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primeoetgrunn


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Fluttershy finds a wounded tiger in the Everfree Forest. She decides to take it home with her to help it heal from its wounds. The tiger, however, has a secret, a secret Equestria should never be aware of: The secret of the BEAST WARS.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 22 )

short but an ok story so far. Also are there any other beast war/mlp cross overs?:applejackunsure: because I cant find any and I think they would be awesome.:ajsmug:

940476 I noticed that this is, in fact, the only one that combines Beast Wars with MLP:FIM on the entire internet.:pinkiegasp:

how funny is that! :twilightsmile:

940536 That's the same with my fanfic!

940771 I do not appreciate this kind of comments :moustache:

BEGONE!!!:flutterrage:

940536 Actually, there's another MLP:FIM/BW on fanfiction.net, starring Waspinator of the Predacons.

Finally! A Beast Wars crossover! =3

I'll will admit though, this story is short and needs some grammar fixing, but other than that, the story's good. Keep it up. Let's see where this goes. =3

953139 thanks :pinkiehappy:

As for the grammar, I will see what I can do :twilightsheepish:

Sorry for the super short chapter guys, major writersblock:twilightblush:

Really, Celestia, really?:ajbemused: When is it not about Twilight with you?:ajsmug:

I think you need to make these stories longer if you want to attract more readers. Just saying. :twilightsmile:

XD And Celestia never was able to think of the Vok in the same sense again. BOW CHICKA BOW WOW. :pinkiecrazy:

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Okay so two things, while I like the idea of this, you should condense a few of these. Chapters together, and add more theatrical details. Then you will be grand.

Great now the Vok are involved.

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