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Luna has been plagued by visions of an apocalyptic future ruled by necromorphs. There is hope, however; she has also seen a creature able to effectively slay the necromorphs, as well as destroy their markers. But will he help them?

No previous knowledge of Dead Space is Required.
Takes place during the Dead Space 3 ending, as well as the Dead Space 3 DLC "Awakened"

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 54 )

Wow the rewrite is very epic and awesome at the same time the new luna death from that necromorph I forget the name they called him was very well detailed if I do say so myself.
Keep up the good work:pinkiehappy:

very good, do you plan to rewrite the entire thing?

You will rewrite the beginning of the story? :rainbowhuh:

what made you decide to rewrite this?:rainbowderp:

4152257 Yeah, i'm trying to rewrite the entire story
4152311 Yes i rewrote the prologue, and i'm going to try to do so with the rest of the story.

4152420

ahhhhh i figured something was going on since the updates slowed down alot. good luck, i look forward to reading your improvements!

Much better than the first prologue! Hope to see the story delve into a much needed detailing. Hope to see where this goes, and all the power to ye. :pinkiehappy:

4152420 I suggest that you remove the rest of the chapters that you are goung to remake if you want newcomers to the story to avoid confusion.

All in all, I enjoyed it, and it is indeed much better than the original. Kudos, my friend, and until next we meet.

Much better then the original. i feel more intertwined with the story. keep up the awesome work.

Definitely more improvement in this one!

When I saw this update I was happy but then I saw the title, it was prologue, I first thought was wat. But If chapters were more like this(just longer) we will have a great story. SO CONTINUE!!!!

Wow, this is great! I really like it. But I have one tiny question... Is this all just a dream Luna is having?:rainbowhuh:
Sorry if I missed something.

4163048 all will be revealed

Comment posted by The Digital Guy deleted Apr 17th, 2014

I just hope the first chapter comes out soon...

Comment posted by The Digital Guy deleted Apr 17th, 2014

4233078 I got the hint the first time. If that was indeed intentional

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Sorry about that, my internet lagged the moment I clicked "Add Comment", making three appear as I vigorously tried to make it work.

Much better than the original, I just got around to reading the rewrite. I hope to see more of this in the future. :pinkiesmile:

4307047 to be completely honest, with finals around the corner, i'm not going to do any updates. Summer tho? that is when i'm going to get a schedule and try and constantly update

4312925 i understand very well so don't worry :3

4786439 the chapter's already done. Need input on it, expect it in the next day.

i am going to be honest.... dead space series is dead to me if they make a 4 one i will be happy but besides that :fluttercry::ajsleepy::pinkiesad2:

4794619 They won't make Dead Space 4. I won't say why in the comments because of spoilers to other people, but there definitely won't be DS4.

4794645 please pm me as to why:rainbowkiss: I played all of the dead space games and I'd love to hear definitive proof they arent going to make more. Pretty please with sugar on top?:pinkiesad2:

when I read the premise and I enjoyed the intensity that you wanted to give to your story, I knew that it was worth waiting for. This chapter was great and I would like to see how you can mix all the harmonic elements and characters of mlp with the intensity and anguish of dead space. crossover like this, done right, are rare and therefore very good to read, so if you want a hand I am always available and I bet you'll get help from many others.:twilightsheepish:

what makes it interesting for me this type of crossover is one of my ideas about the " magic " relics of unknown origin. nobody knows where the Marker comes from (ignoring dead space 3) and is therefore considered alien ... but nobody know where the tree of harmony and the elements comes from; both are relics of immense power, albeit opposite, with an unknown origin ... really intriguing, what do you think of this ? :moustache:

4794645 EA has said otherwise.

4794869 There is NO WAY EA can allow a fourth Dead Space game.
Unless it follows another story pre-DS3, there's no fuckin' way they can make another Dead Space game.

Link me to where they say more Dead Space.

OSK

Oh, you took down the old chapters and are rewriting them. Wasn't expecting it, but I'm sure the quality will only improve as you go on. Keep up the good work!

4794961 The FB page uses a Dead Space 1 picture as its profile pic, so I wouldn't trust it. They would be up-to-date if it was official. Also, it was made the year BEFORE Dead Space 3 was released.
Also, in that IGN article...

There’s no reason to believe we wouldn’t visit it again.

There is every reason. Everyone is dead as fuck, and you know it.

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the problem with that is that they could make a 4th, the DLC ending of game 3 could be written off as a hallucination of what is to be. or the human race has a sizeable force of people that are like isaac and carver, partially immune to the psycho affects of the moons.

4795644 You can be immune to the Brethren Moons, but can you be immune to being killed?
And it couldn't be a hallucination, because they actually got back to Earth. For real. The hallucinations in the DLC were telling Isaac and Carver of the Moons' imminent arrival and setting Isaac and Carver against each other.

4795698

yeah but thats the cool thing about hallucinations, the final ending could have been a hallucination just like in dead space 1, most thought isaac was ripped apart in the shuttle, but in the second one it was his dementia that attacked him.

4795770 The hallucination attacking him was himself attacking him, since hallucinations aren't real. It couldn't be a hallucination, because we know what world-altering hallucinations look like -- all staticky and orange. That's because a Marker or Brethren Moon is sending out a frequency that causes this to happen. The hallucination filter at the end of Awakened could have simply been because a Brethren Moon was RIGHT NEXT TO THEM.

4795806

maybe, it is after all up to the devs if they wanna pursue it, im just throwing out easy ways they could get around the whole "oh yeah they totally arent dead" thing.

4795923 By "easy", you mean "totally bullshit", right?
I mean, don't get me wrong, Dead Space is a fucking amazing series. But it's done now. It needs to end.

Glory to bookmark :pinkiecrazy:

4795929

lets be honest would that stop you from buying it?

4796159 I don't know. Maybe.
Let's put it this way: I'd rather it end like Breaking Bad than have it turn into Dexter.

That was a amazing argument. Well done

4794645
I would very much like to hear your proof as well...

I hope your FIC is just as good as "Pony Space" :rainbowkiss:

Yo this is pretty gud. I remeber reading the original before the revision. Great story and I love dead space crossovers. This one is great and the way you've delivered it so far is gr8. Luna's craziness is awesome. Hopefully this'll get re-revived sometime. :twilightsmile:

Awesome story! When next chapter!?

When are you going to update this lol, it's been a veeeeeeeery long time.............

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