I´m what happens, if you have a great libido and too much time on your hands. And yes that also includes fapping...
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Oooh, reality bending, corruption and mind control. Now this looks awesome! Looking forward to reading this one.
Will other ponies like the 18+ CMC be joining as well?
This is a neat idea. Looking forward to reading more!
Need more
Okay I NEED to see where this goes. *rubs hands together with sinister chuckle*
*smashes the tracking button furiously*
The concept of this is fascinating and if done correct could make for a compelling story
pears give it to applejack she will destroy it
You have my attention.
this has a lot of potential I hope to see this progress
Normally don't comment on Clopfics, but this got my attention.
Oh dear sweet Celestia please don't let this fic die, I'm begging you!
And then she fucks Spike in his sleep!!!
*Sits and watches* Yes.
I feel as though I should not read this...but at the same time the curiosity is killing me. Should I?
So Twilight is going to turn herself into a Sex Queen, have Spike as her mate and have him impregnate everyone in Ponyville or something?
loving it
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Ooohhh, I like that idea. But do remember that the Goddess of sex is Princess Molestia, if we can unlock her of course. 😏
By the way, who were those voices that sounded beings observing Twilight, were they “You and TheOneWithoutAName” ?
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Who knows? I´m certainly not telling.
You have to wait for the next chapters.
The princess of friendship unable to make more than friends. How ironic...
this made me laugh, definitely giving this a fav
I really don't like the fact that you're writing this and 'my little corruption' because this means both of these will update at half the speed.
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Of course.
So what did she pay for the full version? Considering the amount of power the beings who made the IDesire have I can't imagine the payment is really necessary, so most likely it took a part of her to help facilitate her corruption like her soul/morals/conscience.
Holy moly those spoiler tags I uh, I kinda like them-
Here we go~
168 people fapped to this
and dont give me the I was reading it for the plot bullshit we know you did
;-;
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i dont know if to laugh be silent
Dude, you KNOW you have a excellent story when it's been featured for a entire day and as I write this it number one on the list.
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Oh don´t worry. My Little Corruption has first priority for me. It will continue to be updated monthly.
But given this story popularity I will probably also invest some time into this.
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Yeah but you only have a limited amount of time in a day.
Whoops. I seem to have prematurely posted. Will edit along.
Shit dawg, I really shouldn't start reading at 2:30 AM. I'll finish this later, yeah? The story itself looks good from what I saw, but please, dude, get an editor!
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*This left only Fluttershy
*Celestia's
*alicorn's
*friends, which seemed
sexy, yet not slutty, clothes
*Fluttershy's
*Applejack's
*Pinkie Pie's
Starlight's
*"Stallion's Health", a cheap
No need for the comma after "frustrated"
*edge off, even if
Don't need this comma either
Maybe don't need this comma
Twilight's
*Suddenly, a heavy object
*Twilight's
*she saw stars
*upward
*Address a few seconds, the disk was gone
*lay a phone (maybe, again...)
Question mark
Remove comma
Remove both commas
*device's
I would love to continue reading this story but the errors are just too numerous for me to get properly invested in reading this story. It's a real shame, the premise is interesting enough. Most of the errors are just small things, like missing apostrophes or wonky spacing.
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Well, english is my second language, so forgive me the mistakes there. Granted I suck even with german grammar, but from my perspective it could be lot worse. Like, two-years-earlier-writing worse.
But, if any of you readers want to be my editor or know someone who is willing, I would greatly appreciate it.
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This is probably one of the more...transgressive stories I've ever seen get to the top of the feature box.
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You could probably cut this down a bit by saying 'it's name's not names' or something. Let the author go through and fix things with that info in mind.
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I call out specific lines so that authors may copy/paste them into a ctrl+F. That way, if any of them are missed, it's my fault, not theirs (but only the 2nd or 3rd times; the 1st and 2nd are the author and their editor, if they had one before publishing).
Boo, booo!
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Boob ooo
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I like boobs!!!
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Can't wait for more! :D
Definitely hoping for the princesses to make an appearance.
I love it. This is such a cool idea. Just one complaint. Whenever you use contractions like can’t, won’t, or didn’t, you put a space between the letters and the apostrophe. You shouldn’t do that. Just avoid this in the future and you’re good.
Well, I hope this gets continuation
*Pears* IDesire ?
Also, if things are supposed to be on a ''give and take'' basis, what of the first changes Twilight did on herself ? There wasn't any indication that she had to ''pay'' anything there (directly stated or in narration).
Nice
This fic reminds me of the chronovac series on cyoc, regardless please continue it I really wanna see where this goes!
Wait. If Twilight's always had this body, then why are her clothes still destroyed? And why doesn't she think of that?