Finding himself under close observation once more after the events of 'Three's a Crowd'. Discord decides to once more pay a visit to his dear 'friend', Twilight Sparkle. But when he discovers a shocking secret that the purple alicorn is hiding, he decides to do the right and just thing.... by completely taking advantage of the situation.
Eventually Discord finds himself embroiled in all sorts of shenanigans as he plays a self proclaimed 'matchmaker'.
But has he gone too far this time? Is he completely out of his depth in a field he has no expertise in? Will it all end in disaster?
Or everypony making kissy face?
Probably the latter.
A story I came up with after mixing and matching several stories I wanted to do together. I owe it one of my followers, Noble Thought, who helped me kind of form things together.
And, I already love the fic
Infinity point 2/3 of 5 stars
So, Initial reaction :
I did notice a few items, but I like to keep my proofreading notes private, so I'll send you a PM with what I saw. It's all rather minor, to be honest.
Overall: I liked this chapter and the concept behind it and I'm glad that I was able to help you bring it to fruition in my small way. Can't wait for more!
4118780 yeah just Pm the problems so I can fix'em right away. Thanks for the help though.
All i have to say is i hate this version of discord
. but i cant stop reading man its a realy good story. dont stop keep it going. i will ask can u redeem his character give him some moments ,and a gf too.
4119632 oh if you don't like him now, you're really not going to like him later in the story.
Glad you liked it.
Yay, Twilestia!
Why yes, hello, this is my Canon Discord.
I want more...
Well, if that's true then Discord could literally be the foremost expert in love. After all, love is a splendid pile of crazy.
4124843 this is despite the fact that he has never been in nor ever received love in what I can I only presume is an extremely long life...that doesn't stop him from trying though and God loves a trier!
you make good discord
so please...keep doing more good discord
Sorry I just really had to post this right now, before anyone else does.
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Again I apologize.
What!, How...
My gut is telling my that the inspector took Spike to the police station, Spike somehow started to freak-out, and as a result burned the police station.
I would truly like to hear more about this incident from the author.
~Leonzilla
I'm not normally a fan of Discord aside from as the villain (largely because I didn't and still don't really buy his reformation and am just waiting for the other shoe to drop; also because I think he's wasted not being the villain, a role he is almost far too good at)... But the premise of this was too promising not to look into!
Good job, I await to see the chaos unfold...
No... no words to describe it. Poetry. They should have sent a fic writer.
Chapter needs a good pass or two from proofreaders. Other than that, bon voyage, SS Twilunestia! I'll add this to all the appropriate Twi x Princess groups later tonight. Ohhh, this is gonna be delicious...
Not as funny as the first, but Definitely praise worthy
great job, can't wait for the next chapter.
4289885 Well were back to Discord in the next chapter. So hopefully that will make up for it.
4289849 I knew this needed another look. Damn my chronic laziness
Thanks for the comment. We'll see how sturdy this ship can be ( the correct answer is not sturdy at all).
Good chapter, wonder if Discord sent it to Luna by accident since he didn't mention her at all.
4290935 Maybe. Maybe not. Who can say for sure. I'm just the author. I know nothing.
Twilestia only please
Agreeing with first commenter, you suffer from chronic lack of commas and apostrophes.
4363325 I've been made quite aware of it. It is one of my vices of my writing. I apologize for my laziness.
4410545 Luna expressed her wish for Twilight to be her consort in the last chapter.
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Yeah, but.... Oh.... Star, not Moon. Okay, never mind.
Best line ever
This is Gold, what happened to Scootaloo?
4703450 Probably sent to some alternate chicken based universe. That or Discord's stockpile of gags.
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For some reason that makes sense
I just realized, Luna in this story is basically Pepe Le Pue.
4704580 That has to be the most accurate statement I have ever read in the comments section.
4705001 You realize then, this can end only one way: Luna accidentally gets dunked in white paint and somehow resembles Celestia, Luna is then forced to flee from an overly - amorous Twilight.
Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash loses an argument to Angel on whether it's Dash season or Wabbit season.
4705043 wait how did you guess the end-ahem
*looks at written ending page and deletes all of it*
I mean of course that's not the ending. *sweats nervously*
4705077 I know, the real ending reveals that Tirek is actually a Martian, and he only tried to steal Equestria's magic because they were blocking his view of the Crystal Empire.
Gadzooks this chicanery is thoroughly amusing. Discord is always such a sporting chap.
This part killed me. Keep up the good work!
Oh no! The ship is going down!
4933215 Mayday! We're taking on water here! Ship is sinking! Mayday! We need evac now!
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Worry not good citizen! The S.S. Pinkie Pie has heard your distress call, and will be coming to your aid once the streudel is finished.
4939074 I'm afraid the U-boat D-15Cord has done critical damage to this ship
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Then all hope is lost. It's been a pleasure serving under you sir. Sound the taps boys. If we must go down, then we will go down singing. Like stallions.
This is simultaneously amazing and horrifying.
Sexy dream magic is always fun. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nightmare may indeed be Luna's uninhibited side
That nightmare fantasy!
I love this story.
Discord would balance the budget..... On his head
Vote Discord! It's Always Time for a Change!
Discord will build a wall to keep Cloudsdale immigrants out!
Hm, I'm a bit conflicted. All the 4th Wall breaking is seriously grating on me, but on the other hand the story is well-written enough that I want to keep on reading...
6590571 I apologise truly, I often am tipsy when I want to write this praticular story, I'll try and cut down on the 4th wall beaking in the future!