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Line breaks, while not required, does help.
Any, I suppose I shall start reading...
Edit: That was disturbing. Very disturbing. Well done.
Too quick, too blunt, too pointless. If you wanna squick people out, you need to slow down. Anyway, this is just dumb.
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i'll take that comment and sleep with it at night
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you know what would be surprising? if oneo f this kill fics actually ended without someone dead. sighs.
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how can you call it a kill fic without someone dying?
How the heck did she get her cutiemark from being raped? -_- Blatant gore fic, pointless, and misleading description. It said 'will Applejack get to ehr before it is too late'? You don't even spend any time on that aspect, something that could have made it into at least half a story. You don't capture emotions other then fear. Heres a recollection of this story: applebloom is kidnapped. applebloom is raped. applejack bursts in randomly with little to no explanation as to why she found her.
Game over, Try again.
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don't worry still love you
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well done but a little to gory for me so, based on how well it is written thumbs up, but, no fave because of aforementioned gore.
3558118 don't like it? Fine.
Try and censor it? Go fuck yourself.
I don't like rape, but I won't stop people from writing about it. I don't like FoE, but I won't stop people from writing about it. I fucking HATE Nyx and Past Sins, but people can write about it all they want, because it's their own god damn fictional story.
So don't try and pull a curtain over something because you don't like it. People have the right to write whatever they want, no matter how dumb it is.
If you think differently, kindly fuck yourself with a rusty sawblade.
3558293 i totally agree
Okay, first of all, I'm shaking. That was scary beyond belief. Second, I teared up twice
this was very well written, favorite and thumbs up.
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This is all very true. However, it doesn't change the fact that this story is woefully undercooked, rushed, and poorly realized.
Author, I'm tying to not be rude, probably failing, but this story is just so... exploitative. And I get that may be why you wanted to write it, sort of a grindhouse type deal. But the execution is off. There's no tension, no plot, really. It's just Applebloom getting fucked up. I would never tell someone what to write, so if you just wanna do a Sweet Apple Massacre ripoff, fine. But just remember that even in the goriest of gorefics, there is potential for storytelling.
3558474 Well, I didn't say it was good; I just said that that one guy was a fucking idiot for wanting to censor people.
That was.........I don't know
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Ah, too right. Carry on, O Holy One!
Haven't even read this fic and I already want to slap somepony, cmon guys!!! SwordSymphony: stop you read the warnings and ratings, you could have stopped reading, and YOU were the one to navigate the site, ignoring innocent, cute stories, you wemt here, don't like it, fine but I like this tyoe of stuff (haven't read it, but the comparison to sweat apple masacre gives me an idea)
Okay, after reading, ummm...what? The writing style was to casual, what was with the part when you said "he cut off the last ear" there are only two, correct? Then please say "the other ear" or an equivalent. On another hand, the Appljack part...not a fan, too much foreshadowing for such a brief appearance, the dramatic death was a bit over the top. I only criticize because I love you!!! Also next time, be clearer on the whole boss sex scene, it read as if the vagina and uterous came out of AB
Haven't read it yet, but I thought it was funny enough to mention that when I saw this in the New Stories menu, I thought it reminded me of Scootaloo's Master. Didn't even notice who the author was at the time, but now that I have, no wonder it reminds me of SM.
[EDIT] Read it now, it was pretty good, but that's coming from someone who likes mindless gore. For senseless gorefic lovers this is great, for story seekers, not so much.
so... what i got from the ending... is that... Apple Bloom was AJ's daughter?
It was depressing. It was actually very bad, had to skip to the end completely. like it tells none how she got kidnapped or anything, coulda been better.
Ending did make me cry cus i
applebloom, and weird thing is i found this whilst looking up ROMANCE. yeah ROMANCE. how the buck do i get to this from romance? 
i dint evin cry probably cus i honestly hate AB but it was good
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your right there was room for plenty of story telling, but this was completely different from sweet apple massacre, at least apple bloom got justice in this, in most of the gore fics how many times do the captors get it in the end? not very many
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pretty much that was the idea
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pet's head
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Also a tragedy.
Well, I see we're going back to that place again... Well, since you brought it up, it seems like kind of a waste letting her die so easily after all that. I almost want to know what could possibly be left going forward from that point...
Some people just want to watch fillies be tortured. I'm one such person, therefore, I enjoyed this. Well done.
Look im, sorry for doing this, I see gruesome fics constantly and usually don't leave an outburst in the comments, but this...no, just...no no no no no, I'll give you points for your writing style and your...a nice word for it would be "creativity" but dear luna above this just too much. I had to shut my computer and think about my life for an hour or so while pacing around my home and doing yard work because I believe I was in some form of shell shock. So, if you were going for shock value...bravo, shock achieved.
I made it about half way through and decided to stop. It became clear that this story must frowns upon sex and faps to pain and gore. You are one of my top favorite authors but I'm just into foalcon that begins and ends with a cum soaked filly or colt. Hopefully your next story is about a lovable fuckable cum dumpster
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that actually sounds like a fun one i'll add it to my list
Would have been much more fun if Apple Bloom survived. A foal living without teeth, without one eye, with scars all over her body — what can be more fun?
A bit boring, but that's been already explained in the comments.
I feel bad for liking this story... BUT I did it anyways!
Description, picture and rating bar makes me want to read this story. I'm a terrible human being...
What the hell is wrong with this story
? I like it 
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Right on, my depraved compatriot. I have no idea how you move forward from that, but I would have totally been down for watching it play out.
Oh well; a girl can dream, after all...
This is fucking sick,
yet somehow I love it.
Eh, it was a bit rushed but it wasn't bad.
One question I had in my head for a couple of days since you posted this story:
What are you planning on doing to Sweetie Belle?
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nothing as of yet
3569125make sweetie the world's best cum dumpster!
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sounds like an idea
3569125 They key word in there is 'yet'
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well first off i'm doing a humanXlyra fic and then i have a good version of a apple bloom slave story, which actually has a story
as for sweetie belle, i don't have anything like this in the works for her, if i come up with an idea i'll probably get around to it sooner or later
3572703 I will be waiting, As for the lyra fic what can we expect?
or is that something you're not gonna spoil?
Word missing, other than that pretty good.