After eating a delicious cake, Celestia becomes obsessed with cakes. It's up to Luna and Twilight to stop Celestia and save her from her own desires.
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When you say shortfic, do you mean one-shot or small amount of chapters?
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Small chapters, I think it will has one or two more.
*reads*
Looks decent. Will watch this as it goes along
Hm... Not exactly enough to make a conclusion of whether this will be good or not, I'll be tracking because it isn't terrible.
I really hope that didn't come off as douchey as it sound in my head.
interesting story,
very interesting indeed
lol Celestia is just like us
anyways, seems decent enough, i shall track this.
Oh Gog.
Why.
Keep it up, you horrible, horrible, wonderful person.
Twilight flank cake..... YES
Just like like mcdonalds: I'm lovin it!
(LAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!)
She't probably going to force feed her cakes, and tons of it!
Don’t touch it! It’s mine!” Celestia roared, stepping back from Twilight. that how i get when theres one last peace of my birthday cake left
The wonder of cakes, ha, I chuckled.
i would have put some cake under a box with some string atached and see if she falls for it
Wut.
damit twilight that cake will go stright to your hips.......btw do ponys have hips
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Or maybe the food go straight to their flanks.
459861 same goes for you celestia dont think you cant get fat
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God princesses don't get fat, Twilight on the other hand...
Chocolate laxatives, a true classic!
This the most non-sexual yet very suggestive fic I've ever read.
I can see a Celestia flying for the bathroom in 10...9...8..7.......
HAH
Well done, I actually lol'd several times! A smattering of grammatical errors were mildly distracting, but the story being told easily overshadowed them. Please keep writing, I'll keep reading.
I'm hungry for cake now.
Well, that was an interesting story to read on a Friday night
, but it still made me
Why? Did you add something to the cake you prepared?” Twilight asked, putting the comb down. “Come to think, since I arrived here, she hasn’t come out of the bathroom.”
“Let’s just say… chocolate laxatives are a good cake condiment.” Luna chuckled.
LOL.
Luna cake. I was all
But then I went
You deserve a 5/5 for this story!
Test.
The fun comes in frosting now.
does anyone (anypony*) know were to get chocolate laxitives?
*Yes i had to say it
“Celestia… she ate… my special cake!”
Lol...
This is buckin' wierd... and amazing!
Cake burn.
"Cake" should be spelled with a capital letter.
I reviewed this fic tonight you can find the review here
Not bad. The only things that would make this story better would be if there was a chapter that it was a parodied of show Intervention.
*Celestia walks into her bed room and sees me, Luna, and the Main 6.
Celestia: Whoa, what's going on here? Who are you?
Michael: I, am OtakuBrony47. And this...is a room...Of people who Love You.