This story is a sequel to Nyx's Time with Rainbow Dash
this is the 3rd story of the Nyx Chronicles.
Nyx is starting to get lonely since Peewee was returned to his family. But a Mysterious Dragon that hasn't been seen in years shows up and is looking for a friend also. Could this Dragon be the friend Nyx has been looking for
this is an unoffical sequel to Past sins
Nyx belongs to Pen Stroke
"Nyx" is misspelled.
"The" should be uppercase, "front" and "library" should be lowercase, "Rainbow" is misspelled.
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Love the Red vs Blue reference
when "I" by itself, it should be uppercase
"awesome" should be lowercase.
"gems" should be lowercase.
"replacement" should be lowercase.
You forgot the apostrophe.
"created" should be lowercase.
"after" should be uppercase.
"After" means past tense, so it should be "prepared" not "prepare"
You forgot the apostrophe
3589218 well just wait till the next chapter, It will have another reference.
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I hope that this tex can live up to the expected level of badassness, with a side of badassary
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You forgot one. Knowing that if she said know, she would break Nyx's heart.
It supposed to be Knowing that if she said no ,she would break Nxy's heart.