Twilight is angry. Normally, a more calm approach would be useful, but when a pony... When a pony commits that, well, the chips are off the table. Justice must be extracted.
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Silly, soft shipping. Inspired partly by the Chilean god, Pablo Neruda.
I laugh when people think I know what I'm doing.
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'Twas adorable. Bravo!!
The best kind of fluffily adorable! Funny too, and I'd never thought of "Cutie Twi" as a nickname, but now it's stuck in my head. Good show!
homes should be home
I'd replace jinxed with jinked, assuming you meant that she swerved or took evasive action.
Also, thanks to Pearp and Astarea for handling the group-addition duties. Here, have a few more. Wow, we TwiLuna-types are
an incestuousa mutually supportive bunch, aren't we?and that is why I Love Twilight Sparkle
Cuuuute~
Have an upgoat for silly Cutie Twi and Lulu shenanigans.
This was an adorable little bit of Twiluna
This is delightfully silly.
Nice, I love watching Twilight just bulldoze through anything in her way.
4289238 Incest is best cest. Especially if Princest. Then it's wincest.
4289621 You should feel ashamed of yourself! Contribute!
Pablo Neruda was awsome
I know that poem. It was read by at a wedding I took pictures of a few months ago.
Very adorable piece of work. I love the added details you put in like the duck and how you went highly overboard in everything. It made for a great comedy piece of TwiLuna.
fucking brilliant read. thoroughly enjoyed through and through.
have an upvote and fave.
Sorry for not replying earlier, I was away all day.
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Thank you very much!
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Cutie Twi made me feel like a witty bastard for approximately 7.2 seconds. Then I realized I'm a corny lil' doofus.
Also, this TwiLuna community is very nice one, if you're nice to it back. Astarea and Pearp are particularly awesome, though.
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Cutie Twi & Lulu, fighting seriousness one prank at a time. Also, upgoat :P
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Yes! Score! By the end, that's exactly what I wanted to hear <3
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Was? Good heavens, he still is! Granted, he is over 40 years dead now, but as Shakespeare puts it: Not marble, nor the gilded monuments/Of princes, shall outlive this powerful rhyme. The inked word outlives its creator.
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Thanks! I'm glad you recognized the poem. And yeah, I guess in my delirium (as I wrote this, as it was first intended to be a more serious piece) I started making everything sillier and sillier, and then Darius the Duck was born, and the rest is history. But, once again, thank you!
Ta da! Another silly story that made me smile.
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Heritage
Dating Of A Godly Variety
The Orange Apple and the Bookworm
Daring Do
Tears in the Snow
A Clash of Lightnings
I'm Captain America
The Twilight Hours
Clockwork
Ungrounded
AAAAAANNND... FEATURED! Excellent work, pal. You deserve it.
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Aw, thanks Willsons!
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Is it wrong to say I didn't quite want this to be featured?
I mean, it's something I put a level of effort into that is, well... far below what I have for other stories. It was just some silly fun, and testing myself as to whether I could write absurdity.
4291908 I just realized your name was a LEXX reference.
...Oh my.
I LIKE!
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That was...cute. So very CUTE
Really Twi?.Just .
Bending the spine of a book is a serious offence.
Twilight should have at least turned Luna to stone for a few moments.
So the apple doesn't fall far from the tree....
No wonder celestia is so understanding of Twilight's sometimes-erratic, tendency the freak the buck out over small bullshit... she's just like celestia!
Hehe, this has definitely improved my day. Thank you.
My ass and I are on the ground laughing, because I literally LAUGHED MY ASS OFF!!!
I must have more of this story, and the Darius the duck side story as well. I lol'd a little too much at this story. my everything hurts. I loved it
Uhm... not really sure what to say about this, I see where you wanted to go with this (I think) but I didn't really find it funny, more silly. Is that good? I don't know...
This was cute, sweet, and hilarious. And Cutie Twi? Heh.
It's fun, but Luna feels rather out of character. I get the feeling that her relationship with Twilight has changed both, but since I don't know how, some of her antics are rather jarring.
Still, a fun romp. Thank you for it.
This story is excellent!! I must have read it three times now and I love it! The pacing was good for a one shot, but I still want to see French maid Celestia! ;) in all seriousness you have a talent for writing and you carry on with more stories (OctaScratch?). Oh and Cutie Two... Adorable!
This was really fun. Thanks!
That. Was. AWESOME! Leave it to Twi to get so worked up over a book! But the best part in the whole story....
All hail Darius the Vanquisher of Turtles!
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HAIL!
I must agree with you Luna, Twilight is adorable when she's angry
This was as great as your other stories!
I don't like TwiLuna. I'm making an exception for this fic cause its adorable.
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Characters are just a certain type of paint with which we make an image. Or something like that. (Thanks!)
I think alicorns tend to overreact a little.
What, does Luna expect folks to come after her with grasers (gamma ray lasers)? And if so, what size, Super Dreadnought?