Rarity muses about Rainbow Dash's looks while getting her dressed for a costume gala.
My second (last minute) entry for the RariDash Spooktacular Writing Contest.
My first (third place winning) entry is here. (The stories are not otherwise related.)
Rarity muses about Rainbow Dash's looks while getting her dressed for a costume gala.
My second (last minute) entry for the RariDash Spooktacular Writing Contest.
My first (third place winning) entry is here. (The stories are not otherwise related.)
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Short and sweet. Really enjoyed it. Made me feel all mushy inside
That's was cute!!
Daww.
This was really nice. I love romance stories, and I especially like the ones that are short and still manage to be diabetes inducingly sweet.
Thanks for writing this. I hope you place well in the contest.
Cute
Yikes. Love is in the air and Rarity's got it bad
D'awww!
Very nice and cute
Ah, to be young and in love.
Short, sweet, and to the point. Nice work, dude.
Well done for a last minute entry.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Thankee.
I kept counting down the time left until midnight, hoping I'd get off work with enough time to finish. I did... just barely.
3443917
Hehe, I recall that night.
You kept agonizing about it, too.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Cute!
Adorable, but it leaves me wanting more, so much more. :(
This is the sort of fluff that I like in my romance stories, short or long
I didn't really sense an overall purpose to the story here. It was plenty of details that could have led to something interesting. 5/10
5163025
Thank you for at least leaving a comment before downvoting. Sorry the story wasn't to your liking. It was written for a contest deadline in under an hour, so it is a bit sparse.
5163047
I see. I would recommend to stretch the story out and have a definite conclusion somewhere. I think the story can work. It has enough details to support that. What sort of contest was it?
5163189
It was the first RariDash contest around last Halloween. I had another entry in already and got the idea to write this one up an hour before the deadline.
Since it was a contest entry and it's a year old, I don't have much desire to change it as is, but I can always keep the content in mind for future stories.
5163202
I have to give you an "A" for effort. I wouldn't have even bothered with a mere hour left.
You can has review!
Cute.