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Applebloom has nightmares, which is causing her to go insane. This is like Rocket to Insanity, but a Sweet Apple Massacre version. I am focusing on more sadness, and some comedy. If you haven't read SAM you are missing out my friend. I hope you enjoy this story.
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Haven't read this yet, but that unnecessary apostrophe in the chapter title is already turning me off it.
Good start!
I have read the fanfic and let me say it is very disgusting
But keep up the good work!
I think you should try to weed out at least most of the typos before posting, it would be more enjoyable to read. The dialogue was also a bit boring, you could try to improve that.Also, you lost me for a moment when you basically told us "Apple Bloom was eating and then she woke up". I mean come on... At least tell us she went to bed before you have her wake up. I'm also a bit disappointed. You told us this would be sort of like Rocket to insanity, but this is not even close to that level. And one more thing. Please don't add your own comments to the story. I mean the ones you had in parenthesis like that (duh). It really distracts the reader and it makes the story seem like it doesn't take itself seriously. Sorry if I sound harsh and overly negative but I do think this needs fixing. Also, these are just my opinions and might not be the Truth. That is all.
One more thing. I think this has promise, it just needs to be given a bit more work. I wouldn't bother commenting on hopeless fics after all. :) Good luck with this one!
Good start, but please start a new paragraph after someone new starts talking. It gets rather confusing
Let m,e check my next one better, I'll edit some of the typos, but this is one of my few fanfictions i'm working on. Thanks for the support.
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What did ya expect? i'm an amateur at these things.
This is really good so far. I can't wait to see where it will lead! You've done a great job! There were on a few typos. I've read Sweet Apples Massacre and found it disgusting. Hopefully you'll be able to dispell that story's vileness from our hearts and minds with this story. Keep up the good work!
What's with all the low ratings?
*Shudders* ugh sweet apple massacure the only parts I could NOT stand were the tounge eating and sweetie belle having to shouve her hor up scootaloo!!!
Please make more, I beg of you!
please?
This story is a great sequel to sweet apple massacre i luv the fact applebloom has gone insane
i want to see more if u do make more
YAY! if u dont 
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That description escalated quickly
And I haven't read sweet apple massacre because I can't EVEN FIND IT!
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other 
fic, and not very well-written.
If you still want to read it, go ahead. Be warned though, it's probably worse than... that
YO IM GONNA FLARFIN