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KaBar42


I write pones and Humans. Or, at least, try to. Also a massive faggot for Sabaton. PM me Joakim pics.

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It all happened at Zero-Five-Zero. The "event" happened. This event would change the history of both worlds and end in a needless loss of life.

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... There better be a sequel mate.

GOD THAT was like pear harbor backwords

4428518

I'm sorry, do you mean Pearl Harbor?

4428523 soory spell check but ya it the Japaneses from WW2 for poted to the 21st century

More than one hundred casualties in the span of less than four minutes on a fight against seven or eight elements?

You're right, Celestia, you did awake something. Only it wasn't a Major. It was a fucking juggernaut.

Short story is, Celestia wanted peaceful relations with kick-ass Americans, but first contact was a lost due to the guard being a supreme dumbass...

I love it!

lots of dead ponies and no K.I.A. For the Americans. Only one soldier being wounded.

give that man a purple heart.

America~...
America~...
America.
FUCK YEAH!
Comin to save the mother fuckin day yeah!

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Well, it was a bunch of Guard-stallions charging against a small convoy armed with .50s and marines with Rifles.

It makes sense.

I demand either a sequel or a continuation! But if you don't want to, that's fine..

4428550 Well, the lack of damage on the human side (which cannot have seen this as more than a minor skirmish) may allow our two civilizations to make amends still. Moreso if Glint is shown in his punishment.

The last line reads a little weird. But it's okay...

I faved this because I see an epic story at hand.
Maybe Celestia didn't know about them untill after the battle and would have wanted a peaceful relation.
That is what I want to see. But it is your story.

Okay, at least it wasn't deliberate policy by the nations of both sides to kill one another, just the idiocy of one commander.

...Of course, that might be enough to kill off relations for a while in and of itself, but a good and peaceful ruler like Celestia should be able to make peace.

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He will probably see some sort of punishment.

Especially since people seem to want a sequel or continuation.

Dude! Make a sequel, this was amazing!

Oh sounds epic. I like how Celestia seems to acknowledge humanities technological prowess, yet the ponies still put up a good fight.

So, the verdict...

... I liked it.

The story was short and to the point, but it was a well written set of action scenes. I also liked that this was based mostly on miscommunication rather than one side being over the top dicks. There's also plenty of room for a continuation from this point.

Overall, well worth a favorite and a like.

4428662

Well, seems like the fans want a sequel or continuation.

Meh, ok.

4428568 he was trying to quate the Japaneses after peral harbor

Ah, Staff Sargent, what would we do without you?

- Staff Sergeant.

Military protocol is reasonably accurate — at least enough to suspend disbelief.

Good pacing and I see an interesting First Contact situation occuring.

Also, I'm very curious as to what could cause Steel Glint to launch an unprovoked attack. No intel, no provocation, nothing.

4428666 a fight thet nailed ONE guy in the shoulder with and arrow and lost 150 guys, if anything it was just a another day at the slughter house

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Honestly?

I wasn't sure which sarge to go with.

I was going to do a gunny, but realized that was bit cliché.

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But they never said 'Major' they said 'Giant'
That's why it's called 'Waking the sleeping giant'

4428760

I was actually referring to an Ursa Major.

Well everyone is saying it so I might as well throw in my two cents and say that a sequel or continuation would be much appreciated.

A one-shot...


*inhales*

A FUCKING ONE SHOT!? Bro, this is a gold mine just sitting and staring at us and you call this a ONE-SHOT!!

I implore you...

KUNTINUE. DIS. STOREH!!!

I'm late, but I'll jump on the sequel train. Do it.

I'm not sure I can say exactly why I liked this story, it just seemed like what would happen at first contact if the ponies were being led by an idiot.

4428675 Yes plz.


4428673 Yes. I like that aspect as well. When I clicked on it I was worried it was either a humans are bastards story, or else a conquest of earth by ponies. Glad to see I was wrong. The deaths were caused by an incompetent officer on one side; it wasn't policy set by the leaders. Nice job, and I would love to see this continued.

4428666
Shit, if that's what you consider a good fight, I'd hate to see your concept of a curb stomp!

Wait, a one-shot?

This has the potential for a huge expanded universe!

4429119

It's not a one-shot anymore.

.................. and no one thought of taking the guns with magic?
seriously, ponies aren't stupid. ..................

and no at most they woke up a queen chrysalis, cause all they have to do is take their weapons. hell cdelestia could just butcher the entirety of that unite herself. fry the entirety of them in a few seconds and have their wepaons studied. next thing we know they will have bordlerands 2 type weaponry.

Saw Marine HiE :facehoof:

Then saw Kabar wrote it. :rainbowkiss:

Will read shortly.

4429176

You are fucking stupid.

You are so fucking supid.

A.) It was a convoy. They all had guns.
B.) Uh, Celestia was beaten by a bug using second hand love. She's not surviving a 5.56 round shot at her.
C.) So Celestia can take on the entire US Military.

:rainbowlaugh:

That is taking stupid to new lows even for you.

D.) She can't fry the entirety of the convoy because she can't.

No bullshit background story, BAM! CONTACT!

I like it.

will admit that is what would happen, but only at first. the ponies have magic, and that magic is a FAR greater power than anything a human can create. hell they could create HATS that repel bullets if given a few hours.

if you want an idea how how powerful pony created items can be, look at Fallout Equestria. they reduce the magic to a far lesser degree than in the show, in my opinion, and they still have incredibly powerful weaponry. and they created all of that stuff within a decade, even creating laser pistols because magic allows them to bypass many limitations.
it took us centuries to evolve past the musket, and we cannot even grasp the idea of directed energy weaponry as we are now.

basically in that sotry they went from winchester rifles to plasma launcher within a decade.

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I'm sorry, but you are so absolutely fucking dumb.

if you want an idea how how powerful pony created items can be, look at Fallout Equestria. they reduce the magic to a far lesser degree than in the show, in my opinion, and they still have incredibly powerful weaponry. and they created all of that stuff within a decade, even creating laser pistols because magic allows them to bypass many limitations.

:ajbemused:

You're really using a fucking fanfic as evidence? God, you're stupid.

it took us centuries to evolve past the musket, and we cannot even grasp the idea of directed energy weaponry as we are now.

Care to tell me where the ponies currently are? Still using gold armor and spears.

4429190 ................ changelings are fueled by love. she consumed so much love it fueled her magic to a level great enough to knock out celestia........ every time someone uses that as an excuse are exposing their lack of thoguht. it is not second hand if she FEEDS on it. it would be like saying a vampire only one because of feeding on second hand blood.

celestia, using only a simple release of magic from her horn, is able to blast through solid stone. that is not even really a spell from the looks of things, since even common civilian ponies are capable of that, or at least it is an immensely simple spell.
now imagine if she used destructive magic against the convoy, converting the powe to tear through rock into an explosive flare and send it into the middle of the convoy............ likely they would all be charred corpses within seconds.

celestia could kill a convoy by simply charging up her horn, falling in front of them, and sweeping the beam across them. or, preferably, behind them.

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likely they would all be charred corpses within seconds.
celestia could kill a convoy by simply charging up her horn, falling in front of them, and sweeping the beam across them. or, preferably, behind them.

You really think they'd give her time to attack? She'd have a bullet in her brain as soon her horn flared.

And you're using headcanon again.

4429208 and they can create skyscrapers as well and modern cities yet sitll have everyone driven by carriage. ponies are eclectic and create what they need. likely that means creating other magics or weaponry to match humanity.

why not use a fanfic? this is a fanfic showign the impossible possibility of human meeting ponies as is, and that is impossible in the hsow.

besides it is a good idea of what ponies could vcreate, and how their magic could allow them to rapidly excelerate their development. like i said winchester to plasma launchers.

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