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Craine


An old writer polishing his ways, giving feedback, and helping fellow authors. Nothing more.

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The mind thinks what it shouldn't. The heart races when it shouldn't. And the eyes roam where they shouldn't. Soon enough, everything catches up to Applejack, and she wonders to herself, 'How could I be so stupid?'

Rated "Teen" for suggestive themes, alcohol use, and heavy lime. Enjoy, fellow AppleDashers! Enjoy!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )

This is far better than the downvotes and lack of comments would suggest. Don't let them get you down! It was a very enjoyable read.

Indeed it was. It's always good to read some fresh squeezed AppleDash.

Interesting introspective insights from Applejack here.

Not my favorite way to ship these two, but it was okay.
Gotta admit it did not hold my interest too well and if it was much longer I would have given up. Don't know what to tell you beyond that.
Keep at it I guess.

Winter Song: I liked it :pinkiehappy:

Of course you would,

Winter Song: What that suppose to mean?

You like any story that contain yuri

Winter Song: Well I'm a lesbian of course I would like a mare on mare story!

It's not because you're gay that mean you're force to like a story about two girl kissing!

Winter Song: Well I liked this one! So I will give a thumb up you can't stop me bucking prude

What did you call me?!

Everything was perfect, I recommend it! :raritystarry:

Oh this was wonderful! :pinkiehappy:

2555532 Yay! The message has been received!

2555613 Fresh-squeezed AppleDash is a good way to put it. I can't tell you how much aspirin it took to avoid the RotL trip.

2555687 Honesty... is the BEST! Glad to know I can still change styles every now and again. Thanks for commenting, friend. :twilightsmile:

2555742 Respect the yuri ship! RESPECT IT!

2555804 Heeeee! :twilightblush:

2555857 Thank you! I tried.

This was really cute - I especially liked the singing bit and how it brought everyone together. Singing old songs in large groups, however offkey, has a strange way of doing that :derpytongue2: So yeah, thanks for a fun and entertaining read :pinkiehappy:

That was great. Especially when they were singing. Is there going to be a second chapter.

lol rump :rainbowlaugh:

Ahem... now that I've grown back up I really enjoyed this fun, albeit short, jaunt in the lives of another appledash episode. It was well rounded, exciting and funny. great job :ajsmug:

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Oh! Why, thank you. :twilightsmile: Though, I must admit, I may never do another singing bit. Thought I'd try something new. I did. And well... well. :ajbemused:

Comment posted by ShiningNova deleted May 14th, 2013

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I enjoyed the song though , were the lyrics yours?
Sounds flogging Molly like

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Yep! If they weren't, I'd credit the one who owned them. :moustache:... Because I'm cool like that.

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Question though. Who in Merry Andrew's Hell is 'Molly'?

Comment posted by ShiningNova deleted May 14th, 2013

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Flogging Molly is a band

The lyrics just sounded like one of their kind of songs. In my head at least.

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Huh. Well, I'll be damned. :coolphoto:

This really deserves a lot more likes. And a lot more comments. And more love! I haven't read a story like this before and I enjoyed it with everything in me! I just....ahh! It was brilliant! :pinkiehappy:

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I adore your profile image :raritystarry:

Whatever planet Applejack was on, the sharp sound brought her back, and reminded her to breath. Her eyes fell upon Rainbow’s backside, which swayed a little more than it had earlier.

FimFic authors generally seem not to know when to use the pluperfect tense.

Comment posted by LurkingToRead deleted Aug 28th, 2023
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