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This story is a sequel to Nyx's Time with Rainbow Dash


this is the 3rd story of the Nyx Chronicles.
Nyx is starting to get lonely since Peewee was returned to his family. But a Mysterious Dragon that hasn't been seen in years shows up and is looking for a friend also. Could this Dragon be the friend Nyx has been looking for

this is an unoffical sequel to Past sins

Nyx belongs to Pen Stroke

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

Now at the library, Lunar and Twilight were waiting for Nyz to come home.

"Nyx" is misspelled.

Now at the library, Lunar and Twilight were waiting for Nyx to come home.

the Front door to the Library opened and Nyx and Raiinbow were standing in front.

"The" should be uppercase, "front" and "library" should be lowercase, "Rainbow" is misspelled.

The front door to the library opened and Nyx and Rainbow were standing in front.

She too also notice Nyx was missing peewee so much

She also noticed Nyx was missing peewee so much

He came to Nyx side.

He came to Nyx's side.

The group then sat down and began to ate.

eat

The group then sat down and began to eat.

Well i was going to try to convince Nyx to have a pet, but she now has a friend and a pet.

when "I" by itself, it should be uppercase

Well I was going to try to convince Nyx to have a pet, but she now has a friend and a pet.

To her Rainbow was exactly like her, being Awesome, cool and being loyal.

"awesome" should be lowercase.

To her Rainbow was exactly like her, being awesome, cool and being loyal.

The evening came and Rainbow went home, she told Tex that when Nyxs wants to come to her house, she is more then welcome to come with her.

The evening came and Rainbow went home, she told Tex that when Nyx wants to come to her house, she is more than welcome to come with her.

Spike cooked up a meal for themselves and gave Tex a side of Gems as a welcome gift.

"gems" should be lowercase.

Spike cooked up a meal for themselves and gave Tex a side of gems as a welcome gift.

They both decided it was best for Nyx to have Tex as a Replacement friend because of what Tex told them.

"replacement" should be lowercase.

They both decided it was best for Nyx to have Tex as a replacement friend because of what Tex told them.

It was now Nyxs bedtime and Twilight came up and told Nyx.

You forgot the apostrophe.

It was now Nyx's bedtime and Twilight came up and told Nyx.

Nyx offered Tex her bed, but Tex Created a bed of her own, by using the magic Space Dragons have.

"created" should be lowercase.

Nyx offered Tex her bed, but Tex created a bed of her own, by using the magic Space Dragons have.

after they got prepare for bed.

"after" should be uppercase.

After they got prepare for bed.

"After" means past tense, so it should be "prepared" not "prepare"

After they got prepared for bed.

Celestia has to know about Nyxs new friend.

You forgot the apostrophe

Celestia has to know about Nyx's new friend.

3589218 well just wait till the next chapter, It will have another reference. :pinkiecrazy:

I hope that this tex can live up to the expected level of badassness, with a side of badassary

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