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Autum Breeze
a home-grown australian who embraced being a member of the fandom 2 days before joining. Willingly delved into the fandom whole-heartedly and has never looked back
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This looks interesting; Imma Try Out The Applause here:
Just reading the description, you spelled 'Autumn' wrong. Isn't there spellcheck on fimfic?
Also misspelled "Equestria" in the summary. Might want to get that fixed.
Rule of good main character OCs: Don't make them related to the canon characters..
Do not make child of canon characters save the world.
This makes it sound like you're reciting beat poetry about tortured feelings or something in a dingy club with an "EVERYONE SMOKES" policy instead of writing a story about cute magical horses. Why would you write a story you hate?
5017248 to keep my friend from committing suicide. You got a problem with me trying to save a life?
5016139 no. I meant to spell it that way. It's my oc and that's how the name is meant to be written
Dear friend Autmn Breeze.
As much your original intent was noble, the overall execution and plot development was not thought all too well. The idea of turnign your female OC into the daughter of Twilight and the direct offspring of Chysalis was not very smart either.
There were so many possibilities, os many ways to turn this into the Zoroastrian version of the original Fall of Equestria, so many ways to portray the possibilties of how such a scenario coudl backfire for the bad guys, so many ways to make all of this better... and yet you chose the quick, but worst, way to do it.
5017352 if he's going to kill himself (whether it's because of a fictional, fan-made universe based on a cartoon or not is irrelevant) you should help your friend find proper, professional assistance. Like a shrink or one of those suicide hotlines.
5017377 my friend is an avid fan of mlp and never read anything darkfic about them until this series of fics, it wasn't his best choice but it happened and he's a wreck because of it.
I do this not for anything but to break him out by showing him a Fic of Hearst series where things will not be left horrible!
5017384 yeah, that's because I don't want to write this, but have to in order f my friend to get better.
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Please say that you're baiting us.
There is just no way in the universe, that your friend is having suicide thoughts, just because he read some darkfics. If that's really the case, you should search for a professional and not help him by writing a fic.
It seems like a good story and has good purpose but I cant pull myself to read a fic this muture but you get the like... heres some sad flutershy tears for the purpose of the story
I am only 13 and this story is to muture for me sorry
This is turning into a great story Autumn don't cancel it and delete it I REALLY want to see where this story will go please keep it available for reading
....a fan fic...'affected' someone?....
5017495 he has a disability, a brain injury, so he thinks differently than most.
So I just read the first chapter and I have to say I like it so far ,never been much for these types of fics but its well written and nicely paced cant really see what all the complaints were about cept for a few missing "e"s in your "helds " early on but otherwise I likes it so keep it up and ignore the haters !
meh i dont mind clop all too much and it was still an enjoyable chapter so...have a moustache
I would have like it better without Autumn having sex with Big Mac.
5017352 Why would he commit suicide over a fanfic?
5021372 i have had to explain this multiple times. he has a brain injury and sees and understands things differently than most other people and he really reacts badly when something horrible happens that he doesn't want to happen.
he's an avid fan of the show and never read any darkfics before. so you can tell, starting with the fall of equestria fics as the first dark ones he ever read wasn't his best choice.
5021223 to be honest, i would've proffered that too, but if i'm going to make this believable enough for my friend to think it works with the series, i had to do it.
doesn't stop me feeling unclean though
As a fan of the series for whom fix-fics usually do absolutely nothing, let me tell you this:
If you really believe it'll help your friend, do it. Keep writing it.
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I understand; just please do us all a favor: don't shatter our hopes in the end.
Thank you...
Pinkie?
THANK YOU! You needed to write this and I needed to read this! Thank you!
Thank you for this. The Fall of Equestria things mere existence bothers me, and this is helping a lot.
5024362 well, while my original reason for writing this is to help my friend, i do realize that there are others who know of that series and want to see things get better.
so, thank you for taking notice of it
5024362
Join the club; I couldn't find the strength to fall asleep after reading one of theirs...
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Actually, it's get them some help, first of all.
Secondly, as much as this Fall stuff just needs to be forgotten about since you believe that many people don't want to see them such things won't go so quietly; remember The Conversion Bureau and let that sink in a moment..
And you know what I also think here?
Saying such things would have you ousted in the community in real life; show some clarity for a moment.
Meanwhile, I would like for you to think of Cry of Fear for a moment:
5022775 Well, I hope this story helps him
Bait obviously a horde of changelings could easily get them, or discord himself could take them
5022775 This.
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I was expecting more something like this.
5030759 it is explained that discord's magic was weakened, thus he cannot actually do much. and while yes, the changelings could take on the army, remember that the crystal heart is still corrupted. all it would take is for cadance to activate it again and Autum's changelings would turn on her and she would turn on her loved ones, since changelings, even autum are both sexes.
5032350 I meant storm the everfree and get the elements
5032449 oh, well, yes, but that;s not Autum's plan. She;s going to make him really suffer the pain of a defeat from right under Dainn's nose.
Good End Man!!
Sorry it took me so long to read I've only read chapter 1 so far.
It is will written and you add a good amount of exposition for those of us that don't know the series, A,K,A Me.
I will read the rest when I can.
5017495 I believe it I had a friend in collage that a complete brake down when Wolf wood form Trigun died. It took a long time to help her and me finding the Trigun manga to help her.
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I am sorry i offended anyone with my comment. But it just sounds incredibly ridiculous, getting upset over a work of fiction.
5034436 it aint over yet. there's still the epilogue to come
Wow, now this is how you do a Fall of Equestria fic! Have it end with the caribou getting what's coming to them! That was awesome how Twilight's daughter traveled to the alternate Equestria and (with the help of her changelings and Discord) freed the element bearers and defeated the caribou.
Now all we have is the epilogue, hopefully we will see Shining Armor and/or Spike freed from their brainwashing. Also, I would like to see what happens to Apple Bloom's friends Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo. I can't believe that Scoots was made into a cheerleader for those sick games and would like to think that she only did that for her hero, Rainbow Dash.
Looking forward to the epilogue.
Thank you for this. May the Gods watch over you.
5017515
GB2 Failchan, Social Darwinist.
No I guessed Twilight seeing as she was Autum Breezes mother my next guess is pinkie pie. FYI I know you take no joy writing this story I am glad you are allowing me to read it. Tell your friend Fluttershyfan3030 is pulling for them
he deserved it he was disobeying the law of this land