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It has been a couple of years since Shining Armor passed away. Twilight and Rainbow Dash are now a couple. Rainbow has even moved into the library.

Twilight and Rainbow are having the best time of their life.

But after an accident Rainbow ends up grounded for the rest of her life. How will Rainbow and Twilight cope with the fact that Rainbow Dash, the best flyer in Equestria, will never fly again?

Not needed to read my other story. But i really appreciate if you do ^^

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It was great! I love the fic's where Rainbow Dash gets in big crashes.:rainbowkiss:

2406561 Thank you :twilightsmile:
I'm just starting on chapter two. I hope you and the others will like that one too. :twilightsheepish:

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You replied to that comment really quickly.:rainbowderp:

2406593 Well, i just came back from eating dinner and saw the comment :ajsmug:

*clears throat* see some grammar mistakes in the description

It has been a couple of years since Shining Armor passed away. Twilight and Rainbow Dash is now a couple. Rainbow has even moved into the library.
Twilight and Rainbow is having the best time of their life.
But after an accident Rainbow ends up grounded for the rest of her life. How will Rainbow and Twilight coop with the fact that Rainbow Dash, the best flyer in Equestria, will never fly again?

Shield be

It has been a couple of years since Shining Armor passed away. Twilight and Rainbow Dash are now a couple. Rainbow has even moved into the library.
Twilight and Rainbow are having the best time of their life.
But after an accident Rainbow ends up grounded for the rest of her life. How will Rainbow and Twilight cope with the fact that Rainbow Dash, the best flyer in Equestria, will never fly again?

2407007 Thank you for telling that, it's corrected now. And i guess you will find that kinda grammar faults in most of the stuff i write. I've always had problems with are and is..:applejackunsure:

does twilight have wings???

2407291
Does it say Twilcorn, DOES IT!
Also, 8 v 8.. I haven't read this story, but I'll be nice.

rushed, work out the details more ill im getting from this is, and then and then and then, its broken up i like the idea just work on it

2407291, no, it's pre season 3 finale. And i'm quite sure i will not add the twilight being an alicorn thing.

2408720, Ok. thanks for you response.

So, it sounds like this is in continuity with another one of your stories. Could you tell me the order I should read your stories in?

2411878 It's a continuity on Bittersweet memories.

cool story bro :pinkiehappy: just kidding i have not read this yet but it sounds intriguing.

2415557 Make sure to leave you opinion after you've read it. And just so you know. I will edit chapter 1 a little soon.

congrats on immediate response :D but ya i'm sick so i have time to spare.

2409307 dude its written in april im sure that came after the season 3 finale

2416535 What i meant it's that it will play out before season 3 finale. I'm okay with twilight being an alicorn, but it wouldn't really fit in this story.

2416570 ok thx for the explaination

Wait, Rainbow Dash won't be able to fly? I feel so bad for her.:raritydespair:

why would they need to keep the library? I thought it came with Twi's position as a librarian?

2422468 Well, i thought i sounded good.
And it pointed out Rainbows loyalty good. She didn't think of herself first in that moment, even though she lost her ability to fly and her chance to join the Wonderbolts.

The chapter is good, still a little rushed I feel, but better than the first two. One thing I would like to point out is, I don't think that Twilight would call Scootaloo honey, although, the way you wrote the beginning here suggests that they are already family, you are saying that Twilight only just now at the end found out that she has no family so a nickname like honey is inappropriate in my eyes, it may just be my opinion

2438396 Hm, i see your point there.
My idea here was that it plays out after Sleepless in Ponyville. So Rainbow and Scootaloo acts like sisters. And that Twilight in one way becomes like another big sister for Scootaloo.
But i see the plot hole that created now when you pointed it out :twilightblush: Will see to that asap.

Great story so far :pinkiehappy: sad :fluttershysad: but still awesome! I'm hoping for a loooooooong sad fic that ends with Twi finding a spell that fixes RD's wing. Also Scootasad backstory :raritycry:

2442721 Well, haven't really thought about a spell that fixes RDs wings.:rainbowhuh: Might take that in consideration :twilightsmile:
And i promise, Scoots backstory will be explained in a later chapter. :scootangel:

Even though it might be some time until next chapter shows up.:unsuresweetie:
Tons of stuff to do in school right now. :ajbemused:

You"re gonna to update soon, or, or, or... :flutterrage:!

Just kidding, very nice story :rainbowkiss:! (But.. I still wan't the next chapter :rainbowdetermined2:)

2446447 Thank you for your kind words. And i will try to release next chapter as soon as i can. But i got a awful lot of homework right now. Barely i got time to go in and check here at all.

I'm liking the story so far. A lot actually, but there are many errors in verb tenses. I would be more than happy to help edit them if you want.

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Can you please do one that is correct and one that is my original where you highlight the faults for me? Then send them to this email, I would be more than happy :twilightsmile:
Torroja96@hotmail.com

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I've sent you the edited and original version of the prologue.

I thought Shining Armor was supposed to be dead in this story. :rainbowhuh:

2517110 Oh shit. Totally brain freeze there. Thanks for that!

Aww..now I see why Rainbow is in the shape she is. A very sad and horrible accident. Gosh, I hope she can pull through. :fluttercry:

Awesome Chapter. Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:!

Oh, that is very heartbreaking news. Well, at least Twilight thought about sending letters to all her friends, oh wait there is one missing. hmm..who could that be? Oh, of course, the little baby dragon assistant and who is supposed to be her friend Spike. That is kind of sour on Twilight's part, I mean Rarity was in Canterlot, so was Spike, so why couldn't Twilight send him one? But anyway I love this story,filled with great emotion. :pinkiehappy:

Poor poor Rainbow. Also, I feel so bad for Scootaloo, I know she is heartbroken as much as Rainbow, because RD is not only her big sister but her idol. :fluttercry:

Sad yet touching at the same time. I love Twilight telling Scootaloo that she isn't weak for crying. :fluttercry::twilightblush:

I just hope Spike won't be too upset without knowing sooner. It upsets me that Spike didn't a letter at all from Twilight, but all the others did, and also she doesn't want Spike to see Rainbow heartbroken, but the others saw Rainbow heartbroken. I mean c'mon, Spike is suppose to be their friend, and Twilight does not let him know sooner about Rainbow's accident. Also, I hope when he comes to see them, nothing changes between them all, but I just have a bad feeling, because when a friend isn't notified about another friend's situation, a gap begins to form. Loved the moments with Twilight and Scootaloo, Twilight being like a mother for Scootaloo. :pinkiehappy:

2521193 Well, Twilight didn't send a letter to any of her friends, it was Celestia.:trollestia: And she sent one to Spike to. It just takes some time to travel from the Crystal Empire, where he was visiting Cadence. The part where i mentioned that he was up in Canterlot was when Twilight had a flashback of when she and Rainbow had started to date.
..........
I just realised i created a plothole........:rainbowderp:
Back to editing again....:twilightblush:

Twilight saw the book laying on the flooing Doo."
so the floor is nicknamed flooring doo now? interesting...

2521455 Oh, okay, oops, I forgot it was Celestia who sent the letters. *Facehoof myself:facehoof:*. Well, at least Spike got to spend time with other old friends. :pinkiehappy: I just hope nothing bad happens when he comes.

2521784 Thank you. For some reason two sentences disappeared there in the final edit :rainbowhuh:

2521789 I haven't decided about that yet actually :twilightblush:

2521953 hmmm... oh well, anyways good fic so far

This still fills my heart up knowing that Rainbow doesn't recognize Scootaloo. :pinkiesad2: C'mon Rainbow, just think and remember, she is your little sister and always looked up to you.

Oh God. Not there. Not the feels. Not again D:

2591773 Read a lot of stories lately that hit me 'right in the feels'. Latest was last night. And now this. :fluttercry:

2591782 Well, it feels nice as the author too hear that i managed to get my readers emotinal :twilightsmile:
Even though i shed liquid pride myself when i wrote the last part. :fluttercry:

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