With a sibling and the happiness it brings. In a collection of three short stories.
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xxGamer101xx
Just some random person on the internet that writes stories about a show with ponies. I try not to suck at writing. Am I good at it? I don't know. I just do it for fun.
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interesting
445552 interesting in a good or bad way?
That's sweet, but I feel that the last story between Sweetie Belle and Rarity was a bit too short, considering the first two stories were 3 - 4 times longer than the last one.
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I wanted to do something simple and sweet with Rarity and Sweetie Belle. Sorry if you found it too short.
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Thank You
That picture is great.
Are there more like it? 
Who dun it?
Oh, by the way, I meant the main story pic with the three pairs of sisters.
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artist: http://cuteskitty.deviantart.com/art/Sisterhooves-290132278
And in the middle of a snore back in Sugarcube Corner, One hyperactive pink pony said in her sleep:
"FOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Just an extra thing that I thought I think that Pinkie would have said. Otherwise, It's a great story.
446192 lol, nice touch.
I haven't read the third one, but I have to say I really like the first one. Ok the "Sending to the Moon" comment is a bit bad but the rest... damn good job at showing that first and foremost Celestia and Luna are sisters, Through thick and thin, and a 1000 years of separation will never change that.
Celestia's Paladin
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Thank you,
what did you think of the rest?
I think... the Rarity/Sweetie Belle is the best out of the three, for the shear simplicity of it, and that even after all those problems they still love each other.
I enjoyed this story! In fact the Rarity/Sweetie Belle story is my favorite of the three. It's short and sweet, yet it conveys a powerful emotion!
Pretty good, but old equestrian/royal we spoils all the story. Oh, I'm pretty sick of this stupid canon thing. However, even considering Luna still does not get rid of this (after almost an year since her return, haha), I still don't believe that sisters talk to each other in the official language with 'royal we'.
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Fixed. Thanks for catching that.
These were all so cute. Light, easy reading that you can just pick up anywhere.
I did catch a few spelling errors in the first part, but otherwise I find you style very charming.
short, sweet, and cute as can be. Even though Rarity/Sweetie felt a bit short, it did a wonderful job of conveying the pure love between siblings. I myself have three sisters, two older, one younger, whom I would go insane without.
I didn't like it, personally. I think you need more practice writing.
Your going to have so many songs from me
Thou shall not worry
Thou shall not cry
For we will be happy
If you promise us, why?
We want you to stay safe
So please do not worry
Dear sister, we shall carry on, so please...don't worry