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KaBar42
I write pones and Humans. Or, at least, try to. Also a massive faggot for Sabaton. PM me Joakim pics.
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like and a fave for potential
Faved and liked. It does have a lot of potential, and the spelling/grammar/writing style is pretty good as well. I also enjoy these types of "What Really Happened" alternate-history-type stories. I look forward to the next chapters.
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Thank you both very much.
Interesting premise, it has my continued attention, for now.
Not reading yet just going to fave then go exercise before reading.
Like and faving for serious story potential!
so the guy who head was shot off won't he regen again and start over his twisted plan?
I LIK IT
hohoho I like
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What do you like, if I may ask?
4287388 The setup you got going on right now. Trust me when I say a good setup is half of a great story. Now all you have to do is capitalize on it. From what I have seen here though you will do so with flying colors.
im hoping to see ponies reactions to finding out he created everything how many more chapters until that happens?
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Not a whole more, I just need to finish up this arc, and then we move to modern day MLP.
4287588 im currently reading michael i love stories like that
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Be sure to leave a comment.
Glad ya like it, by the way.
I NEED more
It is a very interesting story with loads of potential! your very talented and i would love to see more of this in the future.
fav and like for the potential and it hooked me
well this was interesting not the best I've seen but possibly the most original of your stories and it seems to have better flow than Guardian of the Everfree at least this far in i wasn't very impressed with GotE I've read several Marine winds up in equestria fics and yous while by far not the worst is not really the best written or even the most interesting I thumbs upped it anyway because it was still worth the hour it took to read haven't read A Pregnant Problem yet but I'll probably do that tonight But id do like this story simply because I thing the hearths warming story is widely neglected as are the windigoes so I'll be looking forward to when next this updates.
I do howwever greatly apriciate how you don't shove weapon pictures into your fic it drives me nuts how every single time a gun is mentioned authours feel compelled to include a picture. If I wanted to see the damn gun I'd Google the name
So. What I'm seeing is a Celestia and Luna Origin Story, mixed in with what feels like Halo and WH40K.
I like this.
Alot.
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Glad to hear you like it.
Well I checked it out like you asked, I find that this one's a lot better that the original, if a little confusing to follow during the fight scenes. My only real complaint is the spelling and grammar could be improved greatly and that the Human/Phoenix character seems to be a little bit over-powered. Then again who doesn't like an OP character every now and again?
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Goddamnit, it's always those two things.
Grammar's not my strongpoint. And I miss small things when I'm typing.
Eh, there's a reason for that. In the grandscale, it's not... natural strength, if you will.
Meh, the chapters he's had so far make him look OP, I'm hoping to smooth that out when I rewrite the other chapters.
5827011 OK, good luck with future chapters.
I don't have a comparison, but it appears well done.
I love it!
Wow, it's great to see this many updates
Hope you have as fun writing this story as it is to read
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I'm glad to hear you had fun reading it!
I have to ask, is this story going somewhere beyond 'superpowered human solves everything and is superior in every way?' Because all events so far have been pretty slanted in Dante's favour.
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Well I would like to make the point that when you're as powerful as Dante is, you can usually afford to bull rush your problems and they'll succeed, usually. Because if diplomacy fails, just kill everyone who's opposing you and the problem's done with! And given the ponies' track record of fighting, it would make sense that a tens of millennia old immortal Human hybrid who has been doing nothing but fighting his entire life is going to be able to force his way through the ponies.
But Dante's "Just keep walking through all your problems" mentality isn't going to work all the time and not every conflict is going to come out in his favor. As seen in his encounter with the unicorn mare that stole his only way home.
So the short answer is: This story is going to involve a lot of shit coming toward's Dante. Some of it he'll avoid, some of it will hit him and some of it will hit his allies.
Dante's luck is running out and eventually he is going to slip up and make a mistake he can't recover from.
Looks like a cool story! Why is this mature, though? I don't see a gore, sex, or swear warning...?
Congratulations on reaching a hundred likes
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Thanks!
I see what you're doing.
All the subtle human references, my bet he's been on Earth the whole time.
And also, PUBG! Yeah I saw that one too.
Liked the chapter, I feel like you went over board on AJ's lines, a mite bit hard to read the first time.
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Well ah reken that's just y'all's gersh-durned uhpinyun!
No, seriously though, I completely understand. It's hard to get the accent down without making it look like actual verbal diarrhea.
Please do not write out accents. It makes the text atrocious and annoying to read to the point where I started wondering if the section was important or if I could skip it. It also broke my immersion in the text because I started to think less about the story and more about the actual text/writing itself as I had to spend extra one figuring out what was actually being said.
Just going to say it.
That pen trick was great, I totally didn't fall for it.
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Truly, MP Onyx Dark has an unhealthy and sick obsession with writing instruments.
The Parliament has attempted to get him help before, but he refuses to accept that he has a problem.
Why would you challenge him like this?
Noo! This is best HiE I ever read! Why does it cut off here? Now I'll have to wait who knows how long for another chapter
She belongs to him now. You took his wife, he took your most prized pony.
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Why didn't venus just close the doors to keep the changelings out?
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Twilight would have been trapped in there while the changelings would be able to amass troops outside the entrance. There was also no running water and limited non-perishable food. Trapping Twilight in there would have been a death sentence, Venus took these factors into consideration and made the decision that reanimating Dante to fight off these creatures was the safest course of action.
I like the story so far but it keeps going in and out the past
the military uses M4's, M16A3's, M16A4's, and M4A1's, not AR-15's, AR-15's are civilian only
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I am aware. These ARs were bought and modified by the Imperium to look like M4s to be issued to Earth bound Imperial troops.