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Twilight, Luna, Applejack and Rainbow Dash go on a camping trip together while Rarity, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy are away in Manehattan, but what adventures lie for them on the way? Will they make it in one piece? Exactly what are Applejack's feelings for Rainbow Dash? And who does Twilight like?

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I love your stories~ Truth is I usually don't touch RD/AJ shipping, but, d'aww... :twilightsmile:
Just tell me - is there going to be Twilight shipping?

I agree with Quill. I'd love to see some Twilestia in here~ But a marvelous read none the less! I'll be sure to watch for more. There were a few minor errors, but nothing too serious. If you need any proofreaders, I'm up for it. ^3^

I'm eager to see where this story will go. Keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

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Maybe there is, maybe there isn't :trollestia:
Though if there is, it would be fairly brief
(To be honest, I'm not sure, as I tend to write as it comes)

311483 ah, okay :twilightsheepish: it's your story after all, and i know that feeling of some things writing themselves. keep it up, i really enjoyed your celestia's birthday fic and look forward to this one as well. :twilightsmile:

When i read 'twilight' and 'new magic' I think 'fun' mwahahahah

D'awwww at the last part. :twilightsmile:

:twilightblush: kyoot! a few errors, you should be able to find them easily if you run a check again.
and something funny i'll point out: Liked this story? People who did, also liked the following... at the bottom of story. --> three of my stories? (jaw drops)

and if you want me to specifically point out the small errors i mentioned, just ask :twilightsmile:

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If you wanna message them me or something I'd be most grateful :twilightsmile:

315151 Do you want them with suggestions? like proof-reading :twilightsmile: or do you just want spelling, punctuation stuff?

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If it's no trouble for you then suggestions would be much appreciated :twilightsmile:

This is a short chapter, but the next one will be much bigger :yay:

AppleDash (which was already obvious) and TwiLuna then :P

twilight and luna, hmmmmm........ TUNA!

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Tuna! That's brilliant! :pinkiehappy:

I really should give credit to Adam Young here, for using some lyrics from his song Hot Air Balloon, if you guys like happy happy music, go check it out :) Hot Air Balloon

I wonder what Big Mac's thinking.... :eeyup:

Enjoying the story!

Keep up the great work!

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Thanks! I'm enjoying writing it too, I start with a loose plan and always finish with something completely different :twilightsmile:

350347 So can i guess that Applejack is your favorite pony?

349286 That was so cute, I smiled as soon as I read Twilight murmuring those lyrics :twilightblush:

I am enjoying this tale my good sir or madam, keep up the fantastic work!

For the record, sir :) And thank you very much! :twilightsmile:

I wish your chapters were longer. This is really cute! ^^

If you are not familiar or do not watch Doctor Who I apologise for this chapter being somewhat irrelevant for you, however, I implore you watch it, it's AMAZING! :pinkiehappy:

As for you Whovians out there, I hope you like this one. :pinkiesmile:

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Nothing like the Doctor doing what he does best to brighten up one's day.

This chapter shortened.

Rainbow Dash: DAMN, SHE IS FUCKING HOT! :rainbowwild:
AppleJack: Did you say something? :applejackunsure:
Rainbow Dash: Nope, nothing at all. :rainbowderp:
AppleJack: Oh. Looks like you'll have to sleep in my bed. :ajsmug:
Rainbow Dash: HELL FUCKING YES! :rainbowkiss:
AppleJack: Wha- :ajsleepy:
Rainbow Dash: Nothing. :rainbowderp:

“Well maybe slowing down could be a good thing?” said Twilight encouragingly, “you can view things from a whole new perspective.”

“Yeah, the boring perspective.”

I smell smoke... looks like someone got burned! OOOOOOH

Poor confused Dash. That's what she gets for chasing the Doctor. :ajsmug:

Yaaay, cute chapter!

Hmmm, I might have something for you...

Hope you like it!
...and yeah, I made it.
...and yeah, that's me. ^^

I just have one question.
Is Applejack making fish sticks?:ajsmug:

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Pretty much! XD :twilightsheepish:

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I just watched it and wow! Seriously, that was incredible! You nailed the characters brilliantly and there were tons of moments where I was laughing out loud :rainbowlaugh:

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I left this open to interpretation, it's not too absurd to think that they might eat fish, however, I like to think they are vegetarian, so if you wanna think they had fish fingers with the custard, feel free! :twilightsmile:

Go Luna! Get the girl!!! Hehe.

Go go go TwiLuna!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :twilightangry2::twilightangry2: Grrr!!!! you are getting good at twists!!

Maps!

I apologise if my map conflicts with your headcanon, but this is my view of Equestria. :twilightblush:

I like maps. I also like how quickly you update.

Lake Din, Lake Naryu, and Lake Farore.. Not to mention the Triforce between them all. I see what you did there.. And I love it :pinkiehappy:

Woooah~ :twilightblush::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::heart:
and the map was a cool touch! :rainbowdetermined2:

Awesomeness abounds! :pinkiehappy:

But, uh, Firefly? Is that a character that I've missed in the course of the story, or were you replacing Rainbow's name with Firefly. I'm just confused, that's all. :rainbowhuh:

Great chappie, and the LoZ references are cool... But who the heck is Firefly? :applejackconfused:

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I was really worried for a few minutes, I thought someone had hacked my account and was chaging little things to annoy me, but you know what it is? I believe this is an April Fool's Day prank hehe, I looked at a few other stories and Firefly is Rainbow Dash haha :rainbowlaugh: In fact, that'd be quite a cute nickname ya know for RD, I might incorporate it :D

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Haha I realized that the cheeky bastards are playing an April Foal's prank. They changed all of the Mane 6 to be the ponies from the older gen MLP shows that influenced the new ones. Rainbow Dash was inspired by Firefly, Rarity was inspired by Sparkler(?), Pinkie was inspired by Surprise, Fluttershy was inspired by Pokey, Applejack was really just adjusted from the old gen, and I'm not sure about Twilight because her name hasn't been changed as far as I know. :applejackunsure:

My theory is that Firefly and Rainbow Dash I went lesbians for each other and SOMEHOW made a baby, which came out as the Rainbow Dash II that we all know and love. :pinkiehappy:

And so the adventure is about to begin. Ahh . . . A.J might have a bit of a dark past, can R.D get it out of her?

Need more.......... So it looks like Luna has some competition for Twilight's attention from Big Mac. Hmmmmm.

Awww, great job. Let's hope Dashie cheers up poor Applejack

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