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Twilight finds it a bit difficult to reconcile Celestia's playful new manner with the regal teacher she knew for so long.
Once she does, however, the benefits are plain to see.
Ideas, editing, and criticism provided by my partner in crime, Cryosite.
Now with a reading by HanaYoriUta.
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Amazing and adorable. That's all there is to say.
...okay, then.
Lunch hour confirmed.
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Cryo puts interesting ideas in my head sometimes.
Wonderful read and exactly what I needed after a rough start to the day. Thank you for sharing it
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Interesting is a good word for it. Seriously, amidst the prose I can see whichever Skype conversation you and Cryo clearly had on the matter reworded into the opening paragraphs of this story—an opening which does everything to tell me Twi's justification for being into Celestia (and vice versa) instead i
of showing it to me.
Anyway, this... is all right for what it is. There will be a lot of people reading this with a lot of raging hormones who will salivate at the all the ships you both touch on and linger over here, but you know me—it's really hard for me to get into a "romance" story that jumps right into the heat with minimal emotional buildup or character examination. This has more than most fics of this length, but still.
And while I can accept the Twilestia stuff as a fun pocket scenario the bedroom bit completely threw me out of things. :| Again, knowing what you know about me, I'm sure you can ascertain exactly why. XD
In short, I much prefer your Wubverse's handling of the genre.
But you clearly had fun with this, so shine on you crazy diamond.
Nice! That´s a good Twilestia right there.
Funny, the Characters are done right and it had solid writing.
have a like
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What do you think compelled me to write this ahead of other projects on my plate?
Anyway, I deliberately left the reasons for them going to Celestia's bedroom open ended to allow people to choose their own level of spiciness, but if you're referring to them catch RariDash, then you'll have to blame Cryo.
I do see some problems.
Your lack of build up is notable as you blatantly bombard the reader with events. Most of said events are easily predicted and spotted like an entire army marching across a broad, barren tundra. However, this story has a scare few quarks that charm a number of readers, and the simple execution makes it appeal to wide audience. Still, the insignificant scene where Rarity and Rainbow Dash are revealed to be in a intimate relationship doesn't justify the tags, or the inclusion in the groups that are intended to feature the couple as the main dish of the story. I would refer to that form of behavior as shoddy, perhaps even shady. Regardless, the qualities are still there.
Overall, I rate this story a hopefully fair 6/10. Not deserving of a downvote, but doesn't work all that hard for the upvote.
The plot was cute, and by all accounts I should have loved this, but for some reason I got bored and couldn't continue. It was a bit hard to figure out why, until I remembered this:
What's happening is relatable and intense enough to keep interest, but the way it's written is a bit flat compared to the emotions that should be behind the actions here...
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I was, and I instantly did.
I support this headcanon.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Am I the only one who calls it "polygamy?"
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Polygamy refers to formal (or multiple formal) commitments.
Polyamory refers to love without necessarily including formalities.
Therefore, they are different, if related, concepts.
6056694 Really? I was told they were synonyms.
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A quick google search would clear up that misinformation. With the entire Internet available on demand, its a good habit to get into.
I liked it.
Cute with a side of sexy.
Celestia's face in the picture scares me. O.o
This was adorable! I loved it!
I have written a review of this story. It can be found here.
I love it! May I give this a dramatic reading?
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Sure, go for it.
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I am honored to receive a 'Not Recommended' from robodragon reviews~
Now I can brag to all my friends.
Seems a bit rushed but all in all its alright
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And...
That was so funny!
Needs fullblown polyamory, 'nuff said
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I'm in a couple Skype chats with Titty Drag, I'm well versed in his ways and means.
And I didn't suspect for a minute that a silly piece of fluff like this would be up his alley.
Very cute. A+ and would love a continuation.
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^^^
What they said. I can confirm based on my cutie mark and the tens of millions of words of shipping I have read. ;)
Well, also that show is better than tell 99/100 times.
You basically have to imagine the scene as a video in your head and describe the sequence as if you were explaining it to a person who had gone blind, because we readers are blind to what you see in your head.
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Oh, and that, but that's more of a personal moral preference than indicative of writing quality.
there is so much you can do with this I can not wait to see what happens in a sequel fic
That is all.
OH MY GOD!
I've never seen Princess Celestia with wide eyes and both showing! I didn't notice it!
Sorry for the off topic comic I promise to read the story now.
After:
Not bad; I can see Celestia in almost every action.
Didn't expect to see this side to Celestia.
All in all, this was a really good fic.
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IKR!
Now if only this went a step further into becoming a clop-fic.... >:D *slap* No! Bad mind! Don't venture into those dark places!
Awesome. Just. Awesome.
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Fun fact. The original outline did go that far, but the substance (such as it exists) ran out before then. And it worked better to merely imply it as an endgame possibility.
But yeah, they totally bang in the library.
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I see. That happens a lot. Implying things is
alwaysmost of the time, the best route to go!Libraries are the quietest place to go. ;) Twilight must be very happy.
I get that you like it, but all it does in the actual story is serve as a distraction from the emotional core of Twilight and Celestia. It arrives completely out of left field and they never do manage to mesh with the rest of the story. The immediate "you don't have to give up on casual sex with your friends just because we're dating" from Celestia diminishes the importance of her relationship with Twilight while the rest of your time is spent on building it up. The RariDash also feels very forced, like it's only in the story because someone decided the story just wasn't complete without throwing in their completely unrelated OTP.
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Yes. because everything ever has to be 4srs. No fun allowed.
If this were intended to be more than a bit of fluff, I might listen. As it is, I stick my fingers in my ears and go "lalalalalalalalala".
Fucking stop calling her princess already, Twilight
6057578 Heh... I got chuckles out of all the "Not Recommended" and hated the one he recommended. Apparently, I'm a plebeian.
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Nah, just means you have different tastes in fics than he does. His reviews are still useful, just in the opposite way he intends.
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>effort is only for super srs bsns
k
6055493 Bookish likes it?
CONFIRMED GOOD STORY.
*reads* Just as good as I thought.
Twilight has acquired a wing-boner... that means... i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/931/803/4bd.jpg i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/582/342/fed.png I hope Spike isn't reading *Somewhere else in the multiverse*i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/931/844/d1a.jpeg i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/931/822/efc.png
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Now you're just being insulting. If you don't appreciate the effort I put into this story that I wrote entirely for fun, you can go ahead and goosestep on over to the 1K shitfic authors who don't bother to proofread or edit their garbage.
Cave Johnson, we're done here.
I love it!!!! I think that was just funny. Show me some SMEX IN THE LIBRARY!!!!!
Not a bad story at all, and rather nice to see a lighter side to Celestia.
Aside to "Hard Pressed Scribe" - brush up on both your grammar and correct word usage, please. It should be "scarcely", not "scarce" and a quark is an astronomical object - the word that should have been used is "quirk".