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Edmar Fecler


As you might have noticed; i am a Ditzy finatic. (what? she's flippin awesome!) I enjoy writing Fanfics, and will continue doing so until i get good enough to publish a full story. :derpytongue2:

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After surviving the dreaded Order 66, Jedi knight Joseph Malek has a near-death experience, in which he visits the most powerful being in existence. The strange being tells him of a future visit to its world before sending him back to his own existence. Twenty years later, while on a mission for the Rebellion, Malek accidentally stumbles upon a secret new world when his ship is damaged. The world’s Ruler, Princess Celestia, welcomes him and offers to aid in his ship's repairs. While there, Malek averts disaster when he stops a mutiny with the help of the planet’s inhabitants.

Now he must keep the world’s existence a secret when he travels back to his own dimension, which is rather hard when one if its people decides to sneak back with him.


(edited by Flutterguy_6996. thanks for the help.)
(note: long periods between updates. sorry.)

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 50 )

Wow....Powerful stuff.

Wow... this really puts my Star Wars crossover to shame. :fluttershbad:

You would have gotten 5 stars just from the picture alone :ajsmug: but good content helped lol.

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Agreed, those droid ponies look awesome.

well the picture isnt exactly mine, but its the best i could find that could represent my story. :trollestia:
but it is incredibly awesome! :rainbowkiss:

It's a human in Equestria story... Only that he's a jedi knight?! Oh god.

[img]tumblr_lqwmdzOYSR1qa9689[/img]So awsome my emotions cant comprehend what to do

It's the most awesome SW crossover I have ever seen. Moreover, the style is simple yet exquisite, and the plot is extremely promising. Definitely tracking and giving it 5/5 stars.

I have to admit I'm intrigued as a massive star wars fan.

I do have to say though the Jedi's name is a bit off putting- not exactly a name common in the Star Wars universe but perhaps that's just me being nit picky.

>> Ex-Nihilos Its hard to think of a truly "origional" star wars name. its all like ahivall or tvenctus and all that.
Y THEY NO HAVE NORMAL NAMES?! :raritydespair:

10 bits says the jedi where Qui-Gonjin and Obewain Kenobie

wait the jedi had a name i didnt see it

Damn. Just holy shit. Tracked definitely.

Poni/starwars cross that is really good? o_O My brain=SPLATTERED.

:rainbowderp: Every single star wars crossover has failed to get to me to read the first chapter look forward to seeing some more of this.

...and that's how Equestria was made! Literally! :pinkiehappy:

You have put out only one chapter and people are giving your story 5 stars? I am sorry but you have to have some REAL damn good stuff to actually deserve that... As in I have a heart attack from just how awesome it is.... The exception to this rule is one timers but that's because it's a complete story in just one chapter but now I am rambling. Personally as a writer I won't accept praise like that until the story is completed because you rate a story based off of the plot graph. Does it have good rising action? Does it have a good climax? Does it have a good falling action? These three thing are needed to make a good and fair review, not just reading the prelude -.-

160403 true that.

but the attention is still nice. :scootangel:

"Destroying his homeworld and all life on it"
Holy frak, Celestia's father is the Sith Emperor! :twilightoops: What a twist, and yet it makes so much sense!

Where did you get the picture?

ACHIVEMENT UNLOCKED: INMEDIATE 5 STAR RATING!

160476 google searched 'star wars ponies' :derpytongue2:

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Or that's where discord was spawned from! The absolute chaos that ensued! It all makes sense!

Wow... :rainbowderp:

That was awesome /speechless

Damn, that was fuckin' awesome, bro. Hope to see more soon! :pinkiehappy:

u sir, thou art a genius.:twilightblush:

My my my, even though this style of writing is the one I hate nearly as much as I do that one insipid style of doing a bloody commentary of events like mystery space theater, I was emotionally and mentally moved. If you swapped the style from ... this thing to an either first person or third the quality would skyrocket even above this insanely good level.

Interesting, really wonder where this will go and what the Jedi Council will do now, theres no way they wont feel if a entire planet and all its population was destroyed, even if this Far.

We need some Yoda kick-assery

Celestia?.... FUCK YEAH! :rainbowkiss:
Omg, this is awesome. WTF is this!? It's so cool! :rainbowkiss:
... ehm, sorry 'bout that :twilightsheepish: Tracking :twilightsmile:
-Glassed

Most starwars crossovers I've read, to be frank, sucked. But this! I'm liking this.

Truly awesome start to what I hope will be a long running crossover. The places you could take this story line are endless in a universe as big as star wars. :pinkiehappy:

I can't think of anything to say ather then ths is perfect.
Tracking and 5 stars.

I dont know what to think yet,so far its bad-ass but will it continue to be bad ass.

Btw heres some random names,because seriously? Joseph McAllister? No offense, its a RL name but doesnt give the star wars feeling to me at least.

Towan Noth ,Karem Brolen , Ori Tonor , Sham Panne (champagne lol )


or just google star wars name generator

F***ING damn this is good. other than that:derpyderp1:

And so, it begins...
Very interesting. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, the potential this presents is... amazing. :pinkiehappy:

chapter 1 is up!! :pinkiegasp:
ENJOY! :pinkiehappy:

HUZZAH!

The Jedi has been doubled!

Oh yeah , this!
So far so good.

Ha... Malek... Like Darth Malek... but for realzies, awesome story. I love star wars and I love ponies. Epic combo.

goooooood goooood only now do you understand the power of the pony side:derpytongue2:

265440 you thik thats impressive? Just wait until...
Well...

I wouldnt want to ruin the surprise. :twilightblush:

253471 Darth MALAK is not amused. :duck:

*finishes current chapter*
Continue? 5....4....3....2....1....

Oh my Celestia.......This is epic:rainbowderp:......please release the next chapter soon:fluttershysad:
Keep up the good work, I will be watching from the shadows:rainbowdetermined2:

Keep it up I gotta know what happens next:pinkiehappy:

Hmmmm.. Continue... :pinkiesmile: oh and if Spike learn to use Jedi force powers... :rainbowkiss: SO AWESOME!

So Tia, is a very very strong force user.... IntrIgued me, you have... :moustache:

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