After traveling many miles to find out the truth about what had occurred to him and his friends several years ago, Matt finds a clue about the origin of the mysterious object that gave them incredible telekinesis powers. As he flies towards his destination, he loses momentum and begins to free fall. As he's falling, he sees a black hole beginning to form underneath him and falls through. Blacked out, he awakes in an unfamiliar area and thus begins his journey
Story takes place after the events of "Chronicle" where Matt wonders the world in search for answers.
Also want to let every body know that if Im not spot on with certain characters or know much about certain places in the MLP world. Please note that I haven't seen mlp FiM since the last episode of the 2nd season.
Just want to give my thanks for having Bronyink as my editor.
EDITOR: Bronyink
Very good job. And first
5347483
thanks man, im really hoping i dedicate myself on this fic.
5347486 no problem keep this up and you have a new follower
5347512
why not just follow me now lol i will write more through out the month man.
5347515 it's done
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click on " Even More Questions Unanswered" its highlighted in green.
Oh my god....YEAHHHH!!!!!!
Here was a other story Chronicle but it never have new chapter for 1 year ago.
I CAN'T WAIT TO WAIT FOR NEW CHAPTER! KEEP IT BRO!
Fav and check.
Could use a proofreader, but other than that pretty decent. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
Although it would probably help if I actually see Chronicle first...
Story is great so far and I loved that movie btw
Well now, this is a first, a Chronicle cross-over.
5353703
I dont know if you're serious or being sarcastic.
5354978 Yeah, that's the problem with text. I was being quite serious, this is a first, at least the first I've seen. Heck, I didn't know anyone else actually watched that movie.
5355508 You saw it too?!somegif.com/gifs/13922965851595224735.GIF
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im fucking whaching you twi
A Great First Impression Indeed.
Let say You just fuck up. it to bad it really short the chapter.
Gonna wait for new update.
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if we know twi, shes about to do some kinky shit lol jk
5392493
I don't see anything in your comment bro.
5392570
short? alright i'll try and make the 3rd chapter a little longer then.
5392586 btw, i see what you did there. the sex joke.
5392591
thank you lol I am trying to make this fic funny as well. btw I like your pic, it reminds me of dust from 'dust: and elysian tail'
5392597 um...that my dad.
I'm liking how this is playing out so far. Eager for more.
5392600
I can see the resembles lol
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5392601
thanks bud, always glad to hear people liking my fic
btw, im Hispanic and your name looks like Mongolo lol kind of funny actually
5392602 It really weird. every night when i gonna sleep i still can hear.
the only thing i could hear were pleasurable moans from the dad and mom's room.
5392603
Heh, I don't even know what that means, but I've had this username for things in general for a long time.
I think this Is the only chronicle/mlp fanfic
and im loving it
Now that's just mean. Twilight freaks out about him, thinking he's hideous apparently, when she was the only one who didn't freak out about Zecora and she's warning the Princesses about what, for all she knows, is just reclusive sentient species of Terra. I might be wrong but Twilight seems kinda OOC to me. and why is Applejack freaking out and not getting Twilight to calm down? He told her of his power and it's Twilight's fault that happened, not his.
finally a chapter.
it was made in 2012
I wonder why nobody thought of this
*anticipates a battle while eating popcorn*
5394002
Yeah but zecora is still more horse like than anything else, the only thing that makes her different from an actual horse is her coat. I wasn't trying to make the characters exactly like the ones from the shows but im also not trying to make ooc like you say. Twilight isn't totally ooc but I was trying make a joke with the whole hideous creature thing. and the deal with applejack was she literally didn't knew what to do. she wasn't freaking out but more like shocked at the outcome. either way just wait for the next chapter.
5395470 I have to side with 5394002 on this one. Twilight was way OOC. Now this is just my opinion, but even if you are trying not to have them exactly like the show, Twilight would still not react like that to him with AJ standing right next to him. The comment she made was fine, the reaction is the extreme OOC part.
That being said, if you are planning on taking the character that far away from how it would act in the show you might need to consider the Alternate Universe tag.
Other than that its a nice two chapters so far.
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i will try my best to make twilight sounds more like twilight in the next chapter, im working on it as we speak.
5395859 You don't have to change how you want to portray Twilight on my account. I was just letting you know my thoughts is all. If that's how you want her to act, then so be it, it is your story. It's just if you plan on taking them too far away from how they would normally act is where the Alternate Universe tag might need to be considered.
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i already wanted to have twilight like how she is on the show but i just had a hard time conveying twilights personality. Which i guess is why she seems OOC in the latest chapter but i can promise that wont be the case next chapter. i will try my best to match twilights personality.
btw, your pic is so cute
In most storys with twilight and a human I cant help but say hem-hem "FUCK YOU TWILIGHT SPARKLE!!!!!!"
so.... any chance we'll see a new chapter anytime soon?
5674093
Im sorry man, i just been so freaken lazy. Been looking for work and when im free i just play video games, but please expect a new chapter soon.
Brb, killing self.
5780074 YES!!! There aren't enough Chronicle fics and it's good this one aint dying yet
5405142
Im refusing to read all chronicle fics simply so I wont get any ideas from other peoples work. im sorry bro but I cannot help you on that part.
By the Great Cork-Screw Penis of Alderon! Go back and watch the movie one more time because there's no way you got this guy right. He's what? 20-21 years old by now? If you've ever taken an acting class, use what you learned in there, if not then here's a tip: watch the movie and only listen to Matt's voice. And when writing, try to imagine his voice saying whatever your writing, if it doesn't sound right don't wright it.extremeultimategoreansurvival.files.wordpress.com/2012/02/the-more-you-know1.jpg?w=551
5833253
Your advice is noted and im placing it right here on my refrigerator.
5833534 Are you seriously considering mh advice or is that just sarcasm?media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m3dagsiUHN1qapy9o.gif
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I have notice that i wrote Matt differently compared to the first chapters. I was so caught up on making sure i did a good Twilight that i guess i forgot about Matt.