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Remember kids, eat your veggies, go to school, and murder all your enemies.... I murder all my enemies....

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It was a pain to proofread.
Send smaller parts next time :twilightsheepish:

“We see thee have been freed from thou’s curse.”

WAT?

3588812 Sayian proctologist thy name is Vegeta!! :flutterrage:

p.s. straighten out Goku please

“Well, Daring, I can honestly say that you’re a cocksucker,” Ares said,

Wrong name me thinks.

AND ON THIS DAY CELESTIA DIED OF ACUTE SUGAR INTOXICATION.

AND THE WORLD REJOICED>

You know, if you're going to use a completely safe artist's work in your clopfiction story, you should at least link the source.

http://sophiecabra.deviantart.com/art/Daring-Do-411821816

And ask for permission from the artists, because believe it or not, some artists do not like to see their art as the cover to a smutty clopfiction.

No story, he says.
What a silly little man you are.

3590888

Believe it or not, I did get permission from the artists.

>3591019

I am not little! I just have a growth problem:twilightangry2:

In all honesty I wouldn't have been surprised if Daring went back to the temple with a hired group of construction ponies and leveled the damn thing and built a complex of low income apartment buildings where it once stood.

What the princesses didn't tell her was that the real "puppet" master behind the jar quest was...
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Now that would have been a hell of a twist.

It was good I liked it but one thing that bothers me is the ending.

But I can't complain it was a all right ending.

How was the second chapter posted two days before the first?

Now I want to read about Augustus' adventures and travels of Equis.

...please? :applecry:

3593107

Magic! :twilightsmile:

Or maybe it's just a weird side-effect of extensive editing and/or taking down chapters temporarily... Or something to do with the changes we've been seeing to the UI.

Please do not read inside the spoiler tags, they contain a less satisfactory answer.

That is a real good shaggy dog story.

With the shag. :twilightblush:

3591093 blasphemy
I shall never call thee prince unless thy has the princess by thy side.
:trollestia: this be the princess



just take her so I don't have to :facehoof:

This story is very good.
Its very good.

I like the "listen im telling you a story" format, flows really well and the characters are funny and interesting.

up and Fav!

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Well that is very good. Excuse me for judging.

You still need to properly link the source though.

...I'm taking a spanish class, 3-4.
I SHOULDA KNOWN :raritydespair::facehoof:

“I finally have the greatest chocolate-chip cookies recipe in the world!”

......

...Really?
*sigh*
Awesome story though :P

Searching for plot:
:pinkiecrazy:!?##>% FATTALLERROR 404 !//;NOT FOUND###**!!??# :derpytongue2:

Seriously? Like... WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK! I'm not angry... just... so very, very confused... what the fahk? :derpyderp2:

"C is for cookie, which is good enough for me!"

Oh bravo good sir. This definitely deserves to be featured EVERYWHERE

(Exasperated voice) no, no, No he has escaped Sesame Street there all doomed

Quick, call up Tickle Me Elmo, The Grouch, and Big Bird.

Its time to make the Baker Count. :pinkiecrazy:

:ajbemused:
I was expecting something... click-related, to be honest. :p... After all, the cookie portals have to go somewhere, right...?

That cookie recipe actually didn't take me by surprise. I mean i wasn't expecting a cookie recipe per-say just a dessert in general

I for one, welcome our new cookie munching overlord...

Well, this is odd...

Dominic: No Sh*t.

John: Yeah... Very strange indeed.

3650198 Alex! What are you doing on the post-Equestria creation communication portal?

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