optic sensor of the tiger

by primeoetgrunn

The beauty and the Beast wars: part 2

"Celestiaaaaaa..." A voice sounded through the bedroom of the sun-godess.

"Who said that?" Celestia asked.

"Give us back the maximalllll!" The voice responded.

"Who are you?"

"We are the Vok." Two chromed skulls with hair coming from the back of their head, came flying out of the prinsesses mirror.

"What are you two?" Celestia asked, scared of the Vok its appearance.

After that question, the Vok dissapeared.

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The next morning, princess Celestia could not stop thinking of the Vok.

"Sister, is someting the matter?" the princess of the night asked.

"Huh? What?" Celestia responded, her mind still at last night.

"We asked if someting was the matter." Luna said.

"Yes, someting is the matter, dear sister." the eldest of royal sisters responded. "And I fear it has someting to do with that disturbance I felt yesterday."

"What is the matter, then?" Luna asked.

"I had a visit from another god." Celestia told her younger sister.

Luna got a red face when her sitser talked about another god in her room.

"No, Luna! Not that kind of visit!" Celestia got the same shade of red on her face.

"This god was from another species... It talked about a Maximal, and wanting it back."

"Did it give a name?" Luna asked.

"The Vok." Celestia stared out of the nearest window in her sight.

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Comments

[CaptRicoSakara]

I think you need to make these stories longer if you want to attract more readers. Just saying.

[RaptorCalloftheShadows]

XD And Celestia never was able to think of the Vok in the same sense again. BOW CHICKA BOW WOW.

[primeoetgrunn]

1303126 o yeah?
bwint.net/vok3.jpg

[RaptorCalloftheShadows]

1303872 Rawr~!

[josue]

[Tempestus]

Okay so two things, while I like the idea of this, you should condense a few of these. Chapters together, and add more theatrical details. Then you will be grand.

[Edguy0009]

Great now the Vok are involved.

[schorpioen007]

Is this story dead or not ?