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Edmar Fecler


As you might have noticed; i am a Ditzy finatic. (what? she's flippin awesome!) I enjoy writing Fanfics, and will continue doing so until i get good enough to publish a full story. :derpytongue2:

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Twilight wakes up alone and scared on an unfamiliar ship with a group of unfamiliar humanoids. Things take a turn for the worst when the group find themselves trapped on a ship overrun with mutated damntations that will stop at nothing to kill the humans and the out of place pony.

Teaming up with fellow survivor Isaac Clarke, Twilight attempts to escape the abominations and find her way back home. But can she really trust Isaac's sanity?


(This is the reboot of I have a Jar of Dirt's popular story. For those of you who dont know, he passed it on to me to complete; which i was more than glad to accept.)

((proofread by Zaponator and Flutterguy_6996))

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We are gonna do this?

HELL YA!!!

...why... Why must you put ponies in terrible situations?

...Why is it always so entertaining!?

I award you one mustache point to be traded in at any participating dealer at your earliest convenience.:moustache:

I...I.....
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Whoo dead space:yay: :pinkiehappy: just wait till chapter two, oh I will also be joining your backstage cast nighty-whitey
what backstage cast
you'll see, you'll see
Okaaaayy that was weird, weirder than pinkie making sense at any point in time
Hey I heard that

Read the derpy one now this has caught my attention just randomly searching the site.

Whoo! Glad it's back!

OH GOD YES I LOVE YOU YESSSS:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

His legacy lives on. Let's take a look.

YES all of my yes

In the words of Frank West. FANTASTIC!!
That was amazing I love crossovers and I LOVE dead space so this was just a joy to read. PLEASE POST MORE!!:eeyup:

Necromorphs don't decay.

please update faster then the original two renditions off this story.....

I can't even begin to list all the kinds of happy I was when I noticed this on the front page.

It's back! It's finally back!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Isaac talks?

ALL THE DOWNVOTES!

I kid, I kid. This is pretty ace. Watching with interest.

2420910 I agree hope you can give this story the attention it didnt get the last time xD

2421559 2420910 The plan is a chapter at least every two weeks, if all goes well. :twilightsmile:

Hah! I always love crossovers. I'd imagine their reactions when ponies and humans come face-to-face!

All right!
The best Dead Space crossover ever returns. :pinkiehappy:
I look forward to more. :twilightsmile:

this fanfiction is is pretty damn good, you may continue this. :moustache:

P.S. LOVE THIS FANFIC:raritystarry::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

Still love the concept. Still has all the problems ihajod's original version did.
Several aspects of Dead Space canon and continuity are being disregarded, mainly. Not that I mind all that much if it doesn't follow the game exactly, just making sure those issues are creatively intentional rather than errors.
Also there are a few other minor issues, such as how Isaac's RIG could be described from Twi's perspective while he is facing her.

2421965 well, to be completely honest i'm revamping the first ones he did to have a good start before i pick it up. :twilightblush:
also, with the RIG; just cause its not facing her doesnt mean she cant see a glowin aura behind him. :unsuresweetie:

point is, i'll be making improvments where need be in due time

Please update some more, I have no stories to read! :raritydespair:

-Kiryu :moustache:

2408080

Is there are shorter URL you can use? Stupidly long URLs like that are rubbish, especially for such a small image...

I think it would of been more interesting to have twilight awaken on the Ishimura, only to be discovered by Issac, and save her life from the inhabitants. But this works just as well. :pinkiehappy:

Don't forget to credit the guy who came up with the cover art.

so...Dead Space one i take it? i will fave bravo

Buck you sleep im reading this here story

Yes...YES! MOAR DEAD SPACE! MOAR PONIES!

...this is going to be amazing...

yay adoption! :pinkiehappy: I hope for the best :pinkiecrazy:

Make us whole :pinkiehappy:

It's about fucking time!! This was taking forever!!

Isaac was dumbfounded. He had never expected to find a talking unicorn in the closet.

Sounds like the beginning of a good night to me :trixieshiftright:

Fill me up with your hot sticky compelling plotline.:raritywink:


Damn, dat URL.
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Criticism!

The unexpected clatter caused her focus wavered

...what?

something running down the middle of his back that glowed a pale, bluish-green.

How does she know it's glowing if it's on Isaac's back, and he's facing her?

2432682 I can't believe I miss these sometimes :facehoof:. Thanks for pointing them out, they will be fixed right away! :twilightblush::twilightsmile:

well this should be interesting. mildly.

I've read the original one, like many others, and was hooked, this one still has that same feel and I ask that you continue please. :twilightsmile:

And thus then fun begins~
Gotta love the terror slashers invoke. :pinkiecrazy:

Jesus... Well there goes Twilight's sanity.

The point I made in THIS THREAD HERE still stands though.

poor twilight.....

soo much nostalgia cant wait for the next chapter

And now it is time for the pew pews.

okay obvoiusly Issac is getting a plasma cutter, is Twilight just going to use magic to rip the monsters apart?

This is so awesome!:pinkiehappy: Can't wait to see what kind of weapon Issac gives Twilight Sparkle to use. I hope its the Plasma Cutter. That was always my favorite weapon to use in Dead Space. Can't wait for the next chapter. :heart:

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