WAR! Has covered the Equestrian System as the New Lunar Republic, and the Solar Empire fight for territory. Little do they know is that the Galactic Empire has entered the system, searching for the man who destroyed the Death Star. When the three come together the already devastated NLR and Solar Empire are outgunned, and outmanned. But can they work together, by putting down there differences and force the Empire out of the system? Or be forced under a new tyrant rule by the Galactic Empire.
And yes I know its a long name. Also on the topic of how this will probably get bad reviews from the NLR, I am here to say. Just enjoy the story, the NLR and the SE will get there return later.
Romance is later on.
Chapters (16)
A very interesting concept. The grammar and actual punctuation/arrangement of things is kinda screwy in places. These things may make it difficult to read, but it doesn't make the story bad.
+1 from me, but, If I were in your position, I would consider finding an editor to help you.
If you cannot find one, I would love to fill that position.
Other than that, I love the idea!
dis gonna good
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funny thing is how the idea was conceived when I was cursing about the NLR and the SE then I thought "Hey why not destroy both sides in a fanfic!"
And yes some parts are screwy, I'm working on it so expect some bumps in this road, and I will talking to a friend about editing.
2840392 Hey, you're doing a great job, man! Keep up the good work, and don't let anybody get you down!
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Thanks. I appreciate the encouragement, no sarcasm intended. I will releasing another chapter soon.
Crossover with the Galactic Empire? You know what that means...
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funny thing is that I listened to the 10 hour version of that while writing this, it made things interesting.
Quick update, I have removed the center align for a reason, it is because its throwing me off while I read.
Update: I will be doing some brainstorming so there won't be updates for a while
Like it....but Vader is showing way to much emotion.
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in some WIP chapters I'm working on he shows less emotion. such as slaughtering unarmed ponies.
2852146 I mean like in the first chapter he is yelling at Twilight. Showing emotion.
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basically that will be improved on
2852223 kk sweet....
I strongly approve of this...
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Thank you my lord...
Apparently someone posted this in the NLR.
2873561 instead of the equestrian alliance y not call it united equestria & use this symbol http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/170/6/2/a_united_equestria_by_ikonradx-d54430q.png
going down hard i see
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So far, it will end in a 3 way choice.
One is the light side choice.
Another is dark side choice.
Third is Dark Magic choice.
3339556 Ok
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Oh you'll love the next chapter. All that I can say is spec ops, getting killed
3825594 If that means seeing the Imperials killed and wiped out once and for all. Then good! The Galactic Imperial Empire will fall!!!!
Star Wars! yay! This is an awesome group I founded, maybe you could add it to the stories! Thank you!
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Thanks.
Getting good. But the Imperials are starting to win again
Boy I hope the Imperials fail and the Equestrian Alliance will be victorious
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I'm working on it, the last chapter will be good. But overall that will be a while, due to issues.
3871876 Ok
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But what do you think of the Aramis and Gara characters.
3871985 :) Well. It was very good and ok
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I was thinking to my self this story isn't making it's star wars quota, I then realized it's missing the romance. So that's the reason they exist.
3872309 Yep
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also
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3874900 I'm surprized at it
I did like the light side ending
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I'm going to start writing the first chapter for the Light Side ending tomorrow
3875566 Ok
I get this strong feeling Gara is related to this person or Vhonte Tervho
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Your right, Gara is related too Vhonte Tervho, is Gara going to talk about her parents, maybe. Presuming that this entire story takes place in 0 Aby, Gara would of been born in the middle of the clone wars, or 20 BBY.
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Well goody me, I finished the first chapter already.
3897080 Ok
Same here.
so many referances I LOVE IT
Hope they kill them all or some griffins or something join the empire and ponies join the rebels and we get to see a huge war
Fucking Jedi allways ruining things
MOTHER FUCKING JEDI JUST STOP