Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash find out that scootaloo is an orphan and the last remaining pony to be living in her family. Which causes Twilight and Rainbow to adopt the poor filly. From being homeless to having a family, and leading to a life changing scooter accident, Scootaloo's life is gonna take a whole new turn with the help of her two new loving mothers.
Contains: Twidash, Scootadoption, Scootabelle, and cuteness overload.
NOTE: This is a Twidash and a Scootadoption fanfic. and that Twilight and Rainbow are married to eachother and live together. Please also note something serious happens to Scootaloo in ch 5, something totally unexpected and tragic.
With help from Matt11
Editing is done by Mat the brawler Starting on chapter 2-6, and Autumn breeze starting at chapter 7-present
yay my username is in the Author's Note
and i like it i can't wait for the next chapter come out and future chapters for this story
Like the Idea, but you cant tell me the scootaloo just flat out says this horrible stuff in front of those two without a subburn fight. but thats just me.
Not particularly good storyline and the character dialogue wasn't really in-character.
3754555 Don't get me wrong, I'm still new to this. That's why.
Hey dude I really like the story, but it looks like a little help could potentially make it better. If your interested I'd like to be your editor.
3763856 Okay. but this is the first time someone offer to edit.
Wait Twilight is married to Dash. Twilight is going to adopt Scotaloo. So how does that make Rainbow her sister in law, that would make rainbow her mother as well.
3766572 I made it for Twilight to be the mother and Rainbow The sister in law, so It won't get confusing on the mother roll
i am glad that Diamond Tiara got justice and that this chapter is longer i like it and a law cutie mark cool
3770835 Just wait till a future chapter where a certain pony's brother finds out *WINK WINK*
3770842 ok
Squeee! More!
3773697 Give me time.
More!
3777818 Lol, I meant I was excited to see you wrote more. I really enjoy the story! I cannot wait to see more from you in the future!
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Sorry for the mix up.
3778842 Just you wait, the next chapter is so touching, you get to imagine that one song from paper mario 2 playing
Taggign tragedy and sad is redundant as tragedies are inherently sad so one of them needs to be removed. I'm gonna take a wild guess and say that the tragedy tag is not needed, if your story has a happy ending than you don't need the tragedy tag. I'm gonna take another guess and say you tagged it tragedy because scoots had a sad backstory, but just because one of your characters has a tragic past does not make your story a tragedy.
3791918 The tradegy part will play a role in the story when the time comes. I shared my idea with my editor and he seemed to like it. So the tradegy will come. If you want to see what i mean check my post from tuesday.
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Then remove the sad tag, either wy one them has to be removed per site rules. I would suggest reading the FAQ pertaining to tags and then determine if yous is a tragedy or just sad.
Normally I dont like fanfics were Mane Sixers are paired up but the is really good. Keep it up!
should be no
and should be I promise. welp this is pretty good don't expect me to see all the errors lol
3881204 The errors stop starting at Chapter 2 and forward. Because arounnd that time was when I got an editor.
3881345 ah ok
3885652 The next chapter may come out in a couple of days. Anyway if you want a episode like summery of chapter 5. Here's the summery.
Heres a briief summary:After a trick goes bad and landing on her muscle nerve/groin causing permanent damage, Scootaloo now faces a life changing experience of face Incontinent in the bladder. Twilight and Rainbow Dash hit an idea of lifting Scootaloos spirit from depression.
However I came up with the sixth chapter already.
Summery: For a while now, Scootaloo has been developing Unknown feelings towards Sweetie Belle. However when Sweetie Belle Reveals That she has feelings towards Scootaloo, The two decide to bring it to a tex. But Scootaloo fears what others will think of it.
3887349 hmm sounds good i can't wait oh that part of her scooter trick gone bad remind me of an awesome tumbler called crinkaloo
that sucks for Scootaloo that she has to wear diapers for the rest of her life because of what happen and don't you worry Scootaloo you have friends, two mothers, family that will you get though not good times
i love padded ponys story if it involves scoots Evin better
3888439 Correction, this is not a padded pony story. The part is to make the story more interesting. It was to make the story kinda more sad.
But hey, glad you enjoyed. But the next chapter is gonna be interesting, because a second shipping is coming.
Hmmm... I dont know about this chapter. Ive enjoyed the story so far but this one chapter was hard to read in my opinion. Maybe it was the whole incontinent thing. I dont know. But I will still read on. Cant wait for the next chapter though!
Also I havent noticed as many grammar or spelling mistakes as of late. Thats good. There are still a few but not as many.
3891419 Well the next chapter is the begining of Scootabelle. Hope you are enjoying this story so far.
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If Twilight's the mother and Rainbow's Twilight's spouse, Rainbow should probably be the father.
Seems like it's related to ask crinkleloo tumbler thing which is awesome
3894223 Sadly Raainbow can't be the father. She's Scootaloos addoptive mother also. Plus she is a mare. it'll become clearer in tthe story
3894957 I'm glad you like it. RIght now, i'm working on the next chapter. But, I'm glad you're enjoying. But be warned about the next chapter, Something hilarious will happen.
I can't finish this. You should get an editor to clean it up, bad. The pacing is far too fast, Celestia did not ask Rainbow and Twilight if they wanted to adopt her in the first place, it jumped from scene to scene to fast.
I love Twidash, Scootadopt is always good, but you need a lot of practice.
3901024 Did you read the the description? I do have an editor. Matthebrawler. Jezz. He's my editor.
And the jump scene to scene during "That chapter" was my idea. During that scene, She was asking them the series of questions. The reason she didn't ask is because she had to ask "her friend" (Who works for the foal and family services) if he approves for Twilight and Rainbow to adopt Scootaloo.
and I know i need practice.
3914996 thank u
A little rushed, but still a very good read..
MaskedPony i love the cover art for this story great job on who ever did it for this story
guessing one of the main charaters dies? because there is that tragedy tag and i don't want to read it because of the last coment.
I literally just realized this. WHERE THE HELL IS SPIKE?!
3957735 one of the main characters don't die, Scootaloo gets in a really bad scooter accident and something happens to her groin. No one dies, only someone related to Scoots family dies, and he is some pony that resides behind bars
3958384 He appears in different chapters, in CH5 he appears as a mention and where he feels sorry for Scootaloo for the medical condition she is now facing. In Ch6 he will appear and will receive a humiliating punishment (by Twilight who lost her cool due to what happened) for what he said to Scootaloo.
Spike only appears in certain chapters, I'm mostly focusing on the Twidash parts, and the Scootaloo parts.
you know, i don't get why you deleted my comment, it was criticism.
3976972 Well, It's an idea, apparently I asked my followers what they think (Note: it was before the chapter went up) and one of them wanted me to add it, because of the tradegy and saddness.
Sorry for deleting your comment.
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its fine,
you can still do the tragedy and sad, with her being flightless.
but the chapter is already done, so nothing can be done i guess.
I'm only just starting to read this and liking it so far, but i have found something that's making it a little difficult to follow and I'm not even out of the library yet.
"We...we were planning a Sleepover at Scoots place, But she said no."
"It's probably because her parents say no."
"That's the thing Twi. Every time we see Scoots, she's by herself. Every time when school ends her parents don't show up, not even at meetings. She even didn't give us any detail about her parents. All she said was that they were the best parents she had."
When hearing this, something clicked in Twilights head. "Say that again Applebloom. about the part with best parents."
until twilight said appbloom's name, i had no idea whether it was the fillies talking or their big sisters and who'd said which of the two fillies had said what. you need to make that more clear.