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Speven Dillberg


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Pokémon Crossover

After the princesses experience a strange vision of even stranger beings entering their world, the Crystal Empire is visited by those beings. When word of the powers they possess spread, things rapidly become complicated, both for the ponies and the otherworldly visitors...

Spoilers for Pokémon X/Y.
This will not follow game/anime logic, and be more akin to Pokémon Adventures.

Other character tags will be added as/if they appear.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 363 )
TGM

This is actually the first X/Y crossover fic I've seen (the first good one at least) that is good both grammatically as well as good at making me grin with the whole Arceus confrontation. I'll give it a watch to see where it goes.

Please don't fuck it up though.

This is awesome so far, Arceus being a smartass in a still wise tone was hilarious :rainbowlaugh:. Why can't Lucario talk though? Aren't Lucario able to communicate telepathically through their aura abilities? Thats fine if it was a choice not to write him like that, I just wanted to know why. Anyways, take a like and a favorite for being the only competent pokemon crossover I have seen! :heart:

Sigh, so the people who saw it like it, but no one saw it... I'll need to change that if I can... we really need a 'thoughtful or pondering' emoticon now that I think about it... otherwise it's all ellipses

So Arceus is sending Xavier to Equestria because he didn't want him to be a pain in the... Arceus?
get it? Cause ya know...
I'll go sit in the Corner of Shame now.:ajsleepy:

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Some are able to. And it was more a choice I made because I already have two Psychics that rely on telepathy a lot. A third would have gotten confusing, what with all the italics.

So, does he have the other legendaries just sitting in a PC while he is off to a new land?
Also, I think Yveltal is cooler. Hmph.

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Ok, thanks for explaining! You're right, that would get kinda confusing on who was speaking.

I like this, please continue it at your earliest convenience.
P.S. what's the bird pokemon?
P.P.S. MY GOD YOUR AVATAR! I loved it when Gavin ran down the hall screaming and Ray said that was one of the scariest/funniest moments of his life.

Nice way to end it man, immagine of the Pokevirus got out, just think about how powerful the ponies would become :pinkiegasp:

Oh thats right, it was stated that Xavier became immortal due to Xerneas' influence.
I didn't know that carried over to his pokemayns as well.

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The game is rather vague on that.

I like it so far, good old Psychic pokemon letting you transmit thoughts, bypassing language barriers and whatnot.

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Well, I don't think the game made any mention of it at all, unless you consider AZ's fate to be Xaviers as well.

I thought you just added that immortality part in as a means to push the plot into Equestria.

That being said, in the first chapter Xavier said he defeated the rest of the Creation Trio plus Giratina. So, are they just forever trapped in a PC or what? And I can only assume the rest of the legendaries met a similar fate?

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Arceus can recreate the Creation Trio if he has to. Presumably, after they've been captured he makes replacements to keep things from falling apart.

But Xavier never says that he captured them, only that he bested them.

Also, Sycamore mentions briefly that the energy from the weapon went somewhere. He speculated that your Power Ring, the thing that triggers Mega Evolution, absorbed it. I'm going with the assumption that it drew all the power to it, but instead of absorbing it dispersed it into its wearer.

However, the needs of the few outweigh the needs of the many.

Isn't that supposed to be "The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few"?

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How the fuck did I do that?

Fixed, and thanks.

well relations between the two parties seem a bit cold at the moment.
get it cause the snow.... and the north....
yeah, yeah, I know where to go
happinessmadart.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/corner-of-shame1.jpg

that ending left a slightly sour taste in my mouth, but it does make sense, just don't make the entire next chapter all about this quarantine thing........ ooorrrr....... *wicked idea* make it so one of the physic types overhears a part of conversations saying they are going to be destroyed and they over react and start wreaking shit... :pinkiecrazy:

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Note the lack of a 'Dark' tag.

My thoughts as I began reading...

A Pokemon crossover? Meh, might as well give it a glance.

Wow, good grammar. Maybe I'll read it after all.

Huh, very good intro. It gets my thumbs up at least.

Lol, Arceus is such a smartass. Definitely getting my fav.

Princess Cadance’s day had been hard.

i.imgur.com/JdpYT.gif

You've written an awesome fallout fiction, with a sequel, and now your doing a Pokemon crossover?:pinkiehappy: In my book you just became one of the top five greatest fan fiction writers ever... of all time. The only way you could be any better is if you have a Halo or Metroid crossover that I have yet to see. Anyway, terrific chapter and one hell of a twist ending... (Must... resist... M. Night Shyamalan joke)

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Doesn't mean things can't go pear-shaped, just that there won't be a massacre involved. Nothing says "man, are you outclassed!" than your entire army getting beaten without a single fatality.

Can't read because spoilers. Pokémon Y... why must you be so far from my grasp?

I'll read when I've played the game.

3730150 Ditto (pun intended) As soon as I get the game, I'm all over this

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I agree. Plus your picture comment made me lol. 'Twas a good day.

Overall, I have high hopes for this fic. Not many pokemon fics do well.

Nice touch with the disease angle. Not many do that and have ...happy... endings.

I could see those ignorant or uneducated viewing it as slavery easily.

the way i see it they seem to escape there pokeballs at will so staying is likely voluntary. unless it brain washes them into thinking they like there masters

I think the colors looked just fine and the slavery thing was well done and is something that most would think when first encountering a trainer. Overall well done and I'll be on the look out for more updates to this awesome story.

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I view the Pokéballs as more a way of transporting the bigger ones. Can you imagine trying to fit a Steelix through the normal-sized door of a house?

.... I am SOOOO naming a female Fennekin daphne

The whole slavery angle is good. keep it up

well even in real world ignorant parent/PETA accuses Pokemon of enforcing slavery so... :applejackunsure: oh and first impression that I had of candance accusing slavery was this: upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/archive/a/a5/20121008060422!Team_Plasma_Logo.png

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Consider the Crystal Empire's history.

Anything resembling slavery is gonna get branded as slavery.

3748284 I guess it isn't completely unreasonable that Cadence got angry at the trainer. I kinda ilked the angle you are going with slavery and I can't WAIT till twilight meets pokemon. :twilightsmile:

I feel like im being teased about that no dark tag and all the rage from the pokemon, especially when X (ima just call him that for short) starting talking about the brutal ways they could kill him..... geez I think ive read to many dark stories recently.....

i really think that he could very easily take over all of equestria with his pokemon if he wished to, most pokemon are ridiculously powerful even at low levels and most are also way smarter then you would guess at first and my headcanon with this is the that a pokemons ability to reason and act intelligent increases with its power from the level of a small child for pokemon like weedle or something to superhumanly intelligent for some 3rd stage evolutions and most Legendarys.

You actually limit the power of Xavers pokemon powers I unfavorite this story

I wonder, why is it that a Pokemon you were just fighting suddenly likes you after you capture it?

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because of This trope.

it is quite common in Japanese media.

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Awww, you beat me to it.

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Always here when Justice needs to be served! :twilightsmile: IN JUSTICE WE TRUST!
:rainbowlaugh:

Limit the powers?

Aw hell naw, that better not happen.

They have no right to place such restrictions on them.

Slavery angle is rather common in pokemon stories, especially x-overs.

I agree with the slavery angle, for it is a highly debated topic.

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So, kind of a "sorry I nuked beat you up, I'll help you out now, let's be friends" thing?

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nope it is like "Worthy opponent" thing. You know " Oh! you have beaten me! You are strong! lets be friends." You know... kinda like how trainers in G/S/C and HG/SS would give their phone numbers after you beat them as a sign of friendship.

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If any kind of power-limiting will be happening, it'll be self-imposed. The last thing we need is for Luca to accidentally punch a building to pieces.

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If it's self imposed, fine by me.
It shows the characters are mindful for their strength.

Reminds me of this, somehow.

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