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While visiting Ponyville, Shining Armor meets Big Macintosh and the two quickly hit it off as best buds. However, they soon find that Twilight and Applejack may be canoodling with suspicious stallions of the town. Ever alert, the two buffoons big brothers work together to protect their little sisses from the male persuasion. The result can only be hilarity.
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This is pretty funny. As a big bro myslef, I totally know where Big Mac and Shining Armor are coming from. Interfering in the lives of their little sisters, this is gonna be hilarious.
As a big bro myself, I totally know where Big Mac and Shining Armor are coming from. This is going to be hilarious.
Well I was kinda skeptical at first, especially since I prefer fillyfoolers to shipping the mares with stallions. Still this could be interesting...
Not sure, I'll definitely give you a like though. Good writing.
All little sisters need to be locked away till they are are 25.
That is all.
This looks promsing I'll keep an eye on this.
I do have one thing that needs some work. You made Candace sound way way to formal. Candace is friendly and warm but not overly formal in the show. You might want to work on her dialogue a little. She seems a little distance and well not in character.
This is pretty good, though there isn't much description overall.
To quote that one bad guy in Robocop:
I LIKE IT!
I too, as a big brother to a little sister can see where they're coming from with this. I don't even know why I suddenly started caring in the first place. MFW
3694518 Yeah sorry, I noticed that too. It's just that I didn't give Cadence much dialogue to begin with and she's not yet vital to the story. She'll get better later on though!
3697360 Thanks for the comment! I actually have a little sister too so I thought Big Mac and S.A. would be relatable!
Bwahahahaha!!!! ooh, this is getting goood!
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3694281 Now my older brother would actually agree on that.
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I am the only one that is unsettled by the faces of both guy?
I mean.. fuck the don't have eyes, it's like someone carved them off and covered the hole with their fur.
Time Turner might not even be a real pony
I want to see the moment that Shining is right about this and tries to act on it.
3700559 Oh just you wait!
3700100 Yeah sorry, I didn't make the picture. It was just the only one I had with both guys.
3694281 no. Just...no. The little sisters of the world disagree.
I can only imagine the trouble those two will get into when this is all over.
Fun Fact: Back when Third Echelon was still headed by Irving Lambert, Equestria's Royal Guard would often receive logistical support along with Splinter Cell training program.
... Okay... When AJ and Twi find out, those two are going to be sooo dead. Poor Caramel...
Those two are hilarious, really.
This is so stupid, I LOVE IT!
Silly Caramel, we all know what happened the last time the Apple family tried to grow something other than apples.
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While this is played for comedy, yes, I agree.
This "no one dates my sister!" stuff is really getting on my nerves. I'm an only child myself, but I'd really like to pull a brother like this aside one time and kindly inform him that it's none of his damn business who his sister is seeing. Oddly enough, this situation would usually be avoided if the brother went to his sister first (at which time she'd be the one to tell him to butt out), instead of taking the more comical man-to-man approach.
But enough about that.
This story is hilarious! Faved and upvoted.
3720122 Lol, you really had me going there!
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Was that another fiction or something?
Ah, geez. I am not a little sister (older in fact) but I have a Dad and a Mom . . . oh boy. I get the feeling that whatever theyre planning wont be good.
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Nope, just my imagination running wild.
But I wouldn't mind if somepony happened to wrote it.
3732477 Lol I'll leave that up to you!
...These two are making me real glad that my older brothers are both grown and out of the house and have families of their own...though I do feel sorry for my nieces they better learn to hide the shot guns.
3707507 amen to that!
Time turner?
Big Mac and Shining are either screwed, or will kick his ass waaaay too easily.
poor doctor
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I gotta say, as an only child I doubt you can understand the emotions that go through a older siblings mind. I read a story a while back that summed it up pretty well:
“Seems like you’re awfully fond of her. Are you sure you aren’t sweet on Twilight?” asks Applejack. Oh man, that would be a totally crazy plot twist if it’s true!
“Ew! No! She’s... I don’t know. She’s special, but not like that. She’s just... She’s smart, and she’s so dedicated I want to strangle her sometimes, but when I see her hurting I just want to strangle whoever’s making her feel that way. There’s no word for it.” he says.
“Ah can think of one,” says Applejack. “Family. She’s family to you.”
A younger sister can drive you nuts and make you want to kill them, but when they get down or cry it makes you feel even worse. And as an older sibling you have an urge to protect them without trying to be overbearing. You know inside you can't keep them away from jerks and bad happenstance, but atleast we can warn those they choose that if they hurt your family, you hurt them back. Its ingrained in us from birth as men to protect our home, family and women especially.
Get thine sister to a nunnery!
On top of possibly dooming equestria,Shining armor has endangered his marriage since Twilight and Cadence are going to likely recognize them in the foal free press news photo. There going to have a loooot of explaining to do.
Oh gods. poor doctor.
Those two idiots are hilarious.
I knew I was right to read Time Turner's lines in the Doctor's voice.
Damn it Sweetie Belle! It starts as embarrassing, but now it's just gonna bite them in the ass. In hindsight, maybe a disguise as two smartly dressed dudes would have been a better idea.
And one more thing, very dumb questions to be certain, but I have to ask. Aside from death beams of death (the sounds of which Nightmare Moon can copy quite easily) and possibly vacuum grabby-hands, what threats are Daleks? And why are the Elements the only thing that can stop them all of a sudden? Haven't they been known to blow themselves up on occasion? This is apparently in the limbo between Seasons 3 and 4, so why can't the Elements, plus Celestia and Luna (and maybe Discord) fight off the oncoming horde while the Doctor and the Elements can do so just fine? Yes I know it's just a few lines in the story that I'm delving way too far into, but that's how I work.
Also in hindsight, I guess just spewing bull that you're looking for genuine love after a long life of general solitude is kind of hard to think of on the spot.
Looks like Mission Completed!!!
3774341 Don't worry, all will be answered in time!
Hey guys! Sorry if it's been a while since I updated. Too be honest, this might have been the worst chapter I came up with.
But let me know what you think!
3865940 Nice! I'm really hooked on this story!
Hm... not sure what to think about this last chapter.
On the one hand, it's a nice bit of fridge horror (something that's at first not disturbing becoming disturbing the more you think on it). I mean, overprotective or not, Shining Armor and Big Mac saw fit to essentially wreck their sisters' love lives based on their own personal prejudice with no second thought to the consequences or the implications. They may have just destroyed true love based upon first impressions.
On the other, it had a semi-happy ending. Twilight's going out with Fancy Pants (or at least it's implied) and Applejack has seemingly come to terms with Caramel's loss.
Either way, there's a lot of unexplored territory here that would make for a great drama concerning the expanded aftermath of these two's exploits. In all honesty, this story gave me the idea to write a story where Shining interferes with Twilight's love life, but she doesn't take to it very kindly.
Fridge horror or not, this was still an enjoyable read, and I'm curious to see what you come up with next. You just earned yourself another follower, friend.
At some point, the boys are going to have to face the music. And it will be glorious.
Okay, wtf did I just read? It looks much like an April 1st chapter.
That's got to be the greatest alter-ego Shining Armor has ever created!!!!
Also isn't Fancy Pants way older than Twilight? I mean HUGE age difference!!!!
Shining Armor is such a ham.
... Okay, that was a bit...weird. I can't believe their sisters are so gullible. I think Twi may have at least gotten out to search for TT, and isn't AJ the element of honesty? She accepted teh story waay to easily, I think. But still amusing, please don't take this as criticism.