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Dee Forty-Five


A fanfic writer specializing in adventure stories. Come check me out if you like adventures!

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Sometimes fate doesn't go according to plan.

In an alternate universe where Twilight failed her exam and never became Celestia's apprentice, Nightmare Moon's return was unimpeded and the world is now blanketed in everlasting shadow. The reluctant Twilight finds herself on a perilous journey through dungeons, traps, and hordes of monsters as she confronts both the minions of Nightmare Moon and her own failed destiny. Can Harmony be returned to the world?

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Interesting. I'll check this out a little later.

EDIT: Oh hey, I beat Regidar. What a surprise!

Well, Twilight, you won't have to look very far for the pony of Generosity. She's the mare who, for the sake of her family's safety, was the first to submit to Nightmare Moon.:duck:

One question: Given the title of this story, would it be safe to assume that Twilight will be "cursed" with a new form at some point?:twilightsheepish:

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You mean like Midna? Twilight is definitely going to suffer a "curse" of some kind. Whether it's a physical form change or a more abstract form of suffering...or both...

Who can say?:moustache:

1791192 I actually mean like Link's wolf form. A "curse" that actually is beneficial.

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Well, I try not to give things away. But expect loads and loads of Zelda goodness to come.:raritywink:

1791264 That means Twilight will eventually get something similar to the Master Sword, right?

1791407 What do you even mean by that? First off, Twilight is the one doing the adventuring, not Link. Second, I said:

something similar to the Master Sword

That means it could (and probably will) have a different name. Like the Sword of Harmony or something to that effect.

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its from a video in the "decline of video gaming" series. basically, its just a comment about how link gets the master sword in every single game. and yes i realize its twilight, not link. I swear im not that stupid.

1791475 Going with the "I may be dumb, but I'm not stupid" defense?:trollestia:

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Something like that.:derpyderp1:

(I'm in a chemistry major, so I can't be that stupid)

I swear I've seen this on ff.net before...
Hope this continues!

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Yes, I uploaded on ff.net and dA before deciding that for FiM fics, I'd center myself around here.

1793958 Okay, just wanted to make sure I wasn't going insane*
*more than usual

1791407 tosses the master sword into the pile of master swords that have been obtained

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What? What did I do? You can't prove ANYTHING!:pinkiecrazy: Nothing, you hear me?!

But thanks!

Who noticed the three Zelda references from the books in the library?
Explanation:
Pip's Awakening-Link's Awakening
Flight to the Past-Link to the Past
Oracle of Courage-Oracle of Seasons/that other Oracle of that I forgot.

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:scootangel: Ohohohohohohohoho...I do love me some Zelda shout-outs. :ajsmug:

1815198 Oracle of Ages... never beat the last boss of that :facehoof: I still have both games somewhere too...

putting this on my read later since I am currently already reading something :twilightsmile:

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Cool! Be sure to comment when you start reading, I love me some comments. :twilightsmile:

Trixie, way to pull a Great and Powerful Face Heel Turn!:facehoof::twilightangry2:

On the other hoof, Rarity will be a much better companion for Twilight!:raritywink:

Twilight defeated the greatest foe in Zelda: Pottery!

wow you really like zelda...cool :pinkiehappy:

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Are you implying the great Trixie is anything less than great and powerful? :trixieshiftright:

1905748 No, I'm saying Rarity will be nice to Twilight and won't try to stab her in the back like Trixie did.:twilightangry2:

But I do hope you eventually have Trixie realize that Being Evil Sucks, make her have a moment of My God, What Have I Done? via Laser-Guided Karma and have her decide to perform a Heel Face Turn.:twilightsmile::trixieshiftleft:

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I love me some tropes.

And I have plans for Trixie.

Oh yes.:twilightoops:

Out of all the old Zeldas, the only ones I've played were A Link To The Past, Links Awakening, Minish Cap, and Four Swords Adventures. Ocarina of Time, Majoras Mask, and Wind Waker I don't consider old, but I have played them.
Skyward Sword was my favorite of all the newer Zeldas. Twilight Princess was my favorite Zelda with non-Ocarina instruments.
Midna was irritating some times, but not compared to Navi.
Hey, listen! I was the best companion for Link!
Shut up Navi.

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Linebeck and Ghost!Zelda from PH and SS are easily my favorite sidekicks in the series. Linebeck is just hilarious, and Spirit Tracks Zelda's relationship with Link is just so adorable! :heart:

I would track this, but since I'm following you on DA it just seems kinda redundant

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I'm afraid that while they might get some cameo appearances, I'm probably not gonna involve them in the plot in any major way, at least not to the level in which I've involved (and plan to continue involving) Trixie.

Put simply, I just don't write a lot about the background favorites. :twilightsheepish:

1964664 Here's an awesome idea!

There's a video game called Okami, where you play as the Sun Goddess Amaterasu, who takes the form of a white wolf. The whole game had numerous subtle Shout Outs to various Legend of Zelda games.

Then Nintendo returned the favor with Twilight Princess, where you have constellate deities, a world-cleansing mechanic, and Link turning into a wolf for no apparent in-game reason!

Now, Twilight's quest here is to save the Sun Princess, so why not include some Okami elements in this fanfic? You know, some Celestial Brush techniques, character expys, links to some Okami songs in the right places...you get the idea.

Think you can work with that?

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Probably not. I love Okami (in fact it's one of my favorite games ever) but I've already got a lot planned for this fic and there's not a lot of room for improvisation, especially involving a different game universe? :twilightblush:

2056149 Not even having Twilight pick up some of Ammy's sillier habits?:fluttercry::pinkiesad2::applecry::raritydespair:

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Still no...but I like your idea of linking to Okami music in chioce places. I might do that, and with other games too...:pinkiehappy:

2058032 :yay:

I'd personally suggust using The Sun Rises for the final battle against Nightmare Moon.:trollestia:

Also, I somehow suspect that failing to perform the Sonic Rainboom will make Rainbow Dash a little humbler than she is in canon.:rainbowderp:

That is all.

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You are correct in assuming that RD has changed in some way. Whether she's humbled or not, I'm not gonna specify...:rainbowwild:

And are you sure the music for Yami's first form wouldn't be more appropriate for NMM?:trixieshiftright:

2059081 Maybe for the beginning, but The Sun Rises should be used when the Elements of Harmony are activated.

This. I like this. Write more of it, this needs more attention.

You used the image from The Legend of Zelda: Wind Waker, not The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess.

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Yep! Despite the name, this fic takes inspiration from--and is meant to homage--many entries from the series, not just Twilight Princess.

Excellent blend of the MLP and LoZ worlds, it actually felt like I was playing an Loz game! Please update soon and keep up the awesome quality.

Please update this is a amazing story so fat

one of the best crossovers with it own mlp version to it, please update when you can I look forward to more ch& storys you write

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