Responding to a magical letter that was somehow able to make it through the iris.....SG-1 jumps through the wormhole only to discover a child's television show on the other side......Or is it? Other humans are using the second stargate on earth, constantly visiting this world and threatening it's inhabatants. Jack O'neil, Samantha Carter, Dr. Daniel Jackson, and Teal'c embark on a quest that might just question the validity of the largest toy and TV show producer in America.......
This is a cross over from the si-fi show, Stargate: SG-1. I highly recommend watching it before reading this, just look it up on the net. Great show. Anyway, enjoy!
*****CURRENTLY ON HIATUS UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE*****
Chapters (5)
Doctor Daniel Jackson: professor of archaeology, member of SG1, savour of the galaxy who once trasended to another plane of existence...and also a brony.
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Yeah, why not?
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Thanks! Next chapter should be out today or tomarrow. Thanks for the positive feedback! Really encouraging. Please give it a thumbs up if you like it!
no way sg1 such a great show tho i kinda wish they did stargate universe alot better than they did and did a longer run of it to butyea dam right ima read this just like twi would
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Uh, I believe you lost your periods and commas somewhere....
2901838 i kno but it happens. i was in a hurry lol
Keep up the good work thanks.
You got my thumbs-up at Teal'c playing badminton.
I'm giggling uncontrolably here. Continue!
Yes! more.
Next chapter should be out by the end of the weekend. Thanks for all the support, I honestly didn't think this story would attain that much attention!
But hey, I guess where there's the internet forums, there's stargate fans! 
That's not how Teal'c is spelled- you got it wrong in the blurb.
Shame on you, sir.
Also, it's Jaffa, not Jafa, and Goa'uld, not "Ghoul'd".
Tauri, not "Tari".
There are also a number of fairly egregious grammar mistakes, ("Jack, you're pager's going off!") as well as some pretty awful dialogue.
"It was a scary experience for me and my friends."
Can you really imagine Teal'c saying anything like that? It doesn't fit his voice or his general ethos.
On the bright side, you do a pretty good job with O'Neil's voice, so you've got that going for you.
2907234 I couldn't judge, myself. I haven't watched an awful lot of Stargate... >_>
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It's a fun show.
i was so guessing twi would have put em n a force field first but hey that spell works to
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Thanks for the corrections, I'll do my best to fix them
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Corrected all the "Teil'c"s and fixed the description....now preening grammer mistakes....thanks for the input!
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Ok ok guys, I get the message. Next chapter out by tomorrow!
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Lol, well, jumping to conclusions.....quite frankley, it'll be made more clear in the next chapter why she did what she did....working on it now
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Before transformation. This is taking place early in BOTH shows, note Samantha's still a captain, and yes, you will like chapter 4
Ponies be idiots.
Slight misspelling of Colonel there.
Otherwise interesting read
Proofread. Proofread like no tommorow. You are misspelling things all over the place.
Also you could do with adding more detail (leaving the dialoque as is) to make each chapter feel more fufilling. I would also suggest working on the layout and formatting to make it an overall easier read.
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Ok, will do. Sorry guys, next chapter won't be for another week because I have to make the existing stuff easier to read!
Also, should I get rid of the tab paragraphing technique and use double space?
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It would go a long way to helping you realise how much you need to add.
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Ok.
I haven't really done that much proofing because I thought this wouldent get as much attention as it did. I mean, It was just a crazy idea I wrote the first chapter to in half an hour and published just for the heck of it. Then the community tells me it's well written and my stargate addicted brother says he could really see it happening cannon in the show. And I'm like,
At anyrate, yes, when I do get around to it I will fix it up
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indeed. I realize that now.
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Never assume people won't pay attention to a fic. If anything fanfics get as much if not more traffic then published novels... and get twice as much criticism. It's always best to put 100% in from the start.
I look forward to seeing what you can do when you apply yourself.
EDIT: Also family aren't always the best for critique... they're too inclined to be nice.
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lol yeah.
Yeah as for what I can do when I apply myself, I've been pouring effort into a new fic of mine: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/118831/my-little-annihilation-episode-i-caught-in-the-crossfire
Hope you enjoy it.
Thanks for the tip
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This is an amazing story, I really hope you continue it.
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Don't you worry.
Right now I'm working on a much larger story of mine, but I should get back to this by the end of August. Thanks for the positive feedback!
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For your thing about family. You don't know my brother.
He's the kinnd of guy that you can tell if he likes stuff, and if he doesn't. He just sort of vaugly nods his head if he thinks something's 'ok', and gives you constructive criticisem if you need it. So warrenting that kind of a reactionn from him is pretty awsome in my books
(PS: he's a real brainy type (like myself) who works as an electrical engineer at NASA, currently building one of the main visual telescopes on James Web!)
pastel colored. Not Pascal colored. Pascal is a computer language, I believe. :|
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Ah well, whoops
3128838 No worries. Not the first time I've seen that error. Just pointed it out so you could patch it up. Good story otherwise, far as I'm concerned.
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Sorry 'bout that
I've been working on other projects for a time, but Chapter 5 should keep you happy for a bit
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This is what it's like reading this chapter.
Awesome, that's all I've got to say.
Also your story kind of inspired a stargate story for me, but I'm using Atlantis instead.
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Always happy to help a fellow author!
Check out my other stories if you need more ideas!
you need to make up your mind on chevrons, when the UAV was being launched, she said chevron 8, while when O'neil's team was going through, she said Chevron 7. It can't be both
Oh daaaammn... this is on hiatus..
just found it and laughed my ass off..
i really hope that this story will someday be finished...
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Rest assured, my friend, one day... Unfortunately, I have big auditions coming up ina a week's time so I haven't been getting to writing too much. Plus I've started a new fic which is not published. I will, though, get around to finishing this one eventually
Glad you liked it. I'm rather surprised by all the upvotes and awesome comments though, it's short, badly written, and was written as basically a long drawn-out joke. I'm glad you fellas like it!
P.S: While you are waiting, check out some of my other works!
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I will keep that in mind. Thanks
M15s? The SGC doesn't use those. I believe the weapon you're thinking of is the M16 and/or the M4 Carbine.
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This, and it's spelled "though" not "tho".
there seem to be quite a few errors in this but i would like to see the chapters be longer if possible and but still enjoyable being a big stargate fan and for better or worse id like to see this finished when you can get to it and not let it die
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I assure you, it will not die. I am, for better or worse, pretty much saving it until I get some decent inspiration (e.g. Actually watch the show which I haven't done for over a year) or its a rainy day and I don't know what else to do.
But do not worry. I have learned a lot as a writer since this, so the next chapter will be WAY better than all of them :D
If the kwoosh was anti-matter, the entire SGC would be dead.
Sorry, I just can't handle the characterizations here.
O'Neill. With two Ls.