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Hello, Equestria. My name is Princess Luna, and my sister is an idiot. The object of her idiocy – her faithful student, Twilight Sparkle – appears to share her stupidity. Luckily, I am here to lend them a helping hoof.
I can't really blame them, though. They're just so adorable when they're completely clueless.
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4543209 Okie Dokie! :P
4543229 Why thank you! Credit goes to best fruit and friend Pearple Prose for unearthing this treasure for me.
Again, if you didn't see, please give me a quick upvote here if you enjoyed the story (on the comment). Thanks!
sorry, I just wanted to do that just once.
luna got bucking owned
Points for the title.
Oh, man, Luna's in trouble for this one.
You really need a bit more detail with the final bit, of Twilight's expression of pure rage as she knocks Luna TO THE MOOOOOON!
Am I missing something, or is there a good reason the title is "Parhelion" instead of the astronomically correct "Perihelion"? (I haven't read the story, because I find Twilestia shipfics intolerable in general, but it showed up in my group feed so I figured I'd at least put in my two bits on the part I did read.
)
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"Parhelion" is a phenomenon that occurs within the atmosphere where it appears to a viewer on earth that there are multiple suns.
4543505 Well, learn something new every day, I guess.
This is why Moonbutt is best princess
There have been so many Luna fics lately...
...
...
We need more.
I love it. I really like Twilestia and I also really enjoy Celestia-Luna sisterly interactions, so this fic was just
Luna is much to out of character. If was as smart as she makes herself out to be, she could easily get her sister and Twilight in for a threesome. 3 out of 10 :/
4544290 I'm sorry my friend, I forgot to put a little note in my comment that says completely serious :) my mistake
4544362 Such mean words, my friend. Please give me a moment while I stand in the rain and weep at the loss of a chance at a true bond with random internet user.
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We could have been the best of friends, but now we shall become the greatest of enemies :/
4544372 If you want to start a pathetic hissy fight, take it to the PM's.
You've made your poorly-constructed argument for senseless clop, now move on.
4544392 Please, my friend! Do not weep over my completely serious comment. I shall take my business elsewhere. Would not want to hear your jelly spine finally crack at the sight of conflict, anyway. I do not have very strong stomach.
Have nice day, my friend
4544426 My friend this conversation is over :) If you would like to continue to shower me with compliments than kindly take it to the PM's like author has requested! Over here bullying me while I try to just end conversation :/ the nerve
I haven't read the fic yet but I am enjoying the hell out of the comment section right now.
4544450 As am I, my friend...As am I
I liked the premiss, but the execution left a bit to be desired. The part that took the most from me was the 'Ah ha' scene. There was a fair amount of unnecessary information that played out in such a way as to make Celestia look slow and dim. Notably Celestia explaining the 'dream rules' and taking far too long to put it all together.
4544450 I haven't read it either, these comments are too entertaining at the moment.
So....
1: Nice story! I like your Luna and her attitude! The only problem for me it's that it's too short but it's just me who want always more.
2: Easy guy, what a war for a poorly post comment! For this kind of problems, the best solution is a polite silence, forget what have been previously written and move on. But if you want to continue this absurd war, go on. It's very entertaining to watch.
3: Can we expect a sequel or a story in the same lignes anytime soon?
Amusing
So... you don't have to adhere to the contest rules to enter anymore? That's good to know
Er, Luna happened to jump off the balcony just before Twilight's teleport. I highly doubt Twilight could stay in the air and actually hit Luna immediately after a teleport. It would take at least a few seconds to catch herself when she reappeared in the air. Still, other than that inconsistency in the ending this was a fun little fic, and I really enjoyed it.
Why am I not following you yet?
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Knight of Cerebus has already informed me of my disqualification. Yes, it is a stretch. I knew that from the beginning. I may have my own thoughts about how this is, actually, a story promoting the pairing of Twilight and Celestia, but they-
Oh dear, it appears I have made a critical error (I'm literally reading the rules right now) and I didn't notice that it has to be about meeting her parents. Ouch.
That's all my fault.
Well then.... Regardless, people seem to like this so I'm not too worried. There will be more contests in the future for me to read their rules better in.
Sorry about raising your internal alarm bells, Karrakaz, I really liked your submission too, I think I've given it my vote. Good luck in the contest!
It may not qualify for the contest, but at least its still good.
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
Amazing. Simply hularious
I think you mean "every".
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I looked up the name after reading and was about to comment on its brilliance before I saw that you'd already explained it.
Still, another tidbit for the other readers: another term for a parhelion is "phantom sun".
I cannot get over how perfect this is.
One of the funniest fic i've ever read! 'nuff said!
Hah! One of the best one-offs i've ever seen!
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This made me smile for quite a while.
And that's really good considering how shitty my day has been, so thanks!
You made my day.
Ok, that was quite entertaining. Loved the Orion's belt bit. XD
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Thanks. It wasn't so much 'alarm bells' going off as me reading the story and going "huh... not bad, but where are the parents?"
I will say that Luna totally deserves every bit of what she's going to get.
(Twilight being angry with Celestia might have been a teensy bit out of character but that's neither here nor there)
4543264 But so did Celestia and Twilight. In my best Black Knight voice, "We'll call it a draw."
4543349 Thank you! And yes, yes she is.
4543367 I had a bit at the end (which ended up not making the final edit) that described Luna as getting punched so hard she landed back on the balcony.
4543556 Never truer words spoken. Thank you!
4543565 Quite! I assure you there will be more in the future!
4543592 Thank you!
4544621 Alright, valid critique. I tried to compress the exposition as much as I could, but again, that's always an obstacle.
4544897 A sequel? I don't know. It's an option on the table, of course, but I feel like it would be underwhelming compared to this.
4545019 Thank you!
4545326 Ehhhh, it's a comedy! Physics shmisics! (Thank you!)
4545357 Because I'm shy lil' writer?
4545656 Aww, thanks!
4545701 Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
4546163 Thank you!
4546195 Thanks, I'll take a look at it. It might be a typo, it might be intentional, kinda one of those phrasings that could go either way.
4546238 Thank you so much! I never knew my google search-found title would get this much attention. O.o
4546257 Thanks!
4546330 FOUR gold stars?!
(Thank you!)
4546361 Aw, thank you! I'm glad I've made your day better!
4546487 Thank you! The "whip me with Orion's belt" pops up over my stuff.
Damn brilliant, mate.
Luna's a devious sucker when she wants to be, that's for sure!
I also like how this was a few words removed from being LunaLight.
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~Skeeter The Lurker
4546586 Thank ye! I'll put this shiny ribbon up in the display case.
4546577 Yeah, it could, but it sounds weird as "very".
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I'm not sure, but I think you can't actually put it in the description...
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Ah. I've seen other people do it. But this is from the horse's mouth, so to speak, so I'll take it off.
I really like this scheming Luna. This story is adorable and funny.
This is definitely the funniest story I have read in months!
Very well done sir!
4546577 no prabram.
Definitely landing in my fav list, it made me laugh loudly for a good while.
Luna is very much true to the comic canon, so whoever thinks she's OOC, needs to have their facts checked. And the ending... well, you might straighten out the physics of it a bit (say, Twilight lurking behind the wall of the balcony to encounter Luna as she prepares to take flight), but the hoof to the face... wow. Excellent. I wish for more stories that would be as funny and good-hearted as this one was! Tired with angsty dark stuff. This one stays true to the MLP spirit, while spicing things up for the more mature audience.
Add the words "Which is always" to the description, right before the 100% approved part.