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Edmar Fecler

As you might have noticed; i am a Ditzy finatic. (what? she's flippin awesome!) I enjoy writing Fanfics, and will continue doing so until i get good enough to publish a full story. :derpytongue2:


On the way to Zecora's, the CMC have a run-in with a very ill-temprerd manticore. Fortunately for them, they are saved by a giant snake, but not before the surpent is gravely injured. The CMC decide to help the serpent by taking it to the pony that has the most experience with wild animals.

What could possibly go wrong?

(edited by Flutterguy_6996)

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 36 )

It may seem a bit dark at first, but it gets better. thats why the tag isnt up there. :twilightblush:

I for one welcome our new serpent overlord.

Please let him pursue the fish-aren't-sentient copout, it is canon after all.


Curse you! You did it already!

"Might change synopsis as story progresses."

PLEASE tell me you aren't writing this story as you go along without writing at least a proper outline ahead of time? :rainbowhuh:

270543 oh no i know what i'm going to do. :twilightsmile:
i've just found it hard to write an acurate synopis. :twilightblush:

YOU SIR ARE A BEAST! That was very well written, it gave me a legitimate sense of panic meaning that I empathized with Lemon Drops terror. Which is something that you don't see too often in writing. Keep doing what you're doing buddy, this is awesome. And if you never update, I will find you...

270758 When it comes to updating; fret not. :twilightsmile:
I plan on updating this weekly, as i do Left 4 Derpy (unless i'm delayed for whatever reason:facehoof:).

Thank you much for the compliments, by the way. :pinkiehappy:


A giant intelligent snake in ponyville... never read anything like that before, will be interesting to see where you going whit this

Y'know I was actually thinking of writing a similar fiction to this. Then I saw this a while back. It would just feel like I'm copying now :L
I gotta write faster...
Good story bro!
have a brohoof /)


Snake is best pony.

Nice, very nice. Didn't see that change in direction coming so quickly, but hell, I can dig it.


forgoth i was tracking this, was a while seans last update.
good chapter i who'd say, the story line did progress a bit fast and alot of thing happened in this one chapter but still it didn't feel forced or rushed.
good to see you gave some linguistic problem with the snake, I think it makes it more interesting in communications where hampered in some way.

737830 thanks for the posative feedback, and i'm glad you're enjoying it. :pinkiehappy:

and about the 'communication' topic; i figured it would be a ton harder for him to convince ponies that he's good.
that, and its a magical land. aside from what is seen in the show, we have no idea what kind of animals can talk and not talk. :trollestia:

What is Snake's name? Anyway, I CANNOT wait for the next epic awesome installment.

Can't believe I forgot to track this.:facehoof: Anyway, good show!

Holy shit, this is still alive!? Good to have you back man!

I'm really glad to see this update, I only know of two stories here that revolve around a large snake.

YES! FINALLY! Been waiting for this to come out for a while... :pinkiehappy:

2059625 What is the other one? I am sad to admit that it took me a bet to remember this story.

2059714 I believe it's titled "King of Serpents: Concord's Dawn".

I am happy to see an update.

Good story so far; hope to see an update soon

Lovely story so far. Id love to have a snake like Kenny. Given how small ponies are compared to humans a very large Anaconda like Kenny would seem absolutely huge. But I think Kenny's description makes him look more like a titanoboa. Those could become over 40ft long and 7ft thick. Maybe Kenny is a very young titanoboa and he will grow larger xD.

Thankfully my dislike for this story is not proportional to the amount of dead ponies.

Unless it's Fluttershy. Then you're :yay:ed

I like this story. I wish to see more.

8793242 i plan to get back to it, i just dont know when it'll happen :fluttershyouch:

Well enough is enough! I've had it! With these gosh dang snakes in these gosh dang stories!

Please continue

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