Lyra and Bonbon have opened a detective agency and are taking on their first case. What starts as a some missing muffins soon escalates. Now, it's up to these completely unlicensed non-professionals to solve the case. Oh, somepony also dies.
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Thanks, glad you liked it. I do plan on making more of these.
I didn't see that coming! Nice job!
What? You mean to tell me that (censored due to spoilers)!
That was completely unexpected. It is an amusing story though, and does have a funny concept. Almost seems like the opposite of Sherlock Holmes and Doctor Watson
...what the felt-tipped whore did I just read?
Hi! LevelHeadedBrony here. I just reviewed your story for the The Pleasant Commentator and Review Group!
That was amazing. Dude, I'm not sure if you're gonna make a sequel to this, but I can't wait. Oh, Dat twist ending though.
Maybe Lyra and Applebloom touched some kind of dark wish-fulfillment artifact.
6396013 You mean like The Bataan Death march Dogtags?
Or the teakettle that makes ferrets?
7014794 They should've just asked for a ferret!
7015691 Or for something impossible.
Kinda needs a Dark tag, but that doesn't change the fact that this was hilarious. :D