Naturally, everypony knows the story of how Twilight Sparkle met her friends, and how they all became the Elements of Harmony. The very subject is now taught in schools around Equestria, much to the chagrin of Twilight's children.
But not many ponies know of the story behind how Twilight ended up in a relationship with both Rainbow Dash and Applejack.
Now, her three children are going to hear that story. Whether they want to or not. Even if it takes nine more seasons.
Suit up.
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This was meant to be my entry for the AppleDashLight group contest.
Cover art edited from a picture by niegelvonwolf.
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Chapters (1)
If this ends with Applejack and Rainbow having died years ago and the kids encouraging Twilight to go ask Rarity out, people will be threatening new and very creative ways to end you.
Just saying.
An AppleDashLight story? With their kids? And a comedy tag?
The beginning was fantastic and I really can't wait for the next chapter!
OH, THIS IS GONNA BE GOOD!
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Fixed, thanks for the heads up!
A relationship with applejack? My friend, where are Twilight's standards?
You get a thumbs up just for that.
Ah, so THAT'S what "polyamory" means....
*backs away slowly*
Love it. Love everything about it. Had me laughing like a stoner
I've never seen How I Met Your Mother, and I loved this. And I loved how you explained how Pinkie and Rarity knew about AJ's and RD's crushes respectively.
Will this story be a long one?
Well i cant wait to see how the story progressed from here. but i have to agree with twilight its going to become a big mess. Hopefully twilight wont be like ted and take years upon years upon years and so on before finally ending up with AJ and Dash. lol
Also first sorry to who those havent seen the last episode of How I met your mother. But SPOILER....I really hope neither AJ or Dash are dead like how the mom died in How I met your mother. That was very sad to me
Ohoho. I wish you'd submitted this to the contest, this already looks interesting! I eagerly await more :D
Also:
Huh... I'll have to be honest, I'm a little disappointed that this won't be full of HIMYM references. But I guess this also means it won't end up like the show did (THE HIMYM FINALE WAS BULLSHIT)
Other than that, this fic is prety much perfect, except for the way you write Pinkie. Sometimes, authors will end up writing her as nothing more than a ditz, a lunatic, or both. You could definitely stand to dial back her random craziness just a bit. Also, unless she says something important (e.g. the part about how she knows AJ's got a crush on Twi) in her rambles, you don't really need to write anything further than simply saying she's rambling. And even then, you only really need to put in the important bit.
As long as this story is not a copy paste of How I met Yer Mother it should be good. Don;t get me wrong it was a good show but it got really stale after a few seasons.
4537526 Marvin...Wait For It.....Eriksen
THE COOLEST MIDDLE NAME EVER!
I don't usually read Twidash and applejack, but I love How I Met Your Mother!!!
i loved the the story
But i think that you over did apple jacks accent
other than that it was great!!!
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I would prefer Twilight x Twilight x Rainbow Dash myself. As they say, double the Twi is appealing to the eye.
The conversation that Pinkie had with herself about helping Spike had me nearly dying of laughter. Well done.
I guess at this point the Sparkle family is basically the Pony Kennedys.
I've never seen the show being referenced, but the story stood up enough on its own to make me grin like an idiot and hit the tracking star.
Whelp, I know what I'm doing in a little bit: Finding out whether or not I would've been pipped from 3rd.
You missed a say. It's the second sentence after the graphic.
Dear Celestia yes!
I loved the show so hopefully this'll be awesome as well.
Yes, yes, good. A TwiJack bridal shower and wedding reception, very good. Let's make this happen.
Yes, yes, good. A TwiDash post-workout shower, very good. Let's make this happen.
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Who says that?
Why does every paragraph start halfway into the middle of the page? It's really off putting.
4537723 TwiDAJack, ITs TwiDaJack
say it with me now TWI DA JACK
Alright, here we go. Commence reading of cute pony polyamory!
Heh, not bad. Me likey, me likey lots. I am interested to see where this goes and how it develops.
I also find it somewhat amusing that we both chose to make our first chapter a reference to something. Whereas I went with The Stanley Parable, you've gone for the slightly more broadly appealing avenue of TV sitcom. Not that that's a bad thing, in any way. I can see this story is definitely going to have its funny moments, with some of those being possibly cringe-inducing. In the good way, of course.
Edit bot, go!
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DING!
Should be: "I'm sure she'll say yes."
"First, that Flash Sentry and the Flash Sentry here aren't the same pony"
Since this is technically a name (albeit a silly one), I would capitalise it like so: McDownerpants.
This is only one of those things... you know the type, says stuff and describes things... words! That's it. Only one word.
Same again.
Needs a comma after idea.
I assume you know Mr The Drill?
Not sure which you mean, but there are several possibilities here:
"cause a mare"
"cause every mare"
"cause mares"
Errant was.
Should end in a question mark, not a full stop.
That's everything I spotted while reading, at any rate. Good job, so far, keep it up. Have a like and fave.
4541511 Appledashlight contest my friend. I know, it makes me vomit to :/
4541569 Clearly this is best fimfic can do, in terms of new stuff :/.
4541579 Your avatar fits the comment my friend :)
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Sorry, I'm sticking with AppleDashLight.
...Pinkie, "Spike's trying to get Twilight a date" != "Twilight's trying to get a date."
Hilarity may ensue.
This looks like it'll be amusing... I'm watching this.
scare them away
Definitely worth a follow. The sheer chaos I'm expecting promises to be funny. I expect Discoshy shipping as they go 'out to the movies' and watch Twilight's sinking ship of a dating life.
I do hope this story doesn't take as long as Ted's...
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4541569 Question... How can you have a problem with this if you don't have a problem with FxF pairings, if I may ask? What do you see wrong with Polyamorous relationships? (Or is it more the fact that, if it IS a Polyamorous relationship, it always seems to be TwixDashxAJ? )
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Gais, gais, hush.
Just because you aren't fans of polyamorous ships doesn't mean that it's shit, it just means that you don't like it.
Far from it. The point of writing AppleDashLight is to write a polyamorous romantic relationship between Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash together. killo here could very well be a fan of TwiDash, AppleDash, and TwiJack, but that has nothing to do with him wanting to write AppleDashLight.
I must also say that, while other AppleDashLight fics have made the featured box over the last few months, it's an insult to killo and to other AppleDashLight writers to call their stories and writing the same. Each of the stories that has made the feature box, while all AppleDashLight, have different premises and plotlines that develop them.
I understand if you dislike AppleDashLight, it's not for everyone. And that's fine. What isn't fine is leaving a comment train that insults killo and other fans of the ship. If you don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that.
4543224 .................................Polyamorous fics are, how the brits say, pure shite :/
Bring it on motherfuckair
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Oh wait, I recognize your name now. Isn't annoying people and rustling jimmies your forte?
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I am champion of freedom, my friend.
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You seem more like an idiot, to be frank.
~Skeeter The Lurker
4543315 Two comments for one message. Very good tactic :)! You got me! You got me good, my friend!