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Jondor


Fabulous, darling.

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Snapshots in the life of a cowpony and a weather manager.

Heavily inspired by TheLastBrunnenG's Thirty Minute Ponies collections. Unstarred chapters are edited and expanded from minifics originally posted for the AppleDash group. *Starred* chapters are wholly unique to this collection.

Chapters are arranged in chronological order and new chapters may not always appear last. Going to consider this functionally complete.

Scene change markers scaled down from here.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 48 )
Jackie #1 · Mar 13th, 2013 · · · DJ ·

I love this one :heart:

Then again, I love all the stuff you've written! :rainbowlaugh:

That would be an interesting fitting indeed :ajsmug:

:rainbowkiss: Freaking adorable. <3

Thumbs up because I've already read these on the AppleDash forums.

Heavily inspired by TheLastBrunnenG's Thirty Minute Ponies collections.

Holy sweet leaping Lunas, I inspired something besides a mass exodus in the other direction?

short but sweet.:ajsmug:

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Credit where credit is due. :twilightsmile:

These are all at least a bit longer than the originals, some more than others (Pranks is nearly double the length), so hopefully they are worth a second reading.

I couldn't help but laugh at the idea of them getting their tuxedos or getting married naked.

I may have to borrow some inspiration from this one for my "Friends and Family" story series.

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Go for it. If I can inspire someone, I take it as a huge compliment.

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I had that (and the idea that the are both tomcoltish enough to want stallion attire) in mind as soon as I read the prompt. Which is all bookplayer's fault influence. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by NikkiNyte deleted Mar 31st, 2013

pinkie... pinkie... what are you... pinkie stahp it... :pinkiecrazy:

Nice change of pace. I like it! Make this chapter into a full story; I feel that if this were a full fic, it may get dramatic at points but this one has an interesting and promising premise.
I would love to see what you could do with it!

Connect this directly with the filly-fooler chapter in one fic and you have some basis for an outstandingly satisfying story.

Just my personal opinion.

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This is that fic. I may go into those topics some more in additional chapters.

Llamantinan? :rainbowlaugh: so... i`m llamantinian!
:rainbowhuh::ajbemused: for you to dance :trollestia:

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Heh, yup. Had to ponify it somehow and it seemed to fit.

I can totally see my AJ and Dash dancing to that. :rainbowkiss:

This one really throws me. Cuz the impression that comes across is Scoots filling out paperwork that would have her be adopted by Dash and AJ, without letting them know that's what's happening...

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I can assure you that's not the case, but concede that it's a bit ambiguous as it stands now.

Awesome! An author who flips it around! For Appledash, I'd personally much rather see things from AJ's POV, just because we get to see her more vulnerable that way. It's better for her character most of the time (here included). :ajsmug:

I practically had a smile on my face the entire time I read this due to the heart felt moments and references :rainbowkiss:

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Thanks! I've had this scene in mind ever since I wrote the 'Wonderbolt' prompt chapter, but one thing or another always distracted me from finishing it.

I'm really kind of surprised I haven't seen anyone else using the Gabby Gums incident as a reason for Dash not to want to join the Wonderbolts and avoid the tabloid coverage.

Very nice. Needs more cider, though.:rainbowwild:

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Cider's a fall thing. This was the middle of summer. :derpytongue2:

I do like seeing expansion on pegasus culture - this seems like an interesting thing. Need more in your other fics about this! :rainbowkiss:

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I'll definitely keep it in mind. This story has almost become my testbed for new ideas. :rainbowlaugh:

3002469 DO ETTTT! :pinkiegasp:

I live in somerset, and every time i hear "cider" i always repeat it in a stupid voice in my head.

short and sweet. I like it as is, but I crave more now.

This. I like this. Smartass McIntosh. Macintosh. Whatever.

*Grins and applauds slowly* nice. I love Mac as really intelligent and caring and you did him perfectly.

Wait, what? I don't get it...
Oh wait, Mac set them up?:pinkiegasp:

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Well, not directly. But he did get AJ to get her butt in gear. :eeyup:

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Ooohhh! Clever! and loved it!

First chapter and I have already given it a thumbs up...

OK OK OK OK OK THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER OF ANYTHING. EVER.

can't..... BREATHE!!! Cuteness... is... DOMINATING!!!!

OHMYGOD OHMYOGD OHMYGOD OHMYGOD OHMY-

WE GET IT, YOU LOVE THE CHAPTER. NOW SHUT UP. :rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

today I have learned the hard way to never try to hold in your laughter, or else you will choke and nearly die.:ajbemused:

Scootaloo. Dash. Apple.

Scootaloo. Dash. Apple.

Scootaloo. Dash. Apple

Scootaloo. Dash. Apple.

I can't even right now.

Spitfire positively squealed in delight. “Oh my gosh! Applejack is the whole reason I started following rodeo! Congratulations!”

...This IS still Spitfire we're talking about here, right?

She squealed.

....She said oh my gosh!! .....

4897276 This was written before S3 and Wonderbolts Academy came along, but I still stick to the idea that she turns off her drill sergeant mode when she's not on duty (as in Best Night Ever).

I hope there's another one soon!! XP Thid is a very good little story!!! XP

this is so cute :))

“So, what’s up?” Dash landed a few hooves away, folding her wings away and looking AJ in the eye, awaiting whatever this was. Applejack swallowed and licked her lips, fighting against the dry feeling in her mouth so her voice wouldn’t crack. The delay it provided was just a happy coincidence.

You’re an author who clearly knows what they’re doing and may appreciate this little style nitpick. Delete that bolded “away”.

“You read my mind, pony girl.” Dashie sank to her haunches and held up the open box in her forehooves. Inside was a pair of red, yellow and blue hair ties, each with a little cloud clasp. “AJ, will you marry me?”

Hair ties? Seriously?!

How can you consider this complete? Gotta have at least one more where Dash is a guest flier, right?

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