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Rainbow Dash has developed a crush on Twilight. Now she just needs to find a way to express herself to her heart's desire, while fighting against her own past, meddling friends, and a pony who only recently learned what friendship was.

So it might be a bit harder than she thought.


Each chapter of this story is based off a song. This is not a "song fic", I'm basically just using the songs as a prompt for the story.

Y'know, kinda like that Timaeus guy did, but not as good. Honestly, you should probably just click that link right up there and read his story. Now. READ IT!

Cover art modified from a vector by twidash-hiishirikuu.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 31 )

Oh, another story released. This one looks interesting as well. Welp, more additions to my growing read later list.

Hm. I suppose you've passed my tests. Have a fave, at least until your story's completed.

Interesting, lets see how this goes.
:heart::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::heart:

I liked it. I can't put my finger on what it is I liked so much, but I liked it. I will definitely be liking this piece, and start keeping tabs on you as a writer. Great job! Keep up the good work.

. . . And on an entirely unrelated note, I just used the word "like" four times in five sentences. That's really bad writing on my part.

I Won't Say (I'm in Love)

Oh, so that was the song you used. I tried to guess as I was reading, but it's like finding a needle in a haystack.

Anyways, this looks good so far. Cute, and a nice throwback to the start of the series. I'll be waiting for more. Oh, I should also thank you for the increase in traffic on my own song fic. Thanks a bunch for the shout-out there!

Comment posted by DeiligKjott deleted Jun 15th, 2014

Hmmm... I like it... Make more, and i say more of your story... But, i loved it!!

Looks great! :yay:
I have a question. As long as I give you credit for the idea, can I use the thing where you can have a song liisted that fits a certain chapter? Please? :pinkiehappy:

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Well, technically you should give Timaeus credit. His story, Jukebox Scribbles, is partially where I got the idea to write this. But in any case, by all means! I'll look forward to seeing your work :pinkiehappy:

It was a better option than just sitting there moping at least. Worst case scenario, she spends some time chatting with her oldest friend. Not really a way to lose in that situation.

You seem to have a little trouble with past/present tense and commas. Other than that, pretty good so far!

Yay! A possible date for an update!

Another curve ball into left field, I never would have guessed the song was "I'm Gonna Be", great job.

You should use wonderwall by oasis.

Rarity seemed a little confused at the question, exactly as Pinkie had planned. “Hmmm… I’d say royal blue, though I have found myself drawn to the color orange as of late.”

Hinting at a Rarijack?

“Pinkie Pie! One does not simply walk up to their crush and ‘give them a big ol’ smooch’! Even somepony as brash as Rainbow Dash would know better.”

So close...

Or maybe she’d have to get her friends to all play spin-the-bottle tomorrow!

There are no words to describe in how many ways that is a bad idea...

And would you look at that? I was the first view on this chapter!

I like cartoony Pinkie too... but can i still pelt you with stale doughnuts? I've never done that before and it sounds like fun!:pinkiehappy:

There seems to be a missing line of dialogue between Mrs. Cake and Pinkie. Just thought I'd bring it to your attention.

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Huh, how odd. Fixed, and thanks for pointing that out!

I was actually gonna start pestering you for updates, and now I don't have to.

Well, at least not for this fic. There's still another multi-chaptered story I can nag you about~

I really like how you portray Pinkie here. It's refreshing to not just see the loltehrandumb Pinkie with a fourth wall joke every second paragraph (though you were cutting it close with the "operation TwiDash" stuff lol).

This is how Pinkie should be written, as a silly pony, and not just a vessel for leepicmaymays.

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What story would that be?

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Thanks, glad I wrote Pinkie Pie to your tastes. Tis a hard balance to strike with Pinkie Pie. I've definitely gone overboard with her before. On a completely unrelated note, dat commission you did for the twidashlove blog :pinkiehappy::yay::raritywink::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

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Heh, maybe a bit. While I don't plan on there being any actual Rarijack in this story, I do love that ship.

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Y'know what? Go for it. I don't think I've ever been pelted with stale doughnuts before, so I feel like I'm missing out on a life experience.

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Oh, I dunno, maybe a fun little story about how a certain pony regales her three kids with the tale of how she met their mothers. :raritywink:

Let me just tell you that I really liked how you wrote pinkie here :pinkiehappy:

It may only be me but reading this makes it sound like Rainbow is a horn dog (no pun intended) driven to get Twilight not because of love but of lust.
May only be me tho, good chapter all in all.
~Tobben

One thing about Pinkie's first plan while well done, i think she should at least feel bad for making Twilight have an allergic reaction, it's not fun to go through.
Also it may only be Pinkie's imagination with the constellation that says "Kiss the mare" you'd think Twilight would have seen it and questioned it.
Good chapter looking forward to more.
~Tobben

She needed to know after all, if she was going to throw a RainLight party…

:applejackunsure: eeeehhhh

or maybe a TwiDash party?

There we go XD

You did Pinkie really well.

She needed to know after all, if she was going to throw a RainLight party… or maybe a TwiDash party?

Operation Twidash was a go!

Pinkie does ship names.
Also,

Or maybe she’d have to get her friends to all play spin-the-bottle tomorrow

Please do it! I can't wait

I would love to see this continue, it's been a fun read.

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