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"I haven't seen a bigger waste of talent since Dan Marino." -Lucky Seven; Want to support me?

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A picnic is going on in Ponyville, and to be honest it's pretty terrible.

So what do you get when when, at said picnic, you mix a scheming Spike, a crushing Rainbow Dash, an impassive Big Macintosh, an angry Applejack and an arrogant Twilight?
Love. You get Love.
And a whole lot of destruction.

A silly, fluffy MacDash story written for Captain Unstoppable's MacDash contest. Enjoy!

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Comments ( 21 )

I bucking love that saying you've got up!

Your depiction of Spike is awesome. I want your Spike to be cannon.

Overall this was amazing.

Loved it! Though Jake and Chief will have to be the main judges... since we are frat bros.

Hehehehe...

Spike (sotto voce): "Chaos... Madness... Destruction.... My work here is done..."

Plus, their color schemes fit pretty well, didn’t they?

That is a pretty important detail, after all.

“Liquidity! Yes, of course!” Twilight spun around, galloping back to the table where lively debate was still raging. “GET READY TO EASE THIS QUANTITATIVELY!”

Hah!

Well, Twilight was correct about the elaborate misconduct.

Wow, now that's the blunt approach, Spike.

I fully approve of the elaborate misconduct. Nice job, Spike.

MacDash love sets the world on fire. With an added dose of Applejack.

All I have to say is: :moustache:

Hillbe #8 · Jul 2nd, 2016 · · 1 ·

:duck: "Oh Twilight my sweet little Spikey Wikey would never partake in any form of hooligan shenanigans...He's such a gentlecolt." :facehoof:

:moustache: love is in the air?:ajbemused: Nnnnnnnnnn!


:rainbowlaugh::eeyup:

That was honestly the funniest thing I have read in quite some time. I love the way Spike is portrayed, even if it's a bit out of character, it's hilariously executed and I can almost even see him doing this in the show, albeit perhaps not so extremely.

The line "he had created art" had me in stitches, just purely out of the way he conducted the whole thing. "It was time to engage in elaborate misconduct."

Thank you for writing this, it just about made my day.

7358400 Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it; I never dreamed a silly little story like this would get such a positive reaction!

7358687 You are certainly welcome! I do have one bit of constructive criticism, though, from a PR standpoint. Your description doesn't do the story justice. Your mini-description (Big Mac and rainbow realize their feelings at the worst possible time) is nice, but the longer one could be better.

I'll admit, I'm rotten at coming up with descriptions (go look at my one story for an example lmao), but I think a long description similar to the short one would work better.

just my two bits :twilightsmile:

Okay, who let Derpy on the grill? I honestly think the town is pretty self-destructive at this point.

I think I'll grab something from the next grill. :unsuresweetie: Celestia dammit...

All in all avery fun little read though I don't know what AJ's deal is. Though I guess the whole town is crazy so...:derpytongue2:

Keep on keepin' on! :pinkiehappy:

Apple Jack needs to chill

I'm saddened by the fact that I can only thumbs up this story once.

7422841 thanks for the kind words! :twilightsmile:

This is amazing! I especially enjoyed how you wrote Spike - it makes sense that he'd be smart enough to do all this, considering he lives with Sparkle.

7615978 I'm really pleased that you enjoyed!

7616192 You're very welcome!

This is what I imagine Spike's laugh to be like

Favorite part was Spike's Mischief. I got a good kick out of it.

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