The heart wants what the hearts wants, right? But what would happen if you never truly knew what your heart wanted? What's supposed to be a usual morning for Applejack quickly turns to chaos as she is left with three questions.
What happened to her?
How will she cope?
Why do the Cutie Mark Crusaders keep following her around?
A big thank you to Kutsune Risu for proofreading it and an even bigger thank you to Jackie for the astounding cover-art
Note: I won't be following the canon established by the S3 finale.
Chapters (5)
Work can wait. I have AppleDash to read!
[Edit] Oh CMC. You guys are always getting into trouble. This is a super entertaining start. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
WHERE ARE SHY'S WINGS!
In the art, of course.
Will read soon.
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2127195 You'll find out when you read
Ahhhh.....shit. Thwese are about to go down,
fluttershy worrying about grass, damn....I love both of these pairings a lot so I'm 100% down, can't wait to see how this will go, damn the CMC can mess anything up....seriously....damn.
2127195 Her heart's desire is to be an Earth pony, obviously.
I'm gussing AJ is going to get wings. I wonder what Fluttershy will get though. Also, her and Rarity? Eh, I can see it. Looking forward to chapter 2
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Eeyup.
I was so relieved that Applejack had wings. I thought the twist with her being heavier was gonna be that she turned into a stallion. Which would have been a crazy hearts desire to say the least.
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Now that would've been weird huh?
Holy shit, I was actually right. That "her heart's desire is obviously to be an earth pony" comment was a joke, and I thought it was just a blooper in the art, but... Wow. That's awkward. xD
Stalker Belle.....was all I could think of seeing Sweets
Wow, this is crazy, thought AJ would have fallen in love with somepony like Dash but guess I was wrong, nice twist though. This has my attention, not suprise that Flutter's loves her earth magic, shall read on
Emergency Pinkie Pie rope...genius
Love the story. Cant way to see more Lessons for AppleJack. but it seems she is seeing the upside to having wings. more time with Dash. Hope we get to see Rainbows thoughts on AJ having wings. Cant help but wonder what her reaction was when Scootaloo told her. Plus what will the others say when fluttershy doesnt have wings. Wonder if fluttershy will want wings again and AJ will want to lose the wings.
lovin it
Lol! Wonderful chapter. xD Gotta love Pinkie.
Just one thing, if you didn't mind me pointing it out: "I teached your sister to fly..."
I believe this should be "I taught your sister to fly". ^^ Otherwise the rest is perfect; there's always one thing you forget to catch, right? D:
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And fixed
thanks for the find
When did rarity and fluttershy get married?
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In a time before the fic. Or do you want specifics? :)
When can we expect full on appledash??
yay
I have a good feeling Aj always wanted to be able to fly with rainbow. Also secret crush.
oh life! Sigh.
Rainbow even though everyone is super clueless doesn't mean you have to be so obvious.
I'm guessing ree is supposed to be tree?
either way this is just to wonderful keep up the good work
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, nice catch
Oooh
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No Problem
these emotions have been done before, but:
A flower died that day in the name of love.
R.I.P Truth Flower
Glad AJ and Dash admitted they loved one another. And that pinkie said she loved twilight. I hope pinkie gets her happiness with Twilight. The whole dash stomping the flower...not sure what to think about that. i hope it doesnt bring any problems between AJ and her. I but i couldnt understand if it did cause Dash took AJs choice away
Quite impressive, have not read this story in a while, not bad, not bad at all, ah Pinkie Pie
Pinkie understands Owl? Makes sense
This was great, very well done, I'm glad to see everything is going well, can't wait for more
Huh...that was....sudden, a bit unrealistic but it's an E rated fic so that's expected, all in all a 8/10
"Twilight just smiled and started looking for a pickle to start experimenting." this sentence could easily be taken out of context.
Love the Fic! Keep up the great update speed!
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Great update speed?
It's been like 5 months since my previous update
An udpate?
Awesome! You did a great job!
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We will have a short memorial service tomorrow. Don't be late.
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b-but i got weather patrol that day! D:
I was being sarcastic, just so ya know.
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You weren't there.
Now I had to console his children, Truth Petal and Truth Stem by myself.
Thank god that Zecora stayed strong during the funeral.
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I "m soooo sorry D: >w<
You know...I think in the original drafts of FIM, Fluttershy was supposed to be an Earth Pony.
Ooh, TwiPie! :)
awwww I loved this story!!!!!!!!!!!! why did you cancel it?
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Actually, the entire fic is fully written. Has been for 1.5 years.
But I've gotten so much better by the time that my proofreader looked it over, that I feel ashamed of it. Right now, I can't publish it with a shitton of edit's and an overhaul of a drama bit, because I suck at writing drama. And if there's something I hate doing, then it's doing edits :(
5176181 Awwww
Okay.
After reading the first section, I had to check when this was written, as their hoped-for cutie-marks (happiness bringers) were close enough to what they turned out to be in the show that I just had to laugh a little.
I can understand just not wanting to do the significant editing you seem to think is necessary, I've gotten sick of reading some of my own more finicky writing. Actually, in my opinion, if you cut out those last few paragraphs about Rainbow and the truth seed, this would be a pretty good place to end this fic. That said, I'm going to throw this on my "Hope Springs Eternal" bookshelf, and hope that you someday get up the gumption to do what it takes to post the rest of this.