Pirates, adventure, and romance.
Rainbow Dash may have just gotten ahold of the greatest piece of useless blackmail material ever.
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Captain Macintosh. Brilliant.
Big Macintosh's Dream Journal...
This is gonna be GOOD.
Well I do love piracy, and big Mac is super cool, so this looks pretty good. I like Rainbow Dash's commentary.
This is great. I'm looking forward to more.
Awesome.
I rarely see any fan fics devoted strictly to Big Mac, It's a nice change of pace.
Keep at it.
love it so far
I like were this is going!
1532762 what the heck?
But, thanks to everyone else, I am loving this, like seriously.
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This man, he be trolling.
No, it's a spam bot. Report it as spam and pay it no mind.
I like the story. I find it amusing.
1532929 Yeah I know, but they could at least try to spam in english.
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It... is in English?
That was rather confusing, and an editorial nightmare.
Very interesting
I thought it was going to be Trixie too.
Exactly
I approve. static.fimfiction.net/images/icons/thumb_up.png
well when you start a new life after traveling and being a jerk you might take a new name
Trixie got a name change. Calling it.
1577969 It is a truly magnificent mental image, is it not? Macintosh Apple standing at the bow of his ship, wearing a three-point hat, a long cape billowing in the sea breeze, and the mist off of the waters coating his mane...
Wow... that was sort of weird, sorry for that...
great story so far
A great story. I hope to see more soon.
i enjoy the story and loving the rainbowdash opinions
only i ask, does his ship has cannons???
is so i can't wait for some action chapters, if not then i hope for some dodgy trading and deceptive sailors
but for now its sounding good, a salute to captain mac
I can't wait for the next chapter. I just wish that they were longer so I could enjoy them for a longer period of time.
1640800 I'll work on that, these past few weeks have been full of stuff, but this week is Thanksgiving break, so when I'm not in a food coma I will be writing.
I sense a Side-Sory of Rainbow's dreams coming.
A Few Days after discovering this site
I know the feeling that is if there was MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you for the story
Such a good story.
Can't wai to see what happens.
love this story
Sorry to anyone who just received a notification about this updating, I realized that i forgot to give the German Shepherd girl a name, and for those of you who do not want to reread this chapter just for the name, it is Schatzi. German for sweetheart, or something.
i dont cheat
!
this is looking every interesting and i seem to want to write a prequel about the flying crab
i ve always liked naval discipline and warfare must come from being british haha
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sweetheart huh!
wish you had named her snitchel or hagel (grapeshot in dutch
1677036 well, I cheat on occasion. Coming up with that name, for instance was a cheat. I just googled, 'German shepherd female names' and that was the first one to come up.
I would love to see what you come up with.
But all of the other names were from my own imagination or memories.
Heck if you want to do a prequel, be my guest.
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huzzar indeed haha
sweet im going master and commander style!
big mac best watch the sea for the Royal Equian Flotilla ! masters of the waves that show no remorse to piracy
My only criticism for this, is that the chapters need to be much longer. If you're aiming for the swashbuckling epic I'm assuming you are, shorter chapters do no favors in cementing the feeling of adventure. By the end of the story, I'm going to want to be invested in every crew member and root for them, I want to know about their backstory, personality and motive for being a pirate, and short chapters do not help in doing this.
Apart from that, I am really hooked on this story, and I'm very curious as to why that Daring Do tag is there. Maybe she could be the new pegasus crew member and the romantic link between Mac and Dash I'm such a sucker for.
Guess who is able to fix the mast?
You guessed it. Smoky Mirror
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1703436 Thanks for the input, I'm just having minor issues finding time. However, I do plan on making longer chapters, ones that elaborate deeply on the relations between the crew members. Chapters will also grow as Mac returns from Canterlot, and "real-world" drama begins to unfold...
you'll see...
...as for the Daring Doo tag,
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ok thank god I wasn't the only one who saw that and thought rainbow link
Interesting so far. Gonna stick it out 'till the end. I agree though, the chapters are just a tad bit too small. If you could get them to a good twenty-five hundred or thirty hundred word count, I would be able to enjoy it longer.
Hey, all you guys! Someone wrote a prequel and you can find it...
Here.
And I listened to you guys to make it longer.
Have fun!
holly crap.........this is a true story isnt it...... like Big Mac is putting down something that happed in the guies as a story. He eventually gets his leg healed........ Or Im guessing wildly
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oh you made me blush !!
and i really am loved this chapter, and i may of acted out the pistol firing scene while reading haha
Another great chapter! Still curious about that whole crush business, considering the only canon pony in his story that Big Mac ever had the chance to meet would be...
Oh my.
1736415 Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyup.
MK
Really enjoyed this chapter and can hardly wait for the next. I've noticed some improvement on your writing abilities as this story goes on, keep up the good work!
1744709 Thanks for the feedback!
, but I'm warning you, I will not confirm or deny anything
And I must say, I love that you guys are making predictions
(Joke) Alt. Title: The Adventures Of Dashboy And Applegirl In 3D
...What? That had a dream journal, this has a dream journal... Y'know!
ha