal and forgive each other I can't wait to see what happens next
Oh, THANK GOD.
JESUS, THANK YOU.
I have a feeling the same sorts of thoughts were running through my head the first time I read this.
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Yeah, everything really seems to clear up after we saw everything in a new light. We utterly forgot that the rollercoaster we have been riding on is a flawed one. No one knows if they're insane until they're not, and boy did the author did this perfectly. Hook, line, and sinker.
Kudos, author. You made us all ride the wrong train. Holy crap.