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Jondor


Fabulous, darling.

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Rarity muses about Rainbow Dash's looks while getting her dressed for a costume gala.

My second (last minute) entry for the RariDash Spooktacular Writing Contest.

My first (third place winning) entry is here. (The stories are not otherwise related.)

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Comments ( 22 )

Short and sweet. Really enjoyed it. Made me feel all mushy inside :heart:

:rainbowkiss:
That's was cute!!:scootangel:

Daww. :heart:

This was really nice. I love romance stories, and I especially like the ones that are short and still manage to be diabetes inducingly sweet.

Thanks for writing this. I hope you place well in the contest. :twilightsmile:

Yikes. Love is in the air and Rarity's got it bad :ajsmug:

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Very nice and cute :pinkiehappy:

Ah, to be young and in love.

Short, sweet, and to the point. Nice work, dude.

Well done for a last minute entry.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Thankee. :heart:

I kept counting down the time left until midnight, hoping I'd get off work with enough time to finish. I did... just barely.

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Hehe, I recall that night.

You kept agonizing about it, too.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Adorable, but it leaves me wanting more, so much more. :(

Comment posted by TheAuraGuardian deleted Jan 15th, 2014

This is the sort of fluff that I like in my romance stories, short or long

I didn't really sense an overall purpose to the story here. It was plenty of details that could have led to something interesting. 5/10

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Thank you for at least leaving a comment before downvoting. Sorry the story wasn't to your liking. It was written for a contest deadline in under an hour, so it is a bit sparse.

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I see. I would recommend to stretch the story out and have a definite conclusion somewhere. I think the story can work. It has enough details to support that. What sort of contest was it?

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It was the first RariDash contest around last Halloween. I had another entry in already and got the idea to write this one up an hour before the deadline.

Since it was a contest entry and it's a year old, I don't have much desire to change it as is, but I can always keep the content in mind for future stories.

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I have to give you an "A" for effort. I wouldn't have even bothered with a mere hour left.

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