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John Marston did all he could. He made sure his family was safe before making sure that the federal agents sent to kill got what they wanted. He opens the barn door, and embraces death.
John wakes up in a field, "Am I dead?', he asks himself. This is not where he made his last stand. He notices bullet wounds in his chest before passing out...


Character and Category changes will happen when needed. Cursing will occur when appropriate. Like when you get stabbed. Who wouldn't curse if they got stabbed?

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 62 )

Took somepony long enough to do this crossover :pinkiehappy:

Dat profile pic and maybe this story get my approval.

red dead + ponies = AMAZING
good job, cant wait for more

It's about damn time for someone do a crossover story of my favorite game, Red Dead Redemption.

I pondered writing a Red Dead Crossover. Although I was going to set it in Appleloosa, to keep that Western feel to it. Just a random anecdote from yours truly.

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You should go ahead and do that. Now that I think about it, this is more of a "main character from other franchise having having major role in Equestria" than a true cross-over.

598727 Too much on my plate now sadly. It's still in my backlog of ideas for a rainy day. :pinkiesad2:
At some point you have to mention Herbert Moon. Everybody loves Herbert Moon. :trollestia:

Will John have all his abilities mastered like: hunting, shooting, herbalist and treasure hunting? if so, then he's gonna be really happy for having learned how to be a herbalist:twilightsmile:

His gunslinging won't do him much good( being in a world that doesn't even know what a gun is), but he could use those (literally) deadly reflexes of his. Dis Gunn Be Good:pinkiehappy:

Thanks a bunch everyone. I really wasn't expecting any positive feedback so early on. I was almost sweating when I first checked on the comments.

I was expecting him to stay human, but this is actually better than I expected. It's original and interesting. I APPROVE OF THIS. HAVE A STACHE:moustache:

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Speaking of positive feedback, there are some parts that needed to be proofread.
Would you mind doing that, please?:pinkiesmile:. It seems that you uploaded two chapters at the same time with a little haste as far as I can tell. Just offering some improvements, that's all.

I´m going to enjoy this.....:rainbowwild:

YESS! MAH PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED!!! HALLELUGHER PRAISE DE LORT!

598752 Except the Jewish, the Natives, the Europeans, the British, the Catholics...

have a stache for making this of one of my fav games. number one still has to be Ocarina of Time, though.

599132 sorry if I sounded like a a hole

I'm liking how the stories shaping up, its got serious potential:twilightblush:

You have to work on grammar and spelling, such as the "high" in the first part should be changed to "hi"

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You know that feeling you get when you want to go into a ditch after doing something insanely stupid.

This is a good start for a story like this, I hope you do more.:twilightsmile:
Remember John, babysteps

622874 I have been praying for a corssover that brings John into Equis! AND MINE PRAYERS HATH BEEN ANSWERED!!!

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Actual chapter. Why would a written-er-typed story need a filler?

SO....SHORT....NEED....MORE....CHAPTERS!!!

Interesting indeed. John is gonna have to do some training with teleknesis so he can shoot like a sharpshooter once more.:rainbowdetermined2:

So... Discord is now a whimpering waste of space lackey? What.:facehoof::applejackconfused:

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I was trying to get the "something so powerful it makes even Discord coward in fear" feel.

well..........family is't so far away huh

Well then this is GONNA BE GOOD!

I don't get why other authors get so worked up over short waits (2 weeks to 4 months) between chapters.

Life happens. Readers should accept that. I mean, one of the first fanfics that I've ever read hasn't updated in 5 years and I'm still content on waiting.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Applejack.png

If it was good enough for me to put it in my favorites list, then it's good enough for me to wait till the end of my days.:eeyup:

Just wondering if there is a well established theory on AJ's parents; I don't want to make any inconsistencies.

741680 Not that I know of. Most people just say they died.

I think I see where this is going. I remember John Marston mentioning early on in the game that he had a daughter who died... :applejackunsure:

ogogogogogogogogogogogaaaaaaaaaa.........

ok calmed down now I thought this story was dead and yes your back!!!!!!!

Why haven't I given this story a like yet? Oh well, I just did it.

Update! And it only took SIX MONTHS.

Of all the things you make him ... Fuck ....:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

God sat on his glorious throne, pondering what to do with this poor soul, "John Marston... hm... I will send this masculine outlaw with an outrageous body-count to the world of My Little Pony! NEXT!"

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