This story is a sequel to To Be a Mother
With TittySparkles' okay
As she mourns the death of her newborn child, Chrysalis is visited by one thought to have been long gone from Equestria, but in a different form.
Will these two outcasts find happiness together, when alone they have nothing but sadness?
A sequel to To Be a Mother which you can find here or listen to a reading of by The Lost Narrator here
rated teen now, just to be safe (would have the comedy tag, but apparently comedy tag and sad tag can't be together for whatever reason)
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Chapters (3)
May want to fix this.
3913012 those are two different fics. they don't correspond with each other.
and the reason derpy was tying the noose is because she thought she'd never see dinky again and saw no point in going on with her
met to say "without"
meant to say "meant" not "met"
3913028 Part of the Derpy/Dinky story managed to migrate into this one somehow. I gave you a reference as to where in the story it is, so you could go back and fix it. That's all.
3914445 but it didn't. Chryslaius thinking she knew derpy was a connection, not We Belong Together. read the comedy fic derplicity and you'll see what i mean. or you can listen to obabscribbler's reading of it. that'd probably be easier.
my apologies. i see what you meant now and will correct it.
...... C-Can we Get more? Like...
A Full Story? This feels more like a summary of major events for a story.
The first half was set up nicely, as if this was to be the first chapter of a series, but then it kinda jumped too fast for me.
3925478 i will definitely put it in my Possibilities box. i cannot make any promises though
Moar!
A little short, but nice
I liked it... but the meeting with Nightmare Moon and Chysalis felt rushed. Why was NMM a filly? How did the two randomly find each other?
4079710 i honestly thought i'd just leave it for others to imagine why NM is a filly. though, somepony has asked me to make it a multi-chapter and i am still thinking about that.
I feel like this.
4079710
More a want to know why so much time is gone. NMM is nearly two years defeated. It's not impossible, this thought is more for a "full story". I would love to read a full story about two "most wanted" villians live peacefull in Ponyville.
But back to this story: it is ...fine. Not more, not less. A interessting idea with nightmrare moon. I like it.
This was a nice and touching story.
Have a like and a fav.
I like the story but i never like it when somewhat or someone do something against your will. Well i think Chrysalis really want it but don´t know it at the moment because her naturaly hate against ponys and her fear about her death filly.
4079740 I personally would also love to see this continued. Learning more about their lifes in Ponyville and how NMM ended up an amnesia little filly would be neat to see. I'm guessing what little magic was left she had made her a filly kinda like Nyx and all those Nightmare Woons/moon fillies out there in fanfics. Makes you wonder what'd happen if their true identities became known to everyone. Would they let bygones be bygones given it's been years since the invasion and not good to hold a grudge?
4095239 then you will be happy to know that there is a new chapter up now, explaining how nightmare became a filly
I would like another chapter soon.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
Wow no flaws I can see
I have to ask. How much time do you think passed from the failed changeling invasion to Tirek's return and defeat?
4671983 from the show's perspective it seemed like a little after a year. After all, if I'm right, the summer sun celebration is New Years.
Did Chrysalis suddenly become a Roman?
Is this story going to continue I want to know what happens next
6062409 it will, i'm just not sure when. i am sorry for making you wait
Moar!
I will be tracking this.
I have to read the wholething again, I don´t remember what happened before, and this chapter alonge was a bit strange but interessting.
Well... at least you updated it.
Hope to see more.
I liked the chapter and I expect it to be a joke, however I still hope it was worth the time and it isn´t a joke chapter.
Nice af prank but it's good to see the story isn't dead.
Shining Armor x Chrysalis ships for the win.
-.-
I actually read stories that I favored, the story was finished, great the way it was, then the author decided to write that one more chapter that I hated so much, I took away my favorite. I was so close to doing the same to this story. Please write what really happened.
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good one.
pues parece desde 1 año sin actualizarla esta historia se puede dar por finalizada xP
And last it was worth it to read that cool story.
I really hope you continue the story
"but apparently comedy tag and sad tag can't be together for whatever reason"
Which is weird because comedy and tragedy can, and tragedy and sad are the same thing.