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French brony. That's about it (at least untill my plan to conquer the world with evil pastries are met with well deserved success).

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I didn't notice many spelling mistakes, but there were a few spaces missing. And I love the chapter, very good.

I have seen stories with worse English than this...

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Thanks, I do my best :pinkiehappy:
Spaces missing though...

Bloody hilariously brilliant, doing a good job for your first time with English, pal. Might be even better than me!

Scary stuff in this chapter, but we meet the main character! ...Well characters... Sought of... Oh well! Awesome and gory chapter here! Discord saving the day? That's a first!

Bloody hilarious. Brilliant chapter.

That was, again, bloody hilarious. I love this story! It's so awesome.

Absolutely brilliant, it's a shame they haven't ever seen the outside world. It must be an amazing experience for them. Damn, this is awesome.

Alright we're off to a good start and we have some great writing to boot. My good sir, you have earned my like and my favorite.

Probably the funniest fic I have read.

What a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Comment posted by Randomanous deleted Feb 24th, 2014

Nice chapter. Whether not wether however.

tears to my eyes, puts the lotion in the basket :rainbowkiss:

Covered in Chicken feathers, eh? I can't wait to hear her excuse.

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I know, right? New chapter is best chapter.:pinkiehappy:

4348118 always. I still don't get it, who could possibly not appreciate a chicken shower?

Soo, will Luna suffer consequences for her actions anytime soon? If I understood the chapter correctly, her invasive nature could've killed Recto's mind or whatever in the dream, and then she unleashed an attack that could've destroyed his body.

Also, Discord isn't really living up to his promise so far.

4434898 when has discord ever lived up to his promises

4435068 He didn't really seem to lie all that much during their first encounter. (Canon)

4437029 he is chaos, he is unpredictable. And also crazy

As well as no logic is valid

4437029 Trying to apply logic? You must be new here. :moustache:
(I swear, we seriously need a Discord smiley or something...)

I hope some 'pony' either dies or gets seriously hurt soon. Gotta keep that conflict meter at high you know.

4491063 No way! That be just awful for some 'pony' either dieing or getting seriously hurt.Please be Blueblood. Please be Diamond Tiara. Please be ether one.

Keep going... What's with the last part?

Forgive me if I'm confused about this, but doesn't "livid" mean angry?

Ohh this just got interesting.

The plot thickens...

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Actually, I kinda don't know. I'm mostly copying a french expression "ĂȘtre livide" which basically means you look really, really pale. Like a corpse to be precise.:pinkiesick:
But I also know that the english expression "he/she is livid" is assumed to mean "he/she is furious", even though the word "livid" in english and "livide" in french have the same meaning. :facehoof:
Does it sounds strange? I was aiming to say she looked pale.

I assume the last paragraph wasn't intended to be bolded?

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Whoops, I hadn't noticed. :twilightoops:
Thanks for the notice. Guess I'll now check the others for this kind of errors. :twilightsheepish:

Now, when you say Pinkamena, do you mean Pinkamena or Pinkamena?

Yay, a Fic that actually updates for the first time in months!

I wish i had this ability as well. And as for your typing abilities, they have immensely improved, i couldn't notice any mistakes though. But that happens to me a lot so it is just me not being a (good) proofreader. Keep up the good work though!! :pinkiehappy:

The reason I love this story is because of all the small bits of head canon thrown around in here.

Lock your doors...
Hide your children...
Because HE is breaking free!!! :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
Also go to the bunker.

Your English is already incredibly good by my standards, if it's not your first language. The only mistake I saw was not capatalising "English" in the author notes :p

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You're supposed to capitalize "English"? :rainbowhuh:
Huh. Interesting. Thanks a lot :twilightsmile:

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Ominous italic pronouns, making you afraid of vague concepts since 1499.

Nice chapter. A lot of info given out,

dark light

Lol, best oxymoron

Are cookies unhealthy? Please tell me they're not! I'm mean,

I'm sure that doesn't describe Recto, you may want to change that :)

cocolate milk addiction

That's a drink I definitely won't be trying...

Hmmm....this sounds like the anime Elfen Lied

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Now that I think about it... Nah. Lucy was much more stable psychologically.

5284485 Yeah lucy is Verso Mew is Recto

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