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Jondor


Fabulous, darling.

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Every year, Rarity takes on too many Nightmare Night costume orders and winds up working herself silly and sleeping through all the festivities. Sweetie Belle is feeling left out when all of her friends' older siblings will be going with them this year, but Rainbow Dash is curiously gung ho to come up with a plan to fix that problem.

My (first) entry for the RariDash Spooktacular Writing Contest, and third place winner!. I also have a second entry. (The two stories are not otherwise related.)

Editing assistance by Azusa and Titanium Dragon.

Cover art vector credits (a lot):
Twilight, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, CMC, Spike, Luna, Pumpkin

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 20 )

Yeah I'll read this tomorrow. I'll just slap it on the faves list, I'm sure it belongs there.

I'm sleepy.

The streamlining helped the flow of the story, and the edits to the earlier portions definitely made it parse a lot better than it did before.

Still not totally sold on the story, but it feels a lot better than it did last night.

Good luck in the contest! I have yet to read the other entries, though, I'm afraid. :twilightsheepish:

Very enjoyable. Made my evening, just what I needed after today. Well done!

:yay:

More :yay:s pending.
Next Chapter!

I take it this means you don't need me to review the rest of this...:fluttershysad:

“What if I can get Fluttershy to help?” Rainbow asked, grinning almost too broadly.

Nope, Fluttershy's going to be busy smoochin' Pinkie. :trollestia:

I was entrusted with the sacred honor by your friend and mine, most excitable Pinkie Pie, so that she might be free to soothe dear Fluttershy’s worries and fears for the night.

Yeeeep, smooches.

And Discord running a haunted house is a pretty great idea!

Hurray, TwiJack marriage! :pinkiehappy:








Oh, and the RariDash was pretty cute too. :twilightsheepish: (But no, really, that was adorable all around. I think TwiJack ended up having better chemistry in this though.)
Also, did I see a hint of ScootaBelle there? Or do I need to get my shipping goggles re calibrated? :twilightoops:

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My own personal timetable caught up with me. I needed to make sure I got it submitted for the contest on time. :applejackconfused:

Sorry about that. :ajsleepy:

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Nah, it's okay. It's my own fault for getting distracted editing my own story.

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I admit nothing. :trollestia:

*whistles innocently*

I'm pretty sure that every time Discord smiles, Celestia raises the Defcon level in all of Equestria.

Very cute and sweet. Bravo.

i love that this story has my 3 favorite ships in it, TwiJack RariDash and Pinkieshy
i really like what Rarity and Rainbow saw in that place...

I think I just gained an new ship.

So what about Spike and the CMC?

Awesome, just awesome. I'm speechless. Kudos do the authour
You sir have earned a trio of moustaches and a follow :moustache::moustache::moustache:

A few moments later, her eyes opened to see Scootaloo calling her name and running frantically around the trunk of the tree she’d crashed in. She groaned a bit, as her eyes rolled around in her skull. “Rule two:” she slurred, “make sure you watch where you’re going, so you don’t crash.”

Okay, this sent my brain on a slightly strange tangent. First thought, ''Watch out for that tree!'' And from George of the Jungle, I went to Loony Tunes, with, ''I will hug him and squeeze him and love him and name him George.''

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