Of Apples and Awkwardness

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Rainbow Dash is helping Applejack on apple bucking day, but they both get more than they signed up for as the day's events go from one embarrassing situation to another. Through it all, they may just learn a thing or two about each other.

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ObeySaturnGod

ObeySaturnGod #1 · Mar 26th, 2012 · · ·

While shipping isn't technically part of the story, I can't deny that there are elements of it present. I figure this would be under 'Accidental Shipping.'

Hungrybear

Hungrybear #2 · Mar 26th, 2012 · 1 · ·

Well as long as it is accidental even so i feel i must leave this here as well.
i.imgur.com/lwxxF.png?2
now i shall begin reading

SugarPesticide

SugarPesticide #3 · Mar 26th, 2012 · · ·

I don't understand how the sun can be a vicious ball. A vicious sphere I suppose I could understand, or maybe even a vicious orb, but a ball just makes me compare the sun to a random toy that the CMC kicked up onto the roof and can't get down.
Anyway the presence of kissing, shower peaking, and wingboners should probably earn this a romance tag, if not a teen tag. There's a difference between elements of shipping and a giant double rainbow of shipping.

IraqLobstah

IraqLobstah #4 · Mar 26th, 2012 · · ·

368580
Fuck.

You took my idea.

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

LIGHTNINLANDEN

LIGHTNINLANDEN #5 · Mar 26th, 2012 · · ·

Funny! I love this. Let me know if youre going to add on to it!

JimmyZD

JimmyZD #6 · Mar 26th, 2012 · · ·

This is so adorable. Favorited!

ElectricBlueMane

ElectricBlueMane #7 · Mar 26th, 2012 · · ·

This was a pretty good lil' fic. It looks to me like you could really develop on this if you so wanted. I, for one, am hoping you'll continue it! But, if not, ah well.

Frizzy

Frizzy #8 · Mar 27th, 2012 · · ·

I love how Applebloom implied that they were lesbians.

Desol

Desol #9 · Mar 30th, 2012 · · ·

Pretty entertaining. One thing I noticed, though-- "Rainbow silently asked Applejack..." Unless one or both of them are telepathic, that'd be quietly Apart from that I don't remember any errors, and the story was good. As others have said, gotta love Applebloom's innocent commentary.